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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
I need to turn this into a meme somehow:
“Zahlin would help, I have no doubt.” – Nahim
“Zahlin has no loyalties but to himself and to that sword, he is not to be trusted.” – also Nahim
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
And is it that sixth sense that lets him sense Krenna’s splits? ‘Cause they don’t displace air–they’re completely intangible.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
Technically, anyone would feel air displacement as a part of the sense of touch, right? But Glace has an enhanced sense of when air gets displaced?
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
what did I miss about teams of two? I see them above, but what are they doing together?
I’m not entirely sure. Nahim and Zahlin will be forging weapons. I guess Fennin will explain it when @rae writes that RP.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
Krenna
Loop fuzzed away again, though Krenna could still see her, as a man in a mask entered the room. Krenna glared at the girl, grew short crystal blades from her hands in a flash, and then let the crystals disappear.
She turned to the man in the mask. “Finally,” she said, “someone who looks useful.”
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
Krenna
Krenna looked up curiouslt. “Huh,” she said, “nice. Doubt it would seriously damage me though.” She started walking forwards. “Uh, that looks dangerous,” said Loop. “Shut up,” said Krenna, “I know what I’m doing.”
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Note that nobody else would here Loop. Also, Krenna could heal from a bullet wound, unless it…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
@savannah_grace2009 @acancello @esther-c @rae @highscribeofaetherium @keilah-h (I think that’s everyone
What do you think about this order of the areas?
Jungle
Cavern
Swamp
Mountain
Sky
Ocean
Desert
Tundra
Volcano
Btw, do you think they should just go straight through each area, or would they go back in between some of them? P…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
@jonas @highscribeofaetherium @rae
Fracture
He heard distant footsteps, but didn’t think much of them. He was too engrossed in his mourning ceremony to give them much thought.
That is, until someone nearly kicked him in the head.
“AAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHH!” He screamed, his voice cracking horribly halfway through his scream. He jumped to his feet,…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery started the topic Blade of the Void in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 years ago
@highscribeofaetherium @thearcaneaxiom @rae @savannah_grace2009 @grcr @hanako @acancello @hybridlore @anyone
This is a short story I had to write for my creative writing class. I thought I’d share it here as well. I’m not necessarily looking for feedback–I got plenty already–but if you have any thoughts, feel free to share them.
Blade of the…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 3 years ago
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
Ellis
Ellis woke up feeling surprisingly refreshed, despite being attacked with pillows twice.
He sat down at the table, across from Nahim. Kate appeared a few minutes later and sat down to his right.
“So,” said Ellis, “what do you suppose we’re gonna do today?”
“Probably get in another fight,” yawned Kate, “judging by your track reco…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
We could have the first dragon be like that, because they don’t only have to fight the leader dragons. Maybe it could even be one that the Lillenings captured for them to practice on, lol.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
lol
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 3 years ago
If someone ever looks at my browser history…
“WHY were you looking at shoulder fractures and gunshot wounds?!?!”
Seriously though… sometimes I laugh at the things I have to look up when I’m writing lol.
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Loopy replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 3 years ago
@rae lol those are great
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
@jonas @rae @highscribeofaetherium
I think the groups look good… Kari gets along with most people so finding a particularly conflicting partner for her would be hard. Plus my schedule’s busier so it’s probably better if she has a role that’s not super important at the moment. I might have a chance to pop on here tomorrow morning before I leave…[Read more]
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
Oh dear. Now I’m worried XD
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