R. J. Wordsmith

Close enough to get a bit of wind and a sizeable power outage afterward, but far enough away to not sustain any damage. @epicaddie2

@epicaddie2 *shakes head* Nope, Florida. I’ve heard California is much drier. Here…we just get rained on. All the time.

@salome01w4g You like the cold, hm? You definitely wouldn’t like where I live, then. Here it’s hot and humid. Not cold often, even during “winter”.

@dragon-snapper Ooh! I really like that. I love all the different colors. Does her name have any special significance or a cool meaning or something?

*grins* Thank you very muchly! @winter-rose

*is jealous* Well, I’m doing school, but I’m here with you in spirit, Gabby. @winter-rose

GUYS, THESE ARE ALL SO COOL!! ~ the sorta silent stalker of this page and awol member of this glorious kingdom

@Aislinn-Mollisong got it. 🙂 You did mention that you weren’t going to use that in the final, but I wanted to make sure. They’re fine to use for fun, but if you’re going to use them commercially in any way… yep. Copyrights. 😉

Awesome! Show it to me when you’re done.

@Aislinn-mollisong it looks great, but I’ve seen that image floating around and I’m pretty sure it’s not free; did you find the artist and ask for copyright license?

But as far as composition and layout, it looks great. The only thing is you might want to consider a slightly bolder, straighter font. Something more in tune with the fantasy mood.

Here’s a link to an article I found: https://www.hunker.com/12587271/what-cuts-through-steel

@ethryndal

You know you’re a writer when you google to see what kinds of materials can cut through steel… @dragon-snapper @ethryndal @kate-flournoy

I’m gonna tag @daeus because he’ll probably be able to tell you more than I can.

In my opinion, this is a bit too long, and it reveals a bit too much about the story. I can’t tell you how or where to cut, but that’s just my thought. You want to keep a bit of the story to reveal later, right?

@Aislinn-Mollisong I have never used Canva, but @Hope has had a very good experience with it, so yes. That could be another option.

@Jane-Maree I want to meet them. 😀

*taps mic* anyone out there? I’ll be…well, I don’t know what I’m doing. Probably just throwing words on a page. If anyone wants to join me, you’re most welcome. @ethryndal @jessi-rae @dragon-snapper

@That_Writer_Girl_99 Imma side with @Ethryndal, but I see where you’re coming from. My sister Elizabeth agrees. 😉
My beans with genuine characters is… if they’re ONLY genuine, they fall kind of flat. They need to be dynamic too, and Luke leaves things to be desired in that area, especially considering he’s the hero.
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Exactly. He isn’t an incredibly ideal character, but he is genuine, and I think that’s what sets him apart from each of the other Star Wars characters. His hardships didn’t begin until he was much older, giving him that sort of “spoiled brat” vibe. Until, of course, he discovered he has to save the world. That tends to mature a person. @ethryndal

*snorts* I can’t say I see the resemblance.

Okay but seriously. You see my point, right? About Luke? @ethryndal

@That_Writer_Girl_99 @Ethryndal is right. Let’s just say… world domination is a favorite hobby of mine.

@ethryndal *pauses sobbing uncontrollably to glare scathingly at you* What is it with y’all and patting me head? Why must everyone pat my head? I cannot be consoled!