R.M. Archer

@lorelei-writer No, tis fine!!

Ohh fun! Yeah, I guess mine’s a practice novel too since it’s my first one. lol Mine is set in the 60’s Civil Rights time period and it’s about an african american girl (one POV) and an american girl (other POV). But what’s unusual about mine is that Sue-Anna (the american) is one of the few nice people when it…[Read more]

@lrose5 Sorry for the late reply!

My WIP is about a maidservant who runs away from a palace and teams up with a group of rebels, who are trying to stop the evil prince before his coronation. It’s basically just a practice novel for me. What about you?
XD We’re about opposite on our opinions. XD XP I like sweet tea, but don’t really like fruit…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 Wow, that’s really amazing!! So well-written and beautiful!

As for critique, maybe change “She’s run” to “she has run.”

@ava-blue
I don’t have one for specific characters yet, but I made a playlist full of 50’s and 60’s songs to listen to to get into the mood and setting of my story! lol

@freedomwriter76
XDD Yeah, that may take a while.. lol
YES I WANT A Q&A!!! lol

AW THEY”RE SO CUTEEEEE!!! *heart eyes*

@freedomwriter76
Thanks!!

HOW?? They’re so good!!!! I wanna meet these characters now! lol Set me up a zoom call with them or something loll

@freedomwriter76
WHAT AVATAR MAKER WAS THAT? THEY LOOK AMAZINGGGG!!!

@ava-blue
Thank you!!! 🙂

@gracie-j
Thank you!!!!

@freedomwriter76

yeah! Which is why i’m adding Sue-Anna into my story to show a POV of someone who does care.

YESSS!! I’ll find some for us. XD

Thank you!!!!!

@gracie-j
Thanks!

Here’s Sue-Anna’s. It’s SO hard to find pictures from a certain time period but I tried. XD Sue-Anna is NOT from that time period I’m 99% sure, but it just gives me an idea about what she looks like. lol

@gracie-j
Oh, ok! Good! lol That clarifies things for me now.

@freedomwriter76
YES!!!! I ain’t emotional but this is gonna be hard to write. *sighs* history, history, history. I don’t like being a southerner bc we were the meanest in the Civil Rights stuff. See, I ain’t the proudest to be American.

XDD Ok lol YESS *sobs with you and hands you chocolate* Maybe they exist somewhere. lol

@freedomwriter76
Aw thank you! <3 <3 (ahh ok.) Yes!! I finally started working on the novel so MAYBE I’ll have some sneak peeks in the future. lol

XDD YES! *tries to keep it a secret* XD But he’s classified as a broken boy and those are the BEST. lolll (sadly it’s hard to find good broken boys irl… Or so my parents say. XD Books give us high…[Read more]

I tried. XD *wonders if stealing images from Pinterest and Google is copyright*

@freedomwriter76
I absolutely LOVE those! I fallen in love with Riker and I haven’t even met him yet. (too bad he’s already married and probably taken by you or Grace. lol) XD And Naja is adorable!! <33

@freedomwriter76
Yes… Same!! I think. lol We’re homeschooled for manyy reasons. Well, I like being homeschooled bc of those reasons-politics, peer pressure, teenagers nowdays… lol Yeah, I hear from my parents too cause articles are confusing. lol

@freedomwriter76
Ok, just wow. SO TRUE. I LOVE IT! I could rant for a while about stuff in America but I won’t… Like it’s confusing but I’m proud to be free but not at the same time. Originally we were free to be Christ-like but now we’re free to be whatever. And that whatever is NOT what God or the founding fathers wanted America to be like.…[Read more]

@gracie-j

*used emotionally too many times* Like if she starts growing and then gets setback from something, what part of the story is that?

@gracie-j
Ahh, ok! So what would a setback emotionally be? Would that be the middle emotionally?