Kingdom Pen | Racheal | Friends Activity https://kingdompen.org/members/r-e-p/activity/friends/ Activity feed for Racheal's friends. Wed, 22 Apr 2026 18:47:41 -0400 https://buddypress.org/?v= en-US 30 hourly 2 9b247115f0c873af9c32f5d827a718a0 Ingrid replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/character-art-exchange-2/page/41/#post-75476 Mon, 23 Jul 2018 16:16:55 -0400 @nicolerivers03  Just taggin’ you again in case you didn’t see Kale yet!  😉

]]> 6d1e3c2398cf2eecd4dfa8696f0ba3b3 Ingrid replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/character-art-exchange-2/page/41/#post-75393 Fri, 20 Jul 2018 13:58:30 -0400 @dekreel  Awww…thanks!  🙂

]]> c2851e4f0364d43a35339870025e1515 Ingrid replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/character-art-exchange-2/page/41/#post-75312 Wed, 18 Jul 2018 15:46:24 -0400 Here’s some characters I wanted to share with you guys…my sister and I started their story a while back and I brought out the notebook recently.  Hence the sketches!  🙂

They are four siblings:

 

 

]]> 496556786f7163d9166173512d8a3390 Ingrid replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/character-art-exchange-2/page/41/#post-75311 Wed, 18 Jul 2018 15:40:26 -0400 Here she is, @nicolerivers03!

]]> 33ca9757d16e5fe17adb4936040ce6cb Ingrid replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/character-art-exchange-2/page/41/#post-75305 Tue, 17 Jul 2018 22:02:05 -0400 @nicolerivers03  Hey!  I’ll draw her—she sounds like a ton of fun!  I’ll get her done within the next few days.  🙂

]]> 67fbf7d1555b96718b4c9acb10fcac1c Ingrid replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/character-art-exchange-2/page/39/#post-73710 Sun, 03 Jun 2018 18:46:13 -0400 @leumeister  😍😍😍

]]> fe7f63bce843e590a12c0413b21313ba Ingrid replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/character-art-exchange-2/page/39/#post-73613 Fri, 01 Jun 2018 15:31:00 -0400 @leumeister

Well, I found some time this morning.  Here they are!  I wasn’t sure what age Echo is sooo she might look on the young side (and I pictured her kind of shabby but I don’t know if that’s what you wanted).  Anyway, hopefully they’re something close to what you were looking for!  🙂

]]> 0ecb5acbbab609ff4eb94b913194c84a Ingrid replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/character-art-exchange-2/page/39/#post-73496 Thu, 31 May 2018 16:08:13 -0400 @leumeister  I would like to try one/both of your characters…but I have hardly any time to spare at the moment, as I am helping prepare for my sister’s graduation party this Saturday.  They do sound like awesome characters though and it may be next week before I get to them.  🙂

]]> f927fe292b0acad26bb7db4302d5c2aa Ingrid posted a new activity comment https://kingdompen.org/activity/p/80539/#acomment-80771 Thu, 31 May 2018 16:03:37 -0400 Sorry this is such a late response! I was in Tennessee for a week with limited internet access. Anyway, THANK YOU so very much for your comments and taking the time to read my story! And you were most definitely not too harsh. I needed some critical feedback. 🙂 Thanks again!

In reply to - NC Stokes posted an update @ingridrd Hello! I finished reading Substitute Wednesday, but I’m just now giving you the critiques. Oops. Because I can’t make comments, I just typed up my critiques. Please forgive me i […] ]]> ed8550e40296a6f150bf158809b98276 Ingrid replied to the topic WANTED: Alpha Readers!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/wanted-alpha-readers/page/3/#post-72903 Sun, 20 May 2018 18:50:45 -0400 @daughteroftheking  Oh don’t worry about it!  Thanks again.  😉

]]> 6adbdf0054f31ba074ace99540434b5a Ingrid replied to the topic WANTED: Alpha Readers!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/wanted-alpha-readers/page/3/#post-72877 Sat, 19 May 2018 16:20:09 -0400 @kaya-young  Thank so much for reading and for the comments!!! 🙂

]]> c5f9eb51930570740ff5098a53038750 Ingrid replied to the topic WANTED: Alpha Readers!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/wanted-alpha-readers/page/2/#post-72844 Fri, 18 May 2018 21:27:02 -0400 @jenwriter17  Thank you!  And thanks again ever so much for reading. 🙂

]]> 66dd9c5421b9fad914842e22c9f54d88 Ingrid replied to the topic Alpha/Beta Readers for My Dystopian WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/alpha-beta-readers-for-my-dystopian-wip/page/8/#post-72833 Fri, 18 May 2018 14:54:19 -0400 @jenwriter17  About the title, I’m actually thinking @skredder ‘s idea of Underneath fits it perfectly!  🙂

]]> 992c1fe8a7ba322a64dbb71aa0603202 Ingrid replied to the topic WANTED: Alpha Readers!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/wanted-alpha-readers/page/2/#post-72832 Fri, 18 May 2018 14:52:31 -0400 @jenwriter17

Okay, I’m gonna kind of sort of *completely* copy you and ask you some questions about my story, if you don’t mind (since you’re the only one who has finished it so far)!

