Ruth

@jonas @rae

I added a few sentences that hopefully resolve it a little better? I’m not sure. Do you still think it’s missing something?

… I can’t believe I didn’t see it before—who he was. The suspicion has grown inside of me for weeks, strengthening with each day that passed. When the guards disappeared from the marketplace. When the curfe…

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What’s a menthol?

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Alright! XD Thanks, I appreciate it.

@rae Hehe ok. I can rp that soon

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Yeah I had way too much fun writing it XD

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I think I get it. I’m probably always going to read it in my head as “realm” with an n (nothing sounds wrong about that to me) just cause that’s how it looks. So it’s basically just that there’s a bit of separation between the vowels in the middle? Or do you actually pronounce a sharp “EE” sound in there? Is it more like the word “real”, but…[Read more]

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I can’t think of anything right now, (although I do still have to introduce my new character), but I might later. If someone else wants to, go ahead.

@rae

The story overall was good. I’m not sure the framing device you used was necessary. There are a few typos and awkward sentences, but I won’t bother pointing them out unless you would like me to. I feel like you were a bit heavy on getting the “moral” across. It might be better to let Nahim/the reader figure it out on his/their own. The act…[Read more]

@grcr

Oooh I love it!!

@rae

He sounds really cool!

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Aww, that’s so sweet of Chase <3

Sef

Chase smiled, and it made her heart skip a beat.

No. 

I am not falling for him. 

I’m not. 

But he smiled again, and she knew it was hopeless.

She was falling fast.

@rae

XD

Hugo

“Right.” Her older brother seemed easygoing enough, if a little combat-centric and intimidating to some.

The two headed off into the mass. A slightly faster beat played, with just a touch of syncopation. Not all out, but energetic enough to sent a shiver down Hugo’s spine.

“It’s my turn to teach you a dance.” He backed away…[Read more]

@rae @grcr @esther-c @acancello @freedomwriter76

Here’s a moodboard I did for my new WIP, this is Rylee’s:

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Thank you so much for encouraging me! <333

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🤣❤️ It depends on what you mean by falling in love!! He likes her and would love to know her better.

I know, not head over heels yet, but he’s had lots of interactions with other girls so he’s used to initial heart flutters. He comes from a society where you go out on casual dates all the time. It takes a while for him to imprint on one gir…[Read more]

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I LOVE that board!! ❤️❤️ It looks great!!

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Hugo

It took a moment for Hugo to realize Nar had accepted, and when he did, his posture loosened. He let the anticipation in his eyes dull to a faint glimmer, hiding twin flames of excitement. What fun! “You don’t have to wear black! That’s just what I already have in my wardrobe. Absolutely anything will do.”

@rae

Oh! 😅 Well, thanks for reading!!

@rae

Aww that would be such a sweet idea!!! (I bet Callie would love to help him with that….haha)

@rae

Okay, I’ll do that eventually.

Hugo

When Nar mentioned Nahim’s mask of hate – and as Nahim made a fuss over his dragon on the side, raising his voice at the desk woman – Hugo pressed a hand to his chest with repressed laughter. Masks of hate were a fashion statement in Lovedream, and to see that again, here of all places, warmed his hea…[Read more]