Ruth

@ellette-giselle

DON’T YOU DARE. *hides Evan*

@theducktator

Aha, thank you. Fixed that.

Thank you so much for the feedback!!!!

DON’T KILL EVAN. I BEG YOU.

Oh how tantalizing this sounds…….. it would be such a sad death scene……………..

@ellette-giselle

Characters:

~Which character(s) did you find the most compelling/relatable/believable and why?

I thought all of them were. I guess Jonathan would be most interesting though.

~ Were there any character that need to be more engaging? If so, how would be some good ways for me to do that?

I always forget about Brian. He should…[Read more]

@theducktator

Awesome, thank you so much!!

@ellette-giselle

Nice! You hyphenated firstborn though, which is one word.

@rae

I’m glad you had fun! HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!🥳🥳🥳

@hybridlore

I filled out your feedback form!

@rae that’s awesome you got to have fun with your friends! Happy birthday!

@keilah-h I’m going to get so depressed if I try to answer that question lol

@whalekeeper :((((

@rae

I’m so glad it went well!!!! Happy Birthday, by the way!

@rae

Yay!!! I am so glad that you had a good time!!!!! And I am so glad that you did it! That sounds like an amazing day!

Also,

Also, apparently I haven’t shared the mock cover yet!! (At least in this forum) Here it is! (At the end of the story XD)

Also…

Look! I found little Hallie!! 🥰

@savannah_grace2009 @theducktator @grcr @smiley @keilah-h @theshadow

Ok guys… 👀 I know it’s a lot to read, but I’m dropping the last 6 chapters!! Enjoyyyy! And then give me alllll the feedback! I’m planning to finally start on the official third draft soon.

Chapter 27

Hallie rolled onto her back and let out a sigh, staring at the dark ceiling…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Girllll, you’re so sweetttt 🥹 Thank you so much!! Your comments mean so much and are one of the reasons I keep on going with this book bc I know there will other people out there who will like it just as much 😭🥰❤️

OMC GUYS GUYS GUYSSSSS
I FOUND A SONG FOR EASTON

It’s “Cars and Phones” by David Dunn

It almost made me cry but…

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Just in case… (also lmk if the doc isn’t working or you can’t edit/access it)

KP Connection Doc

@ellette-giselle Thank you!!!!

You are getting so much better at guys and girls!

I’m glad you think that! Been practicing a bit.

@keilah-h

Wow!! You are getting so much better at guys and girls! I can totally tell which is the girl. This looks really good!!

I have art, finally! Lol

Chell from the Portal games as she appears in my stories. Also, her brother, a fan character of mine. You might remember him if you’ve seen the Hero Forge image I posted a little while back. His name’s Alex, but he’s referred to by his middle name, Jonathan, because there’s another character that goes by his first n…[Read more]