Ruth

Oh wait, can you even edit? 🤦‍♀️

@ellette-giselle

Huh. I don’t know how I could fix that.

I could open a section of it specifically for comments, and y’all could write them out instead of linking them to a specific section of text, but I feel like that might be more annoying for other people. Maybe I can copy any major ones over for you.

@ellette-giselle

Pretty please, with a cherry on top, tell me what happens to Joseph and his family. 🙃

@hybridlore

*Crying because I can’t comment or see y’all’s comments*

Nooo, this is so sad.

😭

Oh well. I guess it can’t be helped.

@keilah-h

Well that’s good.

@hybridlore

Yeah, but he doesn’t know about them.

I do though.

if you be nice and say please…..

@theducktator

Nice.

@ducktator @keilah-h @ellette-giselle @linus-smallprint

New chapters are out. I wrote this week, so I feel like I have enough room to give you guys two.

@keilah-h @ellette-giselle

It might have just been something I thought, then. Not that I was saying it was totally unrealistic—I just know that last-minute conversions tend to be less … I don’t know.

@savannah_grace2009

I was just thinking about this story!

You know when you get an epic idea for a plot, but then forget where you were going with it and then you don’t know what to do?

Not really, given that I never know where I’m going with it when I start either. XD

Yeah that’s me. I need some inspiration and it would be awesome if you guy…

[Read more]

@the_lost-journal

I shall add that to my overly long summer reading list.

@ellette-giselle @hybridlore

I honestly have no idea on what my views on this whole election thing are. But I didn’t see Rowan’s conversion to be like, fake or forced or whatever.

The example of that criminal on the cross in the Bible, that happened, so I mean why can’t this one? Y’know?

@ellette-giselle

😢😢😢

Okay, I see where you’re coming from.

True, maybe… but maybe he’s done enough research to have found it already. I don’t know. I wanted to hear something about Joseph’s descendants, but it’s okay.

@hybridlore

yeah, if you let yourself you can see it coming from page 1 of their book. It was always there and always inevitable.

as for Rowan, I believe in Holy election, and because of that, this works. That’s more of a Calvinist view though. Basically, Rowan would have never believed no matter how much time he had, unless God called him. A…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

You should be able to get in. My brother’s classmate does not have a google account, and he and my brother were still able to work on a doc together.

@keilah-h

yay!! I’m so glad.

@ellette-giselle

Either way, honestly. Whatever works.

I think it might still let you in, but I don’t know if you’ll be able to comment. I guess we’ll have to see. I’ll email you the link.

@ellette-giselle

Wow.

I gotta say, it’s probably not as much of a shock as some of the other deaths, since it really felt like you were leading up to this… but still.

Keilah has a good point. I do like how you made it more hopeful at the end, and the time jump is really interesting. It’s cool to know what happened afterward.

I’m glad Rowan b…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle That makes sense.

I was surprised to find I liked it too!! It’s just a really satisfying end to this story somehow.

@keilah-h

Wow really?! I’m glad you liked it!!

I like the time skip too. Oh. Odd. The original one has reference to WWI-II. It must have gotten lost when I was editing. Well, I kept adding greats, and it was getting stupid, so I cut it off at 3. About late 1300s to early 1400s is when I’d place the stories.

@ellette-giselle

I love this ending!! I was worried with how dark it was looking, you were gonna leave it off on a less satisfying note. But the Fox journal was hopeful, and I honestly love how you time-skipped it into modern times. Which, interestingly, makes it seem more real to me, the fact that these places would still exist in the world we…[Read more]