Ruth

@mineralizedwritings

Riiiiight I get that 😂 I can’t actually think of any good romance-ish books to recommend. And I’m glad you aren’t so unsure of what makes a relationship good or not – also glad I do. I know a Christian girl who loves the romance genre, and honestly I’ve wanted to ask her what she thinks is a healthy relationship, because…[Read more]

@loopylin

Okay, I’ll stop complaining about myself. And you can also write whatever length you want XP

@rae

Btw, Cal isn’t annoyed at Chase directly, just the fact that Mars did exactly as they expected and tried to help someone like him.

Calvin

No wonder Mars spent time with this kid at some point; he’s a sadness sundae with extra cherr…[Read more]

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Felicity 

“Well, is there anywhere else to look? Other than that address you were sent.”

My brain is empty today so my rps are short

@rae

You do whatever you want 😉

Oki here we go *sets up all the dramatic drama*

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Good for him 😝 I would be worried otherwise

@loopylin

Calvin

“No.” Calvin shot Babs a look. “I wouldn’t doubt he went into an alley. But if you’re implying he got attacked in one… no way. Not a chance. He spends eighty percent of his time in alleys at home, fly-jumping on the walls, and…[Read more]

@rae

How is Fennin going to not die if it blows up?

@rae

That’s good 😝 I would be concerned for his safety otherwise

@loopylin

Calvin

“No.” Calvin shot Babs a look. “I wouldn’t doubt he went into an alley. But if you’re implying he got attacked in one… no way. Not a chance. He spends eighty percent of his time in alleys at home, fly-jumping on the walls, and he absolutely loves them. It woul…[Read more]

@rae

Hi Ruee!

I am not offended that you don’t like jello (Honestly, I don’t like it as much as I used too), as long as you aren’t offended that I don’t like root beer floats. Most everyone I know loves them, except me 😂

I love your character’s name, it’s so unique! I’m one of those people who searches up “340 unique baby names” on the i…[Read more]

@rae

You can

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Oh I see.

Halo is a sci-fi Xbox game that is just pure awesomeness!

You know I’ve probably  stubbed every toe on every foot there is!

@rae

That does make sense! Alright, jungle dragon, bring it on!

@rae

Ello!

Sounds cool! uh (I kinda like jello hehehe)

I’m working on my own book about several warrior teams or something like that, and a Halo fan fiction!

To be honest, I don’t have one.

Uncountable!

No, but I’ve probably stubbed the same toe on the same wall seven different times!!! lol

@rae

So what happens now? Dennin has the stone, but the jungle dragon is still alive.

@loopylin

Aw, yes, he needs to recognize that concussions even exist.

Oh, Felicity has a short fuse? XD

@rae

That’s hilarious, because Mars (Marcel’s nickname btw) would see Chase as the one to protect in any situation, even if Mars was the one in trouble XD

Calvin

“He’s missing.” Calvin kept his voice level. “But there’s no need to blame…[Read more]

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Ellis

Ellis scrambled to his feet and grabbed the green stone off of the ground as Nahim tried to restrain Zash.

Ellus hesitated, not wanting to leave Nahim to fight alone, but then turned and ran. He had to get the stone to Fennin.

Zash

Zash managed to get some of his knives under the armored warrior pinning him down. With a heave, the…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @lightoverdarkness6 @hybridlore @whalekeeper @mineralizedwritings @smiley @savannah_grace2009 @rae @grcr @anyone-else

Sooo… I was working on some “character-building” the past day or so, and I’ve fixed my MCs’ character arcs/internal conflicts to tie into the theme more and so I can write them better/more accurately. (With a l…[Read more]

@loopylin @rae

Okay… he’s in the shop next to the dancing building, literally next door. Just so you girls know. Cal saw it in his POV before coming in for practice. Not that anyone knows 😅

Calvin

“Spot on.” Calvin standing nearby snapped his fingers, and strode over to join the two girls and interrogate the nervous boy. “What’s your name?…[Read more]

@rae

but I guess Sef isn’t there so… Whatever.

Oop, sorry, I assumed they started to switch partners like everyone else

@whalekeeper

I think you’re writing her pretty well except she probably isn’t completely calm rn. But she would be pretending to be Babs’ sake, so nvm, it’s good.

Felicity

“Like… angsty depressed teens? Or people who pretend they aren’t depressed, but then you look at them and you can clearly see that they… Ohhh wait, I think I see one.”…[Read more]

@rae

The writing you shared was a little depressing, but the characters weren’t melodramatic at least. I don’t pay much attention to punctuation as a writing problem. The art of melodrama is at an all time high here though. Like “He grabbed Nejin by the collar of his shirt, his eyes radiating hate, and rage.” After Nejin, a little boy he never…[Read more]