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HighScribe replied to the topic My short story in the forum Short Story Critiques 2 years, 3 months ago
So, Estelle has a Bible, but this seems to take place in the same universe as all/most of your stories. So is your sci-fi universe supposed to be the same as our universe?
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HighScribe replied to the topic My short story in the forum Short Story Critiques 2 years, 3 months ago
I really like it, you did a really nice job!
Although I would bring up the same thing as Jonas, about the setting and stuff.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic My short story in the forum Short Story Critiques 2 years, 3 months ago
Very nice, and I think it would work very well as a novella! The only thing I’m confused about is that it apparently takes place in a sci-fi world (since you mentioned other planets), but the setting seemed to be normal.
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Trailblazer replied to the topic My short story in the forum Short Story Critiques 2 years, 3 months ago
That is so beautiful! So raw and real and yet redemptive! I love it!
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freedom replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 2 years, 3 months ago
@theducktator @keilah-h @grcr @esther-c @koshka @rae @savannah_grace2009
An aesthetic for one of my future Novels, Still Good 💖
Characters:
Top left=Isabel (Wagner) Schind
Top right=Albert Wagner
Bottom left=Elias Wagner
Bottom right=Alan Williams

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-GRCR- replied to the topic My short story in the forum Short Story Critiques 2 years, 3 months ago
That… that really was beautiful! ❤️❤️❤️ Brought me to tears.
I think it’s really good and I like it how it is, but a novella wouldn’t be bad either!
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freedom replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 2 years, 3 months ago
@rae @koshka @keilah-h @theducktator @highscribeofaetherium @mineralizedwritings @anyone-else-idk-lollll
I found old aesthetics from a (mostly discarded) book idea if anyone wants to see, for fun
😂👀

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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
@mineralizedwritings Thank you very much for your thoughts!! 💖 @theducktator @rae @loopylin @whalekeeper @savannah_grace2009 @anyone-else-idk-lolllll
Y’all know how books usually have a dedication page? Well, I dedicated Freedom’s Fire to my family, but I wanted to know what everyone thought about this dedication.
This one is for Broken Sh…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
@rae That was a really sweet scene and I love all the side characters (Jenny especially) <3
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 2 years, 3 months ago
Nice board! I love the bird pics.
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
That was so sweet!
Congrats on almost 50k!
But Leon has to get his redemption first🫢🤫
Yesss, poor Leon.
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
@rae The baby 😭 And I don’t think it’s cringy at all! I very much love it <3 and poor Chase, the baby.
@rae @highscribeofaetherium @theducktator
Heh
Riker still has a bit of a journey ahead of him, but I’m in the final stretch of Broken Shackles (almost at 50k!!!) and I promise redemption is ahead 💖
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Enid replied to the topic WIP Questions in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
Tagging more people! @linus-smallprint @theshadow @jonas @lydibug @savannah_grace900 @highscribeofaetherium @mineralizedwritings @keilah-h @rae @loopylin @esther-c @smiley @princesachronicle22 @godlyfantasy12 @anyone
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HighScribe replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
Oh, I like your scene! It’s sweet (: I don’t think it’s cringey.
Although I do have one question. How is it only ten-thirty at night if they’re on their FIFTH movie? If each one was somewhere from an hour and a half to two hours, they would have had to have started in early to mid afternoon?
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
@princesachronicle22 @theshadow @rae @keilah-h
Stephen
Whacking a ball with a stick? “Baseball is a lot more fun than that quick definition made it sound. If anyone wants to know all the rules, please ask me later. I was one of the best pitchers on my high school team in Cincinnati. If you people and ducks are ever in the United States, you need…[Read more]
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freedom posted a new activity comment 2 years, 3 months ago
@rae ooh, are those your favs??👀
My favs have to be Aragorn, Legolas, Pippin, and Faramir 🤍 -
freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
Snippet of the scene I’m working on rn
(I’m in a writing sharing mood today😂)
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(fyi, there’s a chapter in between this and the last scene I shared, but I shared that chapter a while back and have edited it only a little, so 🤷♀️ but here’s this scene)
His world danced between reality and nightmares—memories. T…
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
We’ll give Riker a stuffed bunny and we’ll stick with the giraffe for Leon 🥰😂
and RAE, go build that time machine. It’s probably necessary.
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
Ooh, yes. A bunny is perfect for him.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
@princesachronicle22 @rae @theshadow @theducktator
Huntress/Sniper
“Help me out, good people…and ducks, who or what are cheeseburgers, baseball, memes, and pumpkin spice lattes? And in which galaxy is the United States of America, and is Australia the planet next to it? In return, I will tell you that Silvanis is one of so far only fifty-six sti…[Read more]
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Actually I meant profile pic order.
My fav list is Aragorn, Gandalf, the four hobbits, Faramir, Legolas and Gimli together, Boromir.