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@ellette-giselle

I was not expecting it at all!! 😂🥺

@hybridlore

Okay. Sounds good.

I know!!!!! Poor kiddos!!

Did you expect that to happen, or did it take you blindsided?

@ellette-giselle

Ahem. Sorry. I meant to say, I don’t know if the glitch is on my side or yours. Probably mine.

and yeah, I could access the chapters, it just took a sec to reload so maybe that’s what I needed to do yesterday.

Now… 314???????!

And Jonathan!!!!

nothing to note in these really. I enjoyed them.

@grcr

Oh my word!! *squeal of excitement* yay!! Well, the next ones will be out tomorrow.

Oh that would be SO COOL. *Hopes and prays temptation will win.*

@ellette-giselle

Yeah, I literally felt a tear at the goodbye scene. And I don’t usually cry reading things (at least, not fiction).

Can’t wait for the next chapters…!!

It would. I don’t know. I’d have to ponder for a while. no promises. I’ve already got me hands full atm… but the temptation is great.

@grcr It would be such a cool comic!

@ellette-giselle

Ohhh, gotcha.

I don’t know, let me check.

@whalekeeper

Yes, it sure is a good one!

@hybridlore

Oh, is that something glitchy on my end or on yours?

Equilibrium is a movie. It’s rated R for one scene at the end that we skip, and it has language but we filter it out with ClearPlay.

It’s based off the book Fahrenheit 451 which I really want to read, but I haven’t yet, so I don’t…[Read more]

@grcr

Wait really?!! You’re gonna cry!!??

*jumps around the room cheering*

*pauses and realizes that is not the right response to someone crying*

*offers tissue*

*goes back to celebrating*

Oooo, a comic would be pretty insanely cool!!! Oh wow. What would you think of doing a few of the characters in comic form? You don’t have top if you…[Read more]

@loopylin

*Bounces up and down because I just researched this* Make full summary of the mystery solution and the story behind it. Something like, “the old lady killed the doctor. She raised alligators in her home because she was a reptile researcher. She trained the alligators to do this, and this, and this. Her plan played out like this. She did…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

I was going to, but it wouldn’t let me sign in with my alt account and I didn’t want my main on there for all to see.

I don’t think I’ve heard of Equilibrium—is that a movie or a book?

@whalekeeper

Which plot twist? The one about Jonas’s dad?

@ellette-giselle

It’s so sad… I love 314 so much.

Also. random thought. this would make such a great manga/comic.

(Agh.. no, I’m not about to cry. totally not. not at all.)

@hybridlore

also, have you read the Giver? This book reminds me a lot of that so far.

Dystopian classic. *Sighs emphatically* I remember reading one of the plot twists as a nervous little thirteen-year-old and freaking out. Really good book.

@hybridlore

Okay thanks.

I noticed you don’t comment. Can you not do that for some reason because of a setting I have, or do you rather tag me here?

Yes, I like Don too. 🙃

Hmm. I’ve seen the movie, but I never was able to get my hands on the book. I actually took a lot of inspiration from Equilibrium, and even some from Hunger Games,…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

It was right around when Sara burst out at Jonathan.

I don’t know… I like Don. 😅 And Jonathan.

also, have you read the Giver? This book reminds me a lot of that so far.

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CHAPTER 4 and 5!!!!

@hybridlore

Yay! Wonder what glitched before…. 🤔

Oh really? Whoops! Did you mark the spot, or do I need to go find it?

Glad the tension is building!! Have a favorite character yet?

Hehe unintentional pun

I have a mystery story idea but absolutely no clue how to write a mystery:(

@ellette-giselle

It worked!

I liked these chapters. You did a great job of increasing the tension. I did notice that you briefly switched into Sara’s POV during the first chapter, then went back to Jonathan. I would fix that.

Great job!

@hybridlore

That is very odd. Did you let it load and scroll down? I just tried clicking on the link as a guest and it worked fine for me…..

Try again. I reloaded the page on my end,