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Enid replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months, 4 weeks ago
It’s painful to read, but thanks I guess.
It’s not painful to read. You describe things clearly, there are varied sentence lengths, and you suggest emotion at sprinkled points through the sections. You also don’t harp on descriptions, which is something I struggle with.
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Koshka replied to the topic Topic of the Week…? in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months, 4 weeks ago
*Whispers into the void*
But when Tomorrow came, no posting was somethinged…
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Koshka replied to the topic The All-Boys Royal Academy AU RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months, 4 weeks ago
*back door creaks open*
So, I’m not joining back in, but I am avidly stalking, and the Seven Minutes phrase sparked this scene to mind (don’t know how) so you can blame that for this weirdness. Enjoy.
LeQroi
Seven minutes until dinner. The Master chef stood in the center of the kitchen, white leather boots glued in place. Literally. His glare…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months, 4 weeks ago
Aw man… If it’s any consolation to you, I enjoy reading your rps! You’re doing a great job and if you’re frustrated with something, whatever it is, usually that means you’re getting better.
Lucille
Lucy tumbled over the crow’s back and landed on the ground. The crow’s focus shifted and it instantly chose to stride toward her.
There w…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months, 4 weeks ago
@koshka Yeah, that’s true.
I take the revived headcanon too because I like that ending a lot better, but I could see why one might not share that view.
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Koshka replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months, 4 weeks ago
**SPOILER DISCUSSED THROUGHOUT POST**
Hmm…I guess they could do what the book does with that spot pic of the First Well at the end. As if they’re saying “see, they found the well. Everything is going to be okay.” And then have Andrew Peterson come on and explain a bit. Or just end it with a couple flashbacks and have Janner’s Lay…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 9 months, 4 weeks ago
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months, 4 weeks ago
Huntress/Sniper/Soldier
“Yes. Good idea. He was at the entrance of the labyrinth. I think he might be the one who brought us here. As for where he is…” Felicity thought for a second before speaking up again. “Do you know how to trap rabbits?”
“I’ve never done it before, but it shouldn’t be too hard to figure out.” I said.
“C…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months, 4 weeks ago
I personally think it’s kinda confusing. His death being undone kinda messes with the fact that the last thing he did was protect his brother, and will it do anything to the Anneiran ex-fangs? But at the same time, how will Kalmar ever be able to get into the Fane of Fire without his Throne Warden? (Artham could help I guess, but I don’t know if…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months, 4 weeks ago
ok I didn’t wanna make a new topic for this but I probably should have.
For those of you who are watching and following the Wingfeather Saga show:
How do you think they are going to do the end?
(Spoilers incoming for those who haven’t read the books, SCROLL DOWN QUICKLY!)
(are they gone yet? ok here we go.)
All right, so we have…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 9 months, 4 weeks ago
oh Sara! I’m so sorry that she died, yet I’m also so glad that you have begun to find joy in Christ, even in this hard time! I was praying that God would give you peace and joy, and it looks like He is answering that prayer. I will continue to pray for you and your family. It really is hard, I know. I am still walking with a f…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 9 months, 4 weeks ago
I’m so sorry, Sara, but I’m so glad that Jesus has been comforting you during this time! It is truly amazing to hear of how the Lord is taking care of you right now. You’re in our prayers *hugs*
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 9 months, 4 weeks ago
@whalekeeper you said it better than me, I echo your sentiment.
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Enid replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 9 months, 4 weeks ago
It’s beautiful to hear how you’ve found joy, Sara. I’m thankful you’ve found peace in this.
Jesus has really felt everything your family is going through. It’s not just that he understands it, he went through it – he cried and suffered and wished for the pain to disappear.
And now, in heaven, Jesus knows the best remedy to…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 9 months, 4 weeks ago
@savannah_grace2009 I am so, so sorry you had to go through this. But at the same time, I’m extremely glad that it strengthened your faith like that. You’re right–there is no cancer in heaven, and she is perfectly healed! That’s something to be happy about!
I will continue to pray for your family.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 9 months, 4 weeks ago
Yesterday afternoon, my mom passed away. She’s with Jesus now, and I’m very joyful about that, but I miss her a lot, too.
Something really cool happened though! Saturday night, my cousins on my dad’s side came to visit my mom, and when we went home, one of them spent the night in my room just for fun, and so did my sister.
I’d been going through…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 9 months, 4 weeks ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months, 4 weeks ago
sure, do whatever.
I meant the whole dodgeball scene where he’s militarizing the whole thing. lol
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months, 4 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle do you mind if I fast forward a bit with my next rp?
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Enid replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months ago
I apologize for any mistakes, and also for taking so long.
I’m tired.
No problem at all. You mustn’t apologize, dear Miss Cranberry Sauce! I do not expect you to reply right away.
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