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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
@ellette-giselle aww man that’s horrible!
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
Ohhhhh nooooooo! Ellette! I’m so sorry! That’s terrible!
I’m glad LOS was okay… but I’m really sorry about your WIP. That’s terrible.
I use Word Online (microsoft365.com, I think…) to write, and it saves online so I can access it through my phone and other devices. That might be worth looking into for the future, since I’m pre…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
@ellette-giselle My brother, whose hair goes down to his neck, tucks his hair behind his ears all the time. We actually had to tell him to do it less cause my mom doesn’t want him to push on the back of his ears every time he does it.
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Beth posted an update 1 year, 6 months ago
I tried making an epic shapeshifter character for one of my WIPs but when I started writing for him I some how ended up with this silly kid that accidentally tries to let out mighty roars in human form. Not what I originally planned, but you know? It’s fine. He’s probably really epic in another aspect… probably.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
Great job!!!! I really liked it! I sure was nervous for them!
Poor Riker. I am really excited to see Erich show up!! He was a character I really liked from the last book. I’m really happy to see him again. I hope he gets a lot of “screen time”. 😂
I am wondering why Leon and Riker seem to be struggling with the lessons we…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
@keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @hybridlore @linus-smallprint
So, in answer to all the questions:
the laptop did an un-authorized update. So while I hit save on all my documents, I still had them minimized instead of fully closed. Normally it tells me about the update and offers a time. I then shut everything fully down, make sure it’s…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
Umm… Perehapes he was a slave, or at least treated like one, earlier in his life, along with his brothers and cousins. They escaped, and tired to help other slaves.
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I wrote like two paragraphs of his backstory.
This is Omar we’re talking about.
Have you read the section where he introduces himself to Leon??
Okay l…[Read more]
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic What Happened to the Moderators? in the forum Questions and Support 1 year, 6 months ago
🎵How do you join Kingdom Pen?
You just fill out a form!
I tried that, but they work no more!
That’s odd.
I know I thought for sure!
Have you tried the contact page?
I’ve gotten no reply…
Oh, that used to work, but now it won’t.
I think that I might die.
Where have all the moderators gone? What happened to the articles? The new people…[Read more]
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FIREQUACKER posted an update 1 year, 6 months ago
My KPversiary was the 10th. I’ve been on here for a whole year now!
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FIREQUACKER started the topic What Happened to the Moderators? in the forum Questions and Support 1 year, 6 months ago
What’s going on here recently? I know @keilah-h ‘s brother and @linus-smallprint ‘s sister have applied to join and haven’t gotten an email and I haven’t seen Kathleen in months. It’s been a long time since we’ve gotten any new people or had any articles/stories published. @kathleenramm are you still around? @reaganramm is the only one listed on…[Read more]
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
Noooo, poor Tyler. 😭
“I’m not sure. I’ll have to discuss it with your dad first. Maybe we can talk about it during dinner.”
As much as Hallie hated to have a conversation like that over dinner in front of all her siblings
Hallie could feel the curious, snickering gazes of her five other siblings boring into the back of her head
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Contemporary writing in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
AHAHAHAHAHA
(or whatever Snipes’ laugh is like)
even the posts about me being a simp??? Lol
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TheShadow replied to the topic Could you survive in your story's universe? If not, why? If so, how? in the forum Topic of the Week 1 year, 6 months ago
Hmm, well I guess in the woods around Rosen, I don’t think so. The woods are massive, and nothing really lives there. Besides, a creature stalking about doesn’t help, and something that could take a town could probably pick me off pretty quickly (wish I could say more but that would be spoilers).
As for Terre, which is where my…[Read more]
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TheShadow replied to the topic Help on writing an impactful last day in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
If you’ve ever read White Fang, there’s one part in the beginning where this guy knows he’s going to be eaten by wolves, and as he’s attempting to survive despite them, he’s described as appreciating his body a lot more than he ever did before. For instance, he begins studying his hand and the way it’s made, at the intricacies of each print…[Read more]
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TheShadow replied to the topic Contemporary writing in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
Those are great ideas, thank you so much!! This is spurring a lot of ideas now, thanks.
Understandable. Contemporary writing is kind of like writing set in the present or close to it, and are mainly based in reality.
Thank you for the suggestions, I’ll check them out! Okay, compelling characters seem…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
@freed_and_redeemed Love it!!
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TheShadow replied to the topic Contemporary writing in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
(Whether you read that in his voice or however you imagine my voice to sound is up to you.)
I’m now going to read all of your posts in Sniper’s voice now that you mention it
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TheShadow replied to the topic The Woods of Rosen in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
Great, thank you!
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
Poor Riker. I hate Franz.
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Koshka replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
Ouch. Leon, you’ve still got a pocket full of broken glass to work out.
Also…how did Erich end up in the US Army?!
(thank you for hitting Franz for me, Leon)
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