Ruth

@keilah-h

Hmm. I guess we’ll have to see.

@hybridlore

Fine then!!

*pulls out dagger, grabs Alec, and holds blade to his throat.* BACK OFF!!

yeah, we’ll have to see what happens.

@whalekeeper ^^

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@ellette-giselle

So now you stole a gun from me?

Well, it’s my world, so it’s my gun. And since I’m its author, I say it’s out of bullets. 😝

*makes another attempt to steal Leon and Rolf from you*

Okay. I feel like that wasn’t really clear . . . but then again, we did get a warning that the next town would be dark, so I guess that was it. I…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle makes sense. I still feel like something’s not right, but maybe I’m just looking for little tells you’ve put in your other stories when the main characters get captured/executed that aren’t there in this one, and that’s throwing me off.

@hybridlore

Um, I’m threatening Alec and his world totally has guns.

So, no one would look twice at a dirty slave even when slavery has just been abolished?

IN ONE TOWN!

The so they shut down the main market that reached the inland. This would still be going on in coastal towns, but that town reached a bigger part of the Empire and also had a…[Read more]

So, no one would look twice at a dirty slave even when slavery has just been abolished?

@ellette-giselle

What… who gave you a gun, anyway? This is a medieval world. The best you should have is a sword.

@hybridlore

*whips around with a hand on my gun*

I wouldn’t.

@ellette-giselle

*inches closer to Leon and Rolf while you’re distracted*

@keilah-h

I feel like more people would ask questions, or at least be curious.

Yes…. but the only time they were seen was in Clonabay, and i mentioned the amount of different cultures that are all mixed in there. No one is really noticing anything in that city. Ya know? Plus, Leon and Rolf are in such a bad state that the people of the Empire…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

I’m not sure if this is what it is, but you said the Empire doesn’t take its own people to be slaves, yet there are two Imperials in the “care” (read as “horrific torture” lol) of a slave trader (that might not even be Imperial?) I feel like more people would ask questions, or at least be curious. The soldier that’s bribed into…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Hmm. So what might be confusing?

You want to try and bounce your thoughts off of me?

@ellette-giselle yep!

@keilah-h

You read the very newest section from today?

Reading through it again, I realized most of my “improvements” were already there and I missed them, but there’s still something I can’t put my finger on that doesn’t make sense.

@rae

Lord Quackers would love to conqueror this castle, lol

@rae

I plead the 5th

@raxforge

*screams*