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@esther-c @keilah-h @grcr @rae @freed_and_redeemed

@theshadow lol yeah

@theducktator @rae good ideas!!

@princesachronicle22

Huntress/Sniper

“I am in favor of splitting up. Two or three groups should work.” said the male talking duck–Bob, from what I remembered.

“I don’t have a weapon.” Joy pointed out.

“Most of us do, so you’re pretty protected whoever you go with.” I assured her. “No…[Read more]

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Joy

“I may be insane, but I’m not eat grubs insane,” said Joy. “That would be even more repulsive than peanut butter and cheese.” She shuddered. That had been one of the worst experiences of her life, but at least she’d gotten five dollars.

“I’d eat grubs!” said Stephen cheerily. “Sounds…[Read more]

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Sef

“Still, this is amazing,” she said, and meant it.

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I LOVE THAT SO MUCH!

Your writing is amazing!!! <3

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Sef

“That’s amazing!” she laughed as the bird sang from her shoulder. “Thank you,” she smiled shyly at Chase.

@rae

You’re welcome! Yay, that’s great!

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Chase <333

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Sef

“Can you talk back to animals?” she wondered aloud.

@rae

Great job!!! Your story felt so authentic and real, it was amazing!!! You could definitely turn it into a novella but I really like it too as a short story too, so either option would work well.

@keilah-h

Yes! The awkwardness of finding out this is a couples thing would be hilarious.

@theshadow @princesachronicle22 @rae

Should we have like a big cabin somewhere with food? And maybe games?

@theshadow for some reason I’m happy that Trevor recognizes Sniper’s unusual expressions. Maybe I’ll put them in the same group, try and get my stubborn “adopted” character to make a friend lol

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Huntress/Sniper

“I say we should split into groups and fan out. That way we can cover more ground and…[Read more]

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Thank you! And go ahead!

@grcr

Thank you!

@rae

Okay. I’ve never heard of those before.

@rae

That makes sense. I do think it would be better to either have more sci-fi elements or not mention them at all. As it is, it’s just enough to be confusing. I would imagine that if you did write this into a novella, it would fix the problem, since you would have more time for it to become clear.

Is a zip a real thing or is it an instance o…[Read more]

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Ok 👍 makes sense. Yeah, I didn’t take it to mean you actually believed in extraterrestrial life.

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Beautiful! It would make a great novella.

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Yes, that was cool to see 😊

@freed_and_redeemed @rae

Awww, so sadddd 😢