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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Mr. Nice guy in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years, 8 months ago
@R-J-Wordsmith I LOVE THIS. 😮 All of it! It’s hilarious and riddled with twisted cliches. Only ‘corrective’ things to say—here.
“Your Majesty” I said, panting for breath—there should be a comma after the spoken line
“My loyal subject.” He boomed.—same here—comma, not period
“Arise sir Ootchacha—should ‘sir’ be capitaliz…
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic G.K. Chesterton in the forum Book Discussions 7 years, 8 months ago
@Northerner I have no idea where my first post went. Here. Have it again.
Okay guys.
@Hope gave me a book with three of G.K. Chesterton’s novels in it as an early birthday present, and though I have only read one of them so far it completely blew my mind.
It was The Ball and the Cross.Has anyone else read it? If so, can we please discuss how…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy started the topic G.K. Chesterton in the forum Book Discussions 7 years, 8 months ago
Okay guys.
@Hope gave me a book with three of G.K. Chesterton’s novels in it as an early birthday present, and though I have only read one of them so far it completely blew my mind.
It was The Ball and the Cross.Has anyone else read it? If so, can we please discuss how amazing it is? If you haven’t read it… don’t waste another minute of…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy started the topic G.K. Chesterton in the forum Book Discussions 7 years, 8 months ago
Okay guys.
@Hope gave me a book with three of G.K. Chesterton’s novels in it as an early birthday present, and though I have only read one of them so far it completely blew my mind.
It was The Ball and the Cross.Has anyone else read it? If so, can we please discuss how amazing it is? If you haven’t read it… don’t waste another minute of…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy started the topic G.K. Chesterton in the forum Book Discussions 7 years, 8 months ago
Okay guys.
@Hope gave me a book with three of G.K. Chesterton’s novels in it as an early birthday present, and though I have only read one of them so far it completely blew my mind.
It was The Ball and the Cross.Has anyone else read it? If so, can we please discuss how amazing it is? If you haven’t read it… don’t waste another minute of your…[Read more]
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Ethryndal replied to the topic Rogue One in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 8 months ago
@r-j-wordsmith They really were such beautiful deaths. Besides maybe Bodhi getting blown up in his ship… But Jyn and Cassian’s… *wrings hands and weeps* I’m glad it didn’t show them lying on the ground dead or something, because that would have been morbid. But being enveloped in light is tragically awesome.
@widdrim VADER. HE GREW UP. I…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Calling all KeePers— the Realm of Pen needs you! in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 8 months ago
@R-J-Wordsmith thanks for being constant with these; they’re so awesome!
Here, have a new topic… ink. 😀 -
Snapper started the topic Spring Writing/Reading Goals in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 8 months ago
Fall and Winter months are over, and that’s crazy, but its true. Just yesterday I made the Fall and Winter Goals topic. Or maybe that wasn’t yesterday, but either way, it feels like that.
Well, I was able to complete my goal last time, finishing my novel before the appointed time, and since it worked so nicely last time, I figured I’d make…[Read more] -
Snapper replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 8 months ago
@overcomer @jess @daeus @kate-flournoy @winter-rose @northerner @ethryndal @r-j-wordsmith @graciegirl I’ll be writing/copying/typing up stuff for about a half-an-hour.
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 8 months ago
Hey! 🙂 I’m editing a poem this morning. Do any of want to join me? 🙂 @dragon-snapper @winter-rose @graciegirl @northerner @ethryndal @r-j-wordsmith @daeus @jess @anyone ?
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Jess replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 8 months ago
I’m going to be outlining/writing/staring-at-the-screen for an unknown amount of time, if anyone wants to join me 😛
@winter-rose, @dragon-snapper, @overcomer, @r-j-wordsmith, @ethryndal, @anybody who wants to join -
Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic A Short Fairy Tale Story in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years, 8 months ago
Those are some good ideas, @kate-flournoy . I was thinking that I needed to either make the story more about the princess, or the peddler, and I started to go with the princess, which is why I cut out some at the end that talked about his life after the whole affair. However, what you wrote made me think about it some more, and I think the…[Read more]
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Mallory O'Bier started the topic A Short Fairy Tale Story in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years, 8 months ago
Hey guys,
I’ve been working on this short story I wrote a while back, and I thought it might be a good idea before I get started on the next draft to ask for your opinions and see if any of you have ideas for improving it. (I’d really appreciate them!) 🙂
I wrote draft 1 1/2 recently and looking over it afterward, it occurred to me that it’s…[Read more]
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Mallory O'Bier started the topic A Short Fairy Tale Story in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years, 8 months ago
Hey guys,
I’ve been working on this short story I wrote a while back, and I thought it might be a good idea before I get started on the next draft to ask for your opinions and see if any of you have ideas for improving it. (I’d really appreciate them!) 🙂
I wrote draft 1 1/2 recently and looking over it afterward, it occurred to me that it’s…[Read more]
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 8 months ago
@winter-rose @daeus @overcomer @ethryndal @northerner @perfectfifths @kina-lamb @kate-flournoy @the-bean @hope @jane-maree @graciegirl @r-j-wordsmith @allthepeoples
I’m here! I’m here! I know it’s been a while, but I’m here now! -
Kina Lamb replied to the topic Hi guys! in the forum Start HERE 7 years, 8 months ago
Thank you so much, @r-j-wordsmith! That’s really kind of you – and encouraging. : )
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Calling all KeePers— the Realm of Pen needs you! in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 8 months ago
Love that last one, @R-J-Wordsmith. *grins* Makes me want to write it…
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Arella Noreen replied to the topic Hey, Y'all! in the forum Start HERE 7 years, 8 months ago
@r-j-wordsmith All’s well, my friend! Thank you for your opinion, as well. As for fantasy, most of it is made up of various short stories, although I have a full novel planned for sometime in the future. I lean towards more Tolkein kind of worlds: dragons, sword fighting, and adventure.
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 8 months ago
I think I’ll quit now, @r-j-wordsmith . Thanks for writing with me. 🙂
I wrote some more of a poem I’m working on, and figured out some unresolved plot issues I need to fix with my novel outline. I have a lot of conflicting ideas for my story world and villain that are confusing my muse … anyway, it’s a step in the right direction! 🙂
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 8 months ago
Awesome, @r-j-wordsmith ! 🙂 If this is to end in fire … we’ll just write. 😉 🙂
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