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@savannah_grace2009 @rae @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @ellette-giselle @keilah-h @grcr @whalekeeper @loopylin @esther-c @mineralizedwritings @anyone-else-idk-lol

I realized I hadn’t shared these scenes I wanted to share😂 This is an earlier chapter in Broken Shackles, one of the first 10 chapters…and I just wanted to share it since I just edited…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings @keilah-h @rae

5 months later, and I have 2 more chapters of this fanfic to share😅😂 With Broken Shackles being the priority, I haven’t worked on fanfics in a while, BUT with Broken Shackles currently pretty much on pause, working on this has also been fun.

So, I present Chapter 6 and 7 of this Fanfiction

c h a p t e r …[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009 Love this idea💖💖

and though I do have Spotify (technically it’s my Dad’s, but whatever😂😂), I’m gonna do Youtube links so anyone can listen, even those of y’all without Spotify.

(and I’m gonna do Freedom’s Fire…maybe one for Broken Shackles at a later time😁)

@esther-c @mineralizedwritings @rae @ellette-giselle @koshka @smile…[Read more]

@rae

It’s not completely straight. There’s a bit of waviness.

As for a widow’s peak? I had to look up what that meant lol, and don’t think so, or at least not a super obvious one.

I think it’s split down one side? I don’t remember. I’ve barely drawn this character lol

@savannah_grace2009 @rae @keilah-h @highscribeofaetherium @esther-c @koshka @theducktator @theshadow @linus-smallprint @grcr @freed_and_redeemed

I just finished a new character……. I think he’s gonna be one of my favorites!

@ellette-giselle Totally get that! No worries, Hans doesn’t need to be a fav😉 And awww, girlll, ty!!! 💖💖 Knowing y’all are so excited means so much💖💖🥹 @savannah_grace2009 @rae @keilah-h @highscribeofaetherium @esther-c @koshka

I have an aesthetic for Erich🖤

ngl, y’all, this man will probably drive you insane in Freedom’s Fire, but I cannot…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Hans is just evil, lol. Send him to the character chopping block.

I mean……fair enough. XXD

@rae @savannah_grace2009 @keilah-h @ellette-giselle

Ok, finally read through everything that was said.

Let’s calm down a little bit😂😂

Let’s get something straight: I don’t love Hans either. The man is evil beyond a doubt (as all…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009 @ellette-giselle @rae I love seeing y’all fight over Hans😂😂 And I’m the author, I know how evil he is, but I wouldn’t say I hate him like I once did. The man is truly broken, and you may not believe me, but he’s an amazing family man and loves his wife and sons dearly🥹💖 he’s someone that you can see both the good and evil…[Read more]

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Stubborn, quick to anger, very passionate and protective…to a fault.

Obviously.

no this is really funny though, because I’m the same way.

OK, this is when you and I have been arguing this whole time and then find out we’re cousins. haha!

And this one is mostly for myself and @rae

@koshka @savannah_grace2009 @esther-c @ellette-giselle @grcr @anyone-else-idk-lol

…

Hans’ aesthetic🖤

And….Riker’s aesthetic 🤍

@grcr @mineralizedwritings @ellette-giselle @rae @savannah_grace2009 @esther-c @koshka @lightoverdarkness6 @whalekeeper @smiley @anyone-else-idk-lol-XD

I made a couple new aesthetics for Leon and Riker🥰

(and I absolutely adore Pinterest and Canva now y’all😂😂 so helpful)

Andddddd y’all get to help me decide which character to make an aesthetic…[Read more]

@rae
Just to clarify, I think that Chase having that flaw makes him a good and realistic character. I’m not critiquing his flaw, I’m critiquing that it’s being shown as a virtue.

@rae

Okay…after reading it again and reading the other’s comments…

I completely agree with @whaley and @loopy.

Chase has always kind of bothered me for the exact reason that Loopy said, but I couldn’t put it into words until I saw her post.

It doesn’t ever seem like he’s being “kind” because all it is is him beating himself up and feeling…[Read more]

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DISCLAIMER: GRAMMAR NAZI PATRIOT RANT AHEAD.

My only critique would be the use of the word “alright”. It’s not technically a word. The correct term would be all right. I’m sorry, but that word just drives me insane. My forum signature is ridiculously accurate right now.

@theducktator 8 or 9

@rae

Ok, first off, I love Jenny and also how you made the unicorn have cloven hooves.

I do have some critiques, though. Sorry if they aren’t helpful.

I don’t think giving your characters what they want is a good idea, unless you’re writing a tragedy. If I gave Ellie the safety that she wanted, she would isolate herse…[Read more]

@rae

Aww, I loved it!!

The only thing I’d recommend is to really deepen Chase’s pov, especially after he gives up his sight. Because it still felt like he could see with the way things were described. I think if you describe it in the way in which Chase was experiencing it, then it will have a much bigger impact.

Other than that it was good! (:

@rae

I like the deer-like appearance of the unicorn. It also seems like a fun resolution scene. Family reunion scenes are the best. I can also picture Chase on the cushions well, because I know what it feels like to be an invalid now and then but still participate in family activities.

I feel like the blindness bit was too much? I mean for Chase…[Read more]

@esther-c @mineralizedwritings @rae @savannah_grace2009 @smiley @keilah-h @ellette-giselle @koshka @grcr @theducktator @highscribeofaetherium @anyone-else-idk-lol

I (finally) made a Pinterest account! Even if y’all don’t have Pinterest, you can check it out here(just delete the space after the h; I know KP doesn’t like links, so😂):

h…[Read more]