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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 14 hours, 17 minutes ago
He can go with Joseph to that city!!! And be a missionary!!
Or he just continues as normal, except grieving for Asher… what does he even do right now? Go to school? Work? He could stay living with Sabina and the guys for a while.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 14 hours, 19 minutes ago
I don’t know……… what would I even do with him if he survived?
(Besides get him married and all that.)
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Andrew McLaurin replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 14 hours, 20 minutes ago
Oh, my bad, I forgot about Marcel. Let’s just say Flare picked him up, carried him, and placed him down near Ben.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 14 hours, 20 minutes ago
IT’S OKAY! We’ll pretend it never happened. It will get lost in the KP forums forever…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 14 hours, 21 minutes ago
But I already submitted it this way. I can’t change it now, KP won’t let me edit that post……………
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 14 hours, 22 minutes ago
HA! I actually have a chance?
Please, please, please…. 🙏 🥺 Think of all the scenes you could write!
Lolol
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 14 hours, 24 minutes ago
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 14 hours, 25 minutes ago
That would make it more interesting, instead of just having more characters die off we’d get to see Eric struggling with his brother’s death.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 14 hours, 26 minutes ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 14 hours, 27 minutes ago
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 14 hours, 31 minutes ago
No no no no no!!!!!! 😭😭😭 Why are you doing this to me, Ellette? 😢
Can’t you just… save Eric?? 😭 They said he could go free…
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 14 hours, 48 minutes ago
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 14 hours, 50 minutes ago
@jonas 👍
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The Ducktator replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 14 hours, 50 minutes ago
Yes!!! Stripe got hugged!!!! I’m glad the crow showed up again. I’d almost forgotten about them.
It’s destination was the capital, Pryde.
That should be Its, without the apostrophe.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 14 hours, 52 minutes ago
I sure don’t enjoy it.
Do you think it’s fine as long as this is the last one……. (for a while.)
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 15 hours, 6 minutes ago
Kind of. I did get a little hope, but when the mood switched I thought, “Okay. Here we go again. Do we have to be here for this?”
Oh.
I thought you said to go ahead and kill them.
Do you think it wasn’t good?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 15 hours, 13 minutes ago
i think so. He’s in the barn talking to martha
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 15 hours, 15 minutes ago
Hmm, wow, must have really sobered you. No comment on the amount of exclamation marks. lol. After I posted it, I looked back and was like, “wow, there’s a lot.” lol.
And no comment on the fact that I offed Joseph’ best friends.
Ah. So there was a positive event in there. This is what you were referring too.
Yes, and I have a…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 15 hours, 18 minutes ago
Maybe. This is a question I will ask at the end, but so far, what would the top scenes that you would like to see illustrations for be?
Ooo, I haven’t thought of this really.
Okay. well, the Stripe one of course. That would be super funny/cute, especially with his ears flat. lol.
Maybe one of Martha and Alan talking. I would…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 15 hours, 50 minutes ago
@hybridlore @linus-smallprint @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @grcr
NEXT SECTION!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Joseph sat at the table and stared at his plate. Noah and Darrien had already eaten and were pulling on their boots. They knew the hard day of work they had ahead, and they had been able to eat
Sabina put her arm over Joseph’s sh…
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