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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months ago
BAhaha XD
I think it’s safe to say this is a weird place and there can be weird random objects scattered within. Maybe that says something about the labyrinth masters, not so much the piano itself.
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months ago
Lucille
“You’ve…” Lucy trailed off, brow furrowing. She clacked her fingers over the keys and tried to play a folk song, but only knew a few seconds of it.
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months ago
Lucille
“Dunno why they’d put a piano in here. I wonder who they are.” Lucy couldn’t tell if they had returned to ground level – after taking the door that led into earth – or if they were in the labyrinth’s basement. The floor had sloped slightly as they walked, sometimes up and sometimes down. Even here, her internal compass was…[Read more]
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Keilah H. started the topic I DID IT GUYS, I WROTE AN ORIGINAL STORY in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 months ago
yep, it’s just a prologue and part of 1 chapter right now but hey! I actually did it!
here ya go if you wanna read it:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1-8Up1XMYeuBavdafSNez1AVIVX4v6inMa9Q4gXBeYpY/edit?usp=sharing
Now, to those who have read my fanfic, it does have identical species names to them, but know that the Argonites, Salamandrion,…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months ago
Lucille
Lucy bent her right arm and flexed, her confidence incidentally boosted. “Mm-hm. Good.”
Short reply because I figured Gabriel will lead us on
Yeah, big-sibling little-kid energy but also mentor-follower. Lu doesn’t have siblings either and she’s mentally associating this with adults she knows. If she becomes Barnes again,…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months ago
@rae Yesssss hehe
@theducktator I know lol, but that’s not as funny
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months, 1 week ago
Thank you! ♥️ It seems I felt well enough to write something just now, haha. Energy when you’re ill is so inconsistent.
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Loopy replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months, 1 week ago
I dare you to change your pfp to one of theseÂ

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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months, 1 week ago
Lucille
The darkness was warm and comfortable in comparison to the outdoors, where they had wandered in the clammy mist for so long. Protector’s blades glowed like light through rose-colored glass. He turned them over in his hands and his hair lit up, twice as red, almost artificial.
His question finally registered. Lucy shrugged. She h…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months, 1 week ago
@rae I didn’t even know you could make a name that long
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months, 1 week ago
Lucille
The tower’s door had a warped surface and a handle. Lucy tugged. When that didn’t work, she slipped both her arms through the handle and put her feet on the frame for leverage. She was young, but she was a warden’s daughter, and she would force this if her life depended on it.
Her arms whitened, fit to break from the press…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months, 1 week ago
Of course! And I understand hating your own writing. I was looking at my old roleplays a bit ago and they hurt my brain.
Also, I really, really love your descriptions.
Thank you! I’ve been trying to describe things thoroughly even though it’s tedious at times. Cuz afterwards I’m glad to have done it.
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Koshka replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months, 1 week ago
Hmm. That is an interesting method. Does actually sound better than what I’m used to.
Wait, you too? Do you mean like a kind of cranberry jelly salad?
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months, 1 week ago
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months, 1 week ago
All hail the best Thanksgiving food! I assume your family makes the sauce?
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months, 1 week ago
Lucille
Lucy did not run without the Protector. She grabbed his arm and yanked him forward, pointing. “No – Th-that way!”
The tower had an opening at the base – a scuffed metal lid. She hadn’t noticed it before and now it was far from them both. But the crows’ shadows grew around them and the Protector surely couldn’t fight them off. He…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months, 1 week ago
It’s painful to read, but thanks I guess.
It’s not painful to read. You describe things clearly, there are varied sentence lengths, and you suggest emotion at sprinkled points through the sections. You also don’t harp on descriptions, which is something I struggle with.
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months, 1 week ago
Aw man… If it’s any consolation to you, I enjoy reading your rps! You’re doing a great job and if you’re frustrated with something, whatever it is, usually that means you’re getting better.
Lucille
Lucy tumbled over the crow’s back and landed on the ground. The crow’s focus shifted and it instantly chose to stride toward her.
There w…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 8 months, 1 week ago
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months, 1 week ago
I apologize for any mistakes, and also for taking so long.
I’m tired.
No problem at all. You mustn’t apologize, dear Miss Cranberry Sauce! I do not expect you to reply right away.
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