Ruth

@jonas

I can kinda see it now… Nope, big black warhorse. I have a pic like I’m picturing but pics aren’t working…

@highscribeofaetherium

For some reason, I can’t see Zahlin riding an elk, only a large, black war horse.

@jonas

I also posted something on his armor. BTW, the Realn like a stylized broad chest and thin stomach, that’s why his torso is like that.

@jonas okay

NOOOOO!!!!! Just when I can post it and pics aren’t working!!!!!!!!!!!!!

@jonas

Ugh, this looks messy, I did alter it to look better on the original watercolor, but haven’t scanned it into our computer yet. Make the contour of his cheek bones less defined and his scar less sloppy, and it should be fine.

@hybridlore

Sorry, I didn’t see your reply, my notifs are acting strange, they’ll show me some of my notifications but not all for whatever reason.

He’s a character that may act as Narrator but is definitely going to be best friend of Rain, a girl who stars as MC. He’s either sarcastic or completely honest, or just telling jokes. He doesn’t like…[Read more]

I think the only things keeping me writing rn, are Nahim, it’s an escape for me, and that I JUST CAN’T STOP!!!!!

there’s a story about Fanny Crosby where she was banned from poetry in school, she wasn’t allowed to write it, but she just couldn’t stop. The principal took it as a sign she was destined to be a poet. And she was.

If I tried to stop…[Read more]

One thing about girls, is we get emotionally attached to thing we love really easily. I’ll go sob over the death of a charrie, and C is like…no emotion at all.

This is why men are placed with authority over women, they are equals, but still the man is the head of the house. Why? Because they aren’t usually emotionally driven.

Anyways, I often…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Thanks! I may have or may not have stayed up past my bedtime reading this topic

@hybridlore
Plunk Google Docs in front of me and get a blank expression; plunk down Word, and get a smile.
I’ve used Word all my life and have only used Docs to share my book to those I don’t email.
I’m a Word girl forever!
It is easier to share a Docs, but I find formatting soooooo much easier personally with Word. There are writing apps…[Read more]

Nahim

This was like riding Leavar back home, though Leavar have less of barrels for stomachs. Oh! And elk don’t cover you in flammable slime! Nahim smiled, patting his elk and digging his fingers into it’s thick black and silver fur. He talked to it gently in Realn, the fair language rolling off his tongue with a heavy Nayhelmic accent.

He chose…[Read more]

@jonas

Conviction! XD

Alright, guys! Can we get to 300 pgs today!

I’m also gonna mention it’s more Western style than English, so if I mess up and I say something that isn’t in Western, @savannah_grace2009 please correct me.

I would hold the saddle horn for a trot or canter though. You’re gonna all get peppered with horse stuf and riding terms, tips, and tricks. BTW, cantering is the best!

The Quest
Fennin

Fennin mounted his elk, Oakheart, with the rest of the guests. He looked back at his mother, standing by the palace fountain, with streams of blue just being wiped from her face. How she had begged him not to go. Now, she strode forward and kissed him good-bye as he leaned down in his saddle. She whispered something in Lillening…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

If you’ve written anymore…can you post it and tag me…plz?????