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@liberty

Oh yay!!! I’m so happy!!!

Diedrich is such a great character. 🤣

Yeah, poor Leon seems to get all the trouble, even though Julian is the reckless one. 😝

I’m glad you liked the letters. I do too. I feel like it helps to keep the connection of the previous towns.

@ellette-giselle

That was awesome!!! I really got sucked into the story again! I was shrinking inwardly for Leon! I thought he really was going to get whipped…again! Then when Dietrich came…I celebrated!!! So awesome!

I also like how you show Leon and Julian admonishing and encouraging the believers from the previous towns. It’s nice to…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Another teenage boy? How many does she have and why is she introducing another one?

Dude. You are so mean. 😝

Yes, you’re right. I can’t just go change his age. Thank you!

Yes, but Wilhelm is the traditional spelling. 😁 (you still say it Vwilhelm)

Having the heir to the throne on your side is helpful. But I’m sure t…

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@linus-smallprint

Oh my word!!!! BUT IT’S SO TRUE!!!!! *sobs*

🤣🤣

@the_lost-journal yep! And then share your stories with people and ask them what they thought and if there’s anything they think can change. You don’t have to follow their suggestions if you think it’ll conflict with the story, but if several people are all giving you the same or similar feedback, it’s a good idea to at least check out why.

@hybridlore

Uh oh… poor Dietrich.

😁

@ellette-giselle

*shakes head at you*

Oh yeah, emperor, not king.

Uh oh… poor Dietrich.

@hybridlore

I could kill him if it makes you feel better. 😁

yeah, will have to see what the emperor says. He’s gonna 100% hear about it after some of the enemies the prince made today. (mainly the priests)

@ellette-giselle

Still sad. 🥺

For now.

Yeah, yeah, yeah.

Probably. I don’t know what the king (and everyone else at the palace) is going to do once they hear of this… 😬

@hybridlore

Ah, maybe it’s someone else I know who likes him best. I didn’t kill Ian! He just dropped out. That’s better!

ah yes… I’m not that cruel.

For now.

The prince may have put himself in a precarious position, no?

@ellette-giselle

Second favorite. Julian’s first. 😉 (Ian was up there too, but you got rid of him… 😢)

I wasn’t sure… I thought he was going to get a lashing. Again.

@hybridlore

Thank you!!!

Did you think I was gonna take out your favorite character? 🙃

(It is you who picked Leon as their favorite, right?)

@keilah-h

Oh! Well that would have made this chapter confusing! 😂

@ellette-giselle

Ooh boy. This was a powerful section. Good job.

But Leon knew they had now made enemies.

Nothing would ever be the same.

Dun dun dun……. 🫣

I read today’s. Gonna have to go back for Saturday’s.

sometimes I miss a chapter if I see it, mark it as important, but then it gets buried in my other emails.

@keilah-h

Oh yeah!

I’m assuming you’ve read Saturday’s section and today’s?

@ellette-giselle oooooh

things are REALLY heating up now!

@hybridlore  @linus-smallprint    @koshka   @keilah-h    @elishavet-pidyon   @liberty

NEXT SECTION!!

The sixteenth year of Emperor Haidronias’s reign
December 10th
The Empire

To Johannes, Heinrich, and the brothers at the University,

Greetings in the name of our Lord, Jesus Christ

Such wonderful news! Prince Dietrich, son of Emperor Haid…

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@liberty

Really?!?! You called it?

Oooh!!! He’s about to become the Josiah.

Maybe so!

So, is he your new favorite? I was pretty sure he would be.

@ellette-giselle

Wilhelm took another breath to steady himself. “My name is not Wilhelm Baumann. I am Prince Dietrich, son of Emperor Haidronias.”

That is so funny! When Wilhelm was first introduced, I actually thought, “That may be the prince…but in disguise!”

“One day, when I am Emperor, I will cleanse this land. I will destroy ever idol and t…

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