Ruth

@grcr take as long as you need. Don’t stress yourself out over me, please.

It’s almost done, I promise. I stressed myself out again, but it’s really almost done and I’ll definitely have it shared again soon.

😅😭

@ellette-giselle

I just finished it…I didn’t comment much, but still, there are some. OH MY GOSH!!!!!!!!!!! 314 was my favorite character from the first moment he appeared…but I won’t know 100% for sure until I have the actual book and take the time to fully, slowly read it.

This book reminds me so much of another story a young writer wants…[Read more]

@liberty

also, if you would let me know on KP how far you get each day that would be great so I can look over the comments. Word doesn’t tell me what comments are new and it will save me having to weed through them all. XD

@liberty

Yay! Oooo! So glad you like the boards!

Maybe if I watched the Spiderman movie again, I’d have a different opinion. It’s been a while. That’s what I remember.

@the_lost-journal

I did not notice you asked questions, my apologies!

So how could a death help the plot?

I feel like it really depends on the plot itself. I know that’s a vague answer and isn’t helpful. XD But there are so many different character arcs and plots out there, so I can’t come up with rules for every one of them. Just think of a…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon lol thanks

@liberty Cool!

@ellette-giselle

AHHHH!!! Oh my gosh!!! I love those boards! Amber….that’s SO cool! By the way, I’ve started commenting a bit in Sector 5. I know I’m late, so I’m just skimming it in preporation for Book 2.

@elishavet-pidyon

Interesting… He looks like he’s facing several dilemmas. I like him. Hmm.

😄 You were actually the only person to point that out! Yes…dilemmas is the perfect word.

Was he the prince in the short story?

Yup. 100% royalty.

Closer to the typical knight type of warrior. Honor is a big thing to him.

*big nod* Oh yes. 🎶 Truth, hon…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon

That’s a very pretty scene, as well as being sad. I love it.

@elishavet-pidyon

Contemplative personality, probably optimistic in a quieter way.

Ooo, I love how you worded that! “Optimistic in a quieter way”. I’ve found that getting feedback on character boards gives me more varied vocabulary for describing them.

Probably has some good advice up his sleeve and maybe a little mischief(which others don’t e…

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@elishavet-pidyon @ellette-giselle @keilah-h @highscribeofaetherium

Thank you! I have a couple more drawings almost finished and I’ll share them when I’m done. I sort of want to make a picture book now.

@keilah-h

-Very nice green eyes (lol I just think green eyes are so cool)

😄 I didn’t even notice they were a green color…I was going for a pale blue/grayish…but I think “green” actually fits him well.

-Does Psalm 23 imply that he himself is a shepherd or comes from a family who worked with sheep, or is that just his favorite psalm?

It portrays…[Read more]

@everyone would people be ok with making classes end early today to give the students time to get ready and to make the dance come quicker? I’m thinking one more class period, lunch, and then one last class.

Sounds perfect to me

In fact I like Enid’s instinctual response so much that it might just end up in her story anyway

I’m answering the zombie question first because it’s easier.

– Marcel can just fly up to the highest skyscraper and migrate whenever the zombies finally make it up the hundred-floor stairs. Hehe.

– Enid puts on war paint and goes out like a champ. She knows she won’t last long anyway. She probably finds a stage with speakers and makes this long…[Read more]

Reading everyone’s answers to this question is really fun. I should post answers for my own characters sometime soon.

But, in the meantime, a second question: How long would your character survive the zombie apocalypse?

(The first question is still open for answers, of course)

@grcr

Their story is inspired by Chinese fantasy… so… ancient China… mixed with elements of, like, Japan and Korea… and my own crazy fascinations.

That sounds really cool!

I just finished reading a Brandon Sanderson book that was partially based off of Japan and ancient Korea and I really liked that style of world building.