Ruth

@rae

No, girl, you’re fine, it just looks so much like GRCR’s style, lol.

@rae

Are Fennin and the Queen still there, or did they leave? Zahlin has some words for Fennin.

@rae

No, you didn’t botch him at all.

@rae

Lol. It’s mainly because it is named ‘Character Party’ but is no longer anything resembling that. It should be called ‘Character Adventuring Party’ lol.

@rae @princesachronicle22 @lightoverdarkness6

Jack 

“I don’t believe so…” he glanced back at his other companions to see if they possibly did.

@rae Ok so I have three characters in this group who are all siblings: Jack, Cody, and Kate. They all have two little horns on their heads like a fawn, and they all wear their bangs over their eyes. Also, they have country accents.

@lightoverdarkness6 @princesachonicle22

Kate

A boy stumbled into view and suddenly froze as he saw Kate and…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009 @grcr @rae @mineralizedwritings

Thanks you so much guys!! All your advice has helped so much! I feel much more confident about editing this chapter now. ❤️

(And Rae, I would never get rid of the donut scene EVER. I love it too. 🥰😁)

@highscribeofaetherium @rae @savannah_grace2009

We can’t let this RP die! Who wants to go next? Anyone want to add another character?

@rae

I don’t care. You can do it.

@everyone

So we’re introducing the villains? @rae do you want to write an RP to introduce the location? (We can wait till we’re done with this scene first if you want.)

I’ll write up the description of my villain later.

@rae

Hello! Mostly everyone is going shopping for fancy clothes for the dance coming up, except for Caly and my characters, who are going on a hunt for a somewhat evil pixie.

@rae

I know what villain I’ll add, but I don’t have time tonight.

@rae

What’s the first paragraph of your book?

So, the first paragraph doesn’t have much info in it since it’s only a few lines, but I’ll share the original first chapter so you can see what I’m talking about. (Hopefully. XD) In a day or two, I’m hoping to have an alternate first chapter written, so I may share that just to see if y’all think…[Read more]

I’d love some help if you guys have any tips or advice to contribute 👆😊

@freedomwriter76 @smiley @hybridlore @whalekeeper @highscribeofaetherium @euodia-vision @savannah_grace2009 @grcr @lightoverdarkness6 @mineralizedwritings @keilah-h @rae @thearcaneaxiom @anyone-else!

@rae

I have to go now, bye.`

@rae

Zahlin

Zahlin sidestepped Nahim’s lunge. The Sword spoke for the first time since the fight had broken out. “ONE OF YOU RUN FOR FENNIN! NOW!” It shouted at the two onlookers. Out of the corner of his eye Zahlin saw someone disappear out the door.

Zahlin caught Nahim’s arm and slammed him into the anvil. Nahim twisted, leveling his blade a…[Read more]

@rae

Okay, I figured it was something like that. Sort of like how lightsabers work.

(Disclaimer: I’m not a starwars fan at all, but I do know that.)

@rae

Oh, yeah, I just remembered something I keep forgetting to ask: are all crystal swords green, or do they come in other colors?

Might seem random, but I keep forgetting to ask about it, lol.

@rae

Ah, those were the good ol’ days…