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hybridlore replied to the topic The potato army WIP. in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
Sometimes KP has weird glitches… the joke around here is that “Wyoh” the “ghost” eats our posts.
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-GRCR- replied to the topic The Purple Eyed | My Current WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
@the_lost-journal @anyone @random-stalkers
Okay, uh, yeah. I’ve talked to my mom, and I’ve got a total change of plans. I’m not going to post my writing related to TPE on here. this topic can just fade into oblivion for now. heh… 😅😅😑😅
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
Sounds good.
Yep. Like two days ago it was 80. In February. 😅 I mean, winter never lasts long here, but still. I’m not looking forward to the summer weather.
He seems like a character. I’m interested to know what he thinks of Leon and Julian and their faith.
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-GRCR- replied to the topic The Purple Eyed | My Current WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
Umm… I need to figure some things out. My mom thinks I should use the book as a ref for a comic version of this story, and if I do that I may not need the writing to be edited too much, and if that’s the case then I won’t really be posting on here…… but idk…
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-GRCR- replied to the topic The Purple Eyed | My Current WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
I’ve shared this chapter a lot on here. But here it is again, in its close to final state.
CHAPTER I
It was a beautiful spring day in Burne. The clear sky and bright sun alluded to summer. Flowers bloomed their pretty faces amidst the grassy neighborhood yards, and the wind whispered to the trees. The world displayed no favoritism to the…[Read more]
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-GRCR- replied to the topic The Purple Eyed | My Current WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
AHHH Oh no, um… I may not be able to post a lot here. I might be taking another break from my novel… We’ll see idk… ugh.
*grumbles*
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic The Woods of Rosen in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
No. I think you two are probably the only ones who write creepy stuff regularly.
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic The Woods of Rosen in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
I think me and shadow are the only people on here who write anything creepy… 😂
I don’t know…I started a pretty creepy story in my school notebook a couple weeks ago.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
Okay, well I’ll see if anyone else says something.
wait…. it’s 70 degrees where you are?!?!
IT’S FREEZING over here.
oh, btw, what do you think of the newest character, Roland?
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
To be honest, it doesn’t really matter either way. I was just surprised at that sentence in the book because I’d never thought of it that way before. You might throw other believers off too, or maybe I’m the only one… I don’t see it as a big problem.
Yeah 😆 I should probably change it. It just looks so cozy in there. . . *meanw…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
btw, your pfp is making me cold. XD
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
I don’t know why…. but I’m not seeing another option, and it makes consistent sense with the rest of scripture.
If it feels like a controversial topic, I have several of those and this is not one I feel like I need to die on, so I can pull it.
What do you think?
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
Sypher
He followed the two girls, happy to have found someone that didn’t tower over him. Not that he was short. Some of these students were simply far overgrown.
Which made walking in their midst highly uncomfortable. Syph sidestepped a blundering youth, sending him a scalding glare as he slipped away.
The hallway was…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
Yeah, it makes sense. It’s just interesting. If God sacrificed animals in place of Adam and Eve so they didn’t have to die, why wouldn’t the Bible just say that? All it says in Genesis is that he clothed them with skins.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
Okay, so I did sight the Hebrew’s verse about death and sins, and then of course there are all the verses about sacrifice. But here’s the sinch.
The operative word in Gen 3:21 is עוֹר which occurs almost 100 times in the Old Testament Hebrew. It is used in only two senses:
skin of a human, eg, Ex 22:26, 34:39, etc
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hybridlore replied to the topic The potato army WIP. in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
Sorry I dropped off the face of the earth for a day. It was super busy.
Okay, sounds cool! And yeah, kind of creepy too 😂 Carrot Cake sounds like a character. I like how you came up with the different races and how they become empowered when they fall.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
Ugh. Let me look. I’m horrid at references. Romans….. i think. Maybe Hebrews. Just a sec.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Woods of Rosen in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
Really, lol. Hmm… I feel like other people do, too, but I’m not sure because I haven’t read too many people’s writing. But you’re right, most of us don’t for the most part.
Also, random question. What made you choose the name Kefa? (You don’t have to answer if you don’t want to.)
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
Don’t worry, Julian is having all the same questions as you most likely are.
I can tell 😂
Interesting. I didn’t know animals were killed in Adam and Eve’s place, even though I knew about sacrifices later. Where is it referenced as the first sacrifice?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
No problem!!
Okay great! I’m glad the journal thing payed off.
Leon was a gladiator?? 😅
Of sorts.
Don’t worry, Julian is having all the same questions as you most likely are.
Um, when was this?
God required animal sacrifices to provide a temporary covering of sins and to foreshadow the perfect and complete sacrifice of Jesus…[Read more]
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