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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
Leo
“Thank you, Leo.”
The words were soft–Leo almost didn’t hear them. He looked up from repacking the first aid kit to see Rory’s face disappear farther into his pillow. The comforter rose and fell in a deep sigh, then fell into a steady, even rhythm.
Leo smiled. Whispered a “Goodnight, God bless you,” and s…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
He doesn’t actually want to kill anyone, but he’s a walking disaster so the middle works, lol
Yep
Rory totally looks like a cinnamon roll. I mean, I haven’t seen a picture of him, but he totally gives off cinnamon roll vibes
I also debated the ‘could actually kill you’ because could he actually? My sister said Rory would pop emotional…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
@ellette-giselle @koshka @whalekeeper @theshadow
And y’all, you’re able to like, give me critiques for these. I just meant I didn’t need super precise, line-by-line edits since I’m going to rewrite this stuff eventually. So if you have input, please share it.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
Thank you!!
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
Thanks!! So glad you like it! 😁 And hey, if you have tips, I know you’re the synesthesia expert so I would love your input (or advice) if you have any.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 7 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
Want a picture of him? (It’s when he’s older in the actual novel that he’s in.)
Rory
Rory curled up, letting his face disappear under the comforter. It was warm and soft. Unlike the military blankets he was used to. He wondered if this was what clouds felt like. Then he shuddered. He knew what clouds felt…[Read more]
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 7 months ago
I don’t think @the_lost-journal was saying that the teachings of the saints are superior to the Bible. I think he meant that they were another source of instruction.
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Esther replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 7 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @the_lost-journal
Plus, the Bible requires two things if you want to read it. Context, and an open mind. You need history and context to even understand HALF, if not ALL of the Bible.
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Context and History is all in the Bible. Reading other passages helps you understand other passages.
I would like to add something about t…[Read more]
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TheShadow replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
@hybridlor
These next chapters were great!! The conflict so far is amazing and I really like how your going at a steady pace by building up Sara’a conflict, your doing it really well!!
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
@whalekeeper @koshka That whole “where does Dante go?” discussion was very amusing to read.
He doesn’t actually want to kill anyone, but he’s a walking disaster so the middle works, lol
Rory totally looks like a cinnamon roll. I mean, I haven’t seen a picture of him, but he totally gives off cinnamon roll vibes
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Loopy replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 7 months ago
I do like your art style. Is this a character from one of your WIPs?
Thanks!
Not yet, but I would love to turn it into a story. Maybe some sort of dark fairytale/ redwall kind of thing. I’ve been thinking about it a lot. No solid ideas, though.
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Loopy replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 7 months ago
@grcr I love the improvement! Those look so good! I love how you see all three distinct personalities in their faces even though they’re all smiling
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 7 months ago
Thank you!! 💛💛
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 7 months ago
@grcr wowww that’s such an improvement! They look great!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
@the_lost-journal oh that is a pretty font!!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 7 months ago
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
Sorry, I had to go look up how to take care of someone who lost blood….XD
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 7 months ago
Thanks guys!! 😊💛
Nothing like a before/after to boost your artist confidence. I like Lily best, she looks sweet.
Fr.
Thanks!! Yeah, Lily’s sweet……. she’s supposed to be a lot more jolly and energetic than i drew her, but oh well. she’s actually a crazy lil gal.
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
Gonna go off what I remember from my sister’s broken hand, although I understand that this isn’t broken, broken.
Leo
“Yes, deep breaths, and lean back.” Leo helped him settle back against the couch. “I’ll patch you up and get you some meds. Try to relax if you can.”
Leo started unwrapping the fabric strips around…[Read more]
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