Ruth

it hurts, y’all…this novel already hurts

@koshka @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @rae @ellette-giselle @theducktator @godlyfantasy12 @grcr @highscribeofaetherium @idk-anyone-else-lollll

*writes a random scene for book 3*

*realizes book 3 already hurts*

*decides to share part of scene to KP*

Riker picked up the note, hands trembling.

  ‘Nazi,’ scrawled across the paper, written in red…

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@theshadow all righty, I’m doing it

lol

if you can think of anyone else you wanna tag, go ahead

@rae @mineralizedwritings @linus-smallprint @grcr @whalekeeper @anyone-else-who-cares

anybody wanna draw a scene of mine?

there will be fantasy creatures you can go wild on, chances to practice your posing, and a weird amount of…

@savannah_grace2009 ooooh mood boards for all your main characters! I love it.

Now do they all look human or are there small biological differences and you just decided to use pictures of humans instead of going down a rabbit hole to find images that match? I seem to remember Sef’s mom had green hair (and possibly skin? I don’t remember) because…[Read more]

@rae yeah it was great!

Lol, you noticed. Yes, I did.

that’s cool! I was reading through that RP several weeks ago so…..

@theshadow better “subjects” than “children” I suppose, especially considering how I talk about some of them. (not sure whether to glare or smirk at the characters in question here)

@rae

Well, this certain rude character, if they get too much on my nerves, will be the topic of a short story in which they DIE. That is how I deal with rude characters i dislike.

LOLLLLL

Should I be glad none of my characters ticked you off……?

actually it’d be funnier if they did…..

SOLDIER! MEDIC! YOUR TIME HAS COME, DO SOMETHING…[Read more]

@jonas

Thank you again for your help!!!

@savannah_grace2009

Alright then, got it! I guess I’ll make a lot faster progress than I thought then!

@jonas

whoaaaa

that was a lot 😅😅

thank you for all your help, it is appreciated!!

however, I’m not looking for so much of a detailed critique as I have in the past. This is still a really rough draft and I know there’s a lot of messy sentences and chapters. I’m mostly looking for critiques to see if the pacing is good and if it makes more…[Read more]

@linis-smallprint

yes, this is the same book that you started before. I did revise it a lot though 😂😂😅

@savannah_grace2009

Gorgeous boards!! 🥰 What program did you use?

@elishavet-pidyon Wow! That was fun.

funny side note, when you mentioned “reaching the Dell” I was like “someone else knows that word????” cause I never see it in anyone else’s writing these days, but I have a charrie named Dell so I see it often. LOL

@godlyfantasy12 hellooooo again!

haven’t seen ya in a hot minute!

So you’re not really writing much, yes. But please tell me all the characters and stuff are still around.

Crosshair will never say it, but I think he’s been missing his feathery buddy Paxton.

in other news, I finished a fanfic for once, which has a new story…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

I’m pretty sure it’s the same book.

@rae awesome!!!!

Can’t wait for more!

Feedback time lol

Indeed, the fire showed his features mostly came from his human side, besides his grey eyes. His grey eyes were deep and filled with emotion

You don’t need to reference the eyes again. A better way of doing it would be like this:

…besides his gray eyes, deep and filled with…

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@rae @ellette-giselle

*joins in dancing*

I’ve already read most of them, but I’m still very happy that there making it on KP!

@savannah_grace2009

Alright, here we go!

Prologue

Rolling clouds blotted out any sight of the twin moons, and tendrils of fog floated in on a frigid breeze, curling up and around the two lone figures in the street.

Had a man been so unfortunate as to look out upon the street through the frosty panes as the two walked by, the sight would have…

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