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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Krenna
Krenna looked up curiouslt. “Huh,” she said, “nice. Doubt it would seriously damage me though.” She started walking forwards. “Uh, that looks dangerous,” said Loop. “Shut up,” said Krenna, “I know what I’m doing.”
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Note that nobody else would here Loop. Also, Krenna could heal from a bullet wound, unless it…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @acancello @esther-c @rae @highscribeofaetherium @keilah-h (I think that’s everyone
What do you think about this order of the areas?
Jungle
Cavern
Swamp
Mountain
Sky
Ocean
Desert
Tundra
Volcano
Btw, do you think they should just go straight through each area, or would they go back in between some of them? P…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
@jonas @highscribeofaetherium @rae
Fracture
He heard distant footsteps, but didn’t think much of them. He was too engrossed in his mourning ceremony to give them much thought.
That is, until someone nearly kicked him in the head.
“AAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHH!” He screamed, his voice cracking horribly halfway through his scream. He jumped to his feet,…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery started the topic Blade of the Void in the forum Short Story Critiques 2 years, 10 months ago
@highscribeofaetherium @thearcaneaxiom @rae @savannah_grace2009 @grcr @hanako @acancello @hybridlore @anyone
This is a short story I had to write for my creative writing class. I thought I’d share it here as well. I’m not necessarily looking for feedback–I got plenty already–but if you have any thoughts, feel free to share them.
Blade of the…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 2 years, 11 months ago
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Ellis
Ellis woke up feeling surprisingly refreshed, despite being attacked with pillows twice.
He sat down at the table, across from Nahim. Kate appeared a few minutes later and sat down to his right.
“So,” said Ellis, “what do you suppose we’re gonna do today?”
“Probably get in another fight,” yawned Kate, “judging by your track reco…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
We could have the first dragon be like that, because they don’t only have to fight the leader dragons. Maybe it could even be one that the Lillenings captured for them to practice on, lol.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
lol
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 2 years, 11 months ago
If someone ever looks at my browser history…
“WHY were you looking at shoulder fractures and gunshot wounds?!?!”
Seriously though… sometimes I laugh at the things I have to look up when I’m writing lol.
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Loopy replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 2 years, 11 months ago
@rae lol those are great
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
@jonas @rae @highscribeofaetherium
I think the groups look good… Kari gets along with most people so finding a particularly conflicting partner for her would be hard. Plus my schedule’s busier so it’s probably better if she has a role that’s not super important at the moment. I might have a chance to pop on here tomorrow morning before I leave…[Read more]
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Oh dear. Now I’m worried XD
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
The trick is getting Zahlin to acknowledge the existence of said vows.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Okay that works.
You said other bladed weapons. He could do spears or something. Also, I’m not an expert on metal working, but I don’t think that swords start out sharp, I don’t see how they could, in which case he’d be fine.
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Ok, sounds good.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Yeah, okay. I kind of thought that they were intentionally being put in antagonistic groups to force them to work together, but I guess Fennin would have the same problem we’re having, so let’s say:
Nahim – Zahlin
Ellis – Ottoline
Kate – Nora
Snake – Kaine
Kari – Amir
Hugo – Hedieh
That sound good? What exactly will the teams have…[Read more]
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
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