Ruth

@theshadow

I hope so! XD XD

😀

@theshadow I’d need to read through it again to pick up clues on who to kick out.

@grcr

Don’t worry, he’ll be alright XD. Thanks for the votes.

@jonas

Perfect, thanks.

@keilah-h

Lol, that’s okay. Do you want to vote for which character you would like to see gone?

@theshadow you’re welcome!

I wanted it finished by Christmas, and it seems like the actual story itself will be, but I’ll only be able to type it up and get it to you afterward. Hopefully before the new year though!

Oh poor Calvin! I vote A, Q, and X…

@linus-smallprint Merry Christmas!

Do the races of Ehverwyld have a Christmas equivalent?

@keilah-h

Okay, that’s good. Also thanks.

@liberty

Same, I would like the prompt now to think about it. Thanks.

@esther-c

Just read your story, it was amazing! Great job!

@savannah_grace2009 that’s cool!!

And hey, redrafting can be fun, reading through your story and thinking “oh, I gotta change that” or “what if I switch around these two scenes? It might flow better that way” or “let me change up this character’s role…..”

Except if you do too much. I read a comic recently that had 27 drafts before its final…[Read more]

@grcr you’re welcome!

@mineralizedwritings I exist to rant too lol

@keilah-h

The beginning has changed SO. MUCH.

The storyline/plot is pretty similar, but it’s definitely different…

@theshadow Not me regretting I didn’t put a character in, cause this looks super fun lol

I vote Z, although X sounds fun too

@thearcaneaxiom

Thank you. I really like that answer… it’s so true and the way he worded it is beautiful also.

Merry Christmas to you too!

@savannah_grace2009 I love this one too! I’m assuming the story, or at least the beginning, has changed a lot from previous drafts. It’s going in a good direction!

I vote A, Q, and Y

Uh, idk who’s participating in this, so here’s some tags.

@hybridlore @keilah-h @rae @loopylin @highscribeofaetherium @arcticanimals theducktator @esther-c @jonas @liberty

Okay, new part of the games is out!!

Chapter 1

Monday

Danger on the Rapids

The contestants began to wake up, due to the preset alarms that were included in each hotel room. The time was seven in the morning, and everyone was tired and cranky. Especially Aurora.

Eventually all the contestants gathered in the cafe for breakfast. After they ate…

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@theshadow It was honestly better than I expected, good enough to keep!

I would’ve only changed the ending if like a bunch of them died in the end or something, which didn’t happen.

haha you’re good, no reason to worry