Ruth

@rae

I… completely forgot I was ever in this RP 😂

Yeah, I think I’ll be dropping out.

But I’m still stalking 👀

UPDATE TIME

@keilah-h @mineralizedwritings @rae @savannah_grace2009 @whalekeeper @loopylin @koshka @lightoverdarkness6 @ellette-giselle @highscribeofaetherium @esther-c @grcr @anyone-else-idk-lol

Freedom’s Fire is sooooooo close to publishing. Just waiting on the finalized cover designs, complete with the book blurb, and then it’ll all be set…[Read more]

@keilah-h @theducktator @rae @princesachronicle22

If it’s okay, I’m going to write an RP.

Trevor

“Good idea. Hey, Huntress, ya coming with us?” Sniper said. “I think I’ll stay here.” Huntress replied.

“Fine with me.” Sniper gestured for Trevor, Azalea, and the others that were going with him to follow.

“Ready to find out what’s going on her…[Read more]

@rae

Ok… here is mine!

@rae @grcr @esther-c

Haha, I’m glad y’all like them!! I have a few more I’ll put on here!

@Rae

Here’s my Tenz! I had a lot of fun drawing him. I get tired of drawing my own characters sometimes lol

Hope you like it 🙂

Also I made up some shoes for him bc you didn’t specify

@jonas JOIN ME BROTHER WE SHALL BE GREAT

@rae thank you for the compliment *bows dramatically* and for the update. I will be thinking up bully ideas, if anyone wants to join me…

@whalekeeper I didn’t tag you in the RP correctly

@rae Here’s my Tenz drawing! I decided to only do his head because otherwise it would’ve taken me hours to both draw and color.

@rae I’ve been observing for a while. Wanted to get to the actual dance bit

@rae

I’d RP if anyone wanted to do something.

@esther-c @savannah_grace2009 can I come to the rescue and make things interesting? 😈

@rae @everyone do we have bullies? Also how many people are actually writing here?

In the mean time with the few brain cells left from camp I will proceed to try to make something happen

@whaley

Kate

The boy on the shield stirred, murmured, and then screamed…[Read more]

@jonas @freed_and_redeemed @savannah_grace2009 @highscribeofaetherium @rae

btw, anyone interested in taking a look at the character boards I just finished up?

@rae

He does pretty well in the beginning, but then Vorgan uses Nahim’s greatest fear to break him. It’s the darkest hour in my book, and I haven’t written it fully yet.

Ooooo, love it!!! YES YES YES!! You have to post that scene as soon as you write it!!

@rae

For one, these aren’t normal swords. For two, for most Realn it’s a matter of learning the skill and carrying one for sake of tradition. Some have ancient blades, but that’s rare. Nahim wears one (actually two right now) cuz his training master was Master Dare who was famous for saving the dragons from extinction and for his swordplay, and h…

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@rae

Sorry, this is a bit late, but here’s a critique as requested.

The opponent blocked, swinging its second sword

I was a bit confused why you used ‘its’ as the pronoun here. After finishing the paragraph, I realized that it must be some sort of virtual opponent, but I did read over the sentence a couple times in confusion before reading on and…[Read more]

@rae

Next chapter, Vorgan captures Nahim, and takes Nahim’s weapons.

Wait really??!!!! I want to read that!!! I love capture scenes. Especial if the badguys are really mean and the hero still doesn’t lose his head. all though, from what I’ve seen of Nahim………

As for the fight scene thing, it really does end in a few seconds. A fight that g…[Read more]

@rae

Oh, I also read your scene for Chase’s book. Don’t really have any comments, but I like it. Nice title, too.

@rae

I read your scene, and overall, I think it’s really good. I’m not very good at critiquing, but I did want to mention just a couple things I noticed.

One, Mandin said it would take Nahim several minutes to defeat an opponent with a sword. Exchanges with swords actually usually last for a handful of seconds.

(Btw, do you have an in-…[Read more]

@rae

Oooo, I really like that! Sounds good!

@grcr

So what’d you think of the first chapter?

@rae

Should be ‘reins’ if you mean like those that control a horse.

I’m dying. YES it is. Grammar!!!!!!!! My old nemesis strikes again. 🙁

i like the story idea, but the tech level sounds to much like our time. I don’t get that sci-fi vibe from it.

Ugh. Grrrrrrrr. Ok, Maybe I’ll bring the date down a little. Closer in I guess. I’ll try to fix t…[Read more]