1.  Who was your favorite character and why?

2. Were there any scenes that felt unnecessary or just like a complete info-dump?

3. Are the characters (especially…[Read more]

]]> 958a079e57f3707750cd43bb2eaa8afd Ingrid replied to the topic I Need Help with My American Character in the forum Characters http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/i-need-help-with-my-american-character/page/2/#post-72831 Fri, 18 May 2018 14:08:40 -0400 @jenwriter17  OH!  I actually went to England and France while we were in Europe, and of the two, I liked England better.  I live in Ohio so we flew to D.C. and then took a 7 hour flight to London.

We stayed in a London flat for a few days to sight-see and also to visit my “sister” (who isn’t biological but is an orphan who we hosted a while ba…[Read more]

]]> 0a0e9adbfb3b0e6602fe74cad261f169 Ingrid changed their profile picture https://kingdompen.org/activity/p/79993/ Thu, 17 May 2018 12:03:13 -0400 0 8d87cd0bead6bdf310423c905f0fffca Ingrid replied to the topic Alpha/Beta Readers for My Dystopian WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/alpha-beta-readers-for-my-dystopian-wip/page/7/#post-72717 Wed, 16 May 2018 14:12:08 -0400 @jenwriter17

1. My favorite character is Jax.  *hugs him* He is very headstrong and brave, while still a kind gentleman.

2. My favorite scene would have to be the one near the end when Uma and Rin say they’ll be friends forever…it’s so sweet and you really triggered a lot of emotion.  🙂

3. Hmmm…no specific scenes.  Some sentences here an…[Read more]

]]> c90db7d80e67a68930ee5589d2b0198d Ingrid replied to the topic WANTED: Alpha Readers!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/wanted-alpha-readers/page/2/#post-72607 Tue, 15 May 2018 11:40:16 -0400 @daughteroftheking  Okay, great!!!  Thank you.  😉

@kaya-young  Awesomesauce.  Thanks again!

]]> 5adda9fc80c6cb6c25aebe7535512267 Ingrid replied to the topic Character Name Exchange in the forum Fantasy http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/character-name-exchange/page/11/#post-72527 Mon, 14 May 2018 14:20:28 -0400 @kaya-young  *rubs hands together*  Okay, here’s what I got…

Romina, Zora, Elodie, Alma, Melora, Maris, Winter, Lyra, Avalon, Odette, and Elowen.  Hope these help!  (And sorry I was late in responding…)  🙂

]]> 2e509b8a88135097ffb55b927165fdab Ingrid replied to the topic WANTED: Alpha Readers!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/wanted-alpha-readers/page/2/#post-72526 Mon, 14 May 2018 14:15:48 -0400 @daughteroftheking  I don’t want to seem at all annoying or anything, but I wondered if you were still Alpha reading for me?  No rush whatsoever, I just want to see how many people I have reading.  Thanks!  😉

@kaya-young  I know you got pretty far into my story, but have you finished yet?  Again, no rush!  I just wondered.  And thank you for you…[Read more]

]]> 7f460ce9b9391e5e8d5582718b65e8b7 Ingrid replied to the topic Character/Fiction inspired Typography/Art #2 in the forum Art http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/character-fiction-inspired-typography-art-2/page/2/#post-72507 Sun, 13 May 2018 22:43:52 -0400 @daughteroftheking  Oh that’s cool!  🙂 🙂

]]> 18f59825513b62f5e804920fbbc13e22 Ingrid replied to the topic Character/Fiction inspired Typography/Art #2 in the forum Art http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/character-fiction-inspired-typography-art-2/page/2/#post-72379 Fri, 11 May 2018 18:55:42 -0400 @jenwriter17  Why thank you.  🙂

]]> 7a9f58fdb4c5f26b6bb8fffa52d50a01 Ingrid replied to the topic Character/Fiction inspired Typography/Art #2 in the forum Art http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/character-fiction-inspired-typography-art-2/page/2/#post-72374 Fri, 11 May 2018 14:52:29 -0400 @skredder  Oh ho, I like it a lot!!!!

]]> 3a4a49588f44e62be80bfd531ed5e5a0 Ingrid replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/character-art-exchange-2/page/38/#post-72296 Thu, 10 May 2018 11:36:23 -0400 @alia  Oh, I’m so glad you like them!  Yes, they do look similar.  Ha.  Funny.  🙂

]]> 4766c3823374dd11f382b1a1e5e6f6fd Ingrid replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/character-art-exchange-2/page/38/#post-72252 Wed, 09 May 2018 21:00:18 -0400 @notawriter  🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂

]]> c7939228e2e3ef31cc7e5c5ca99aa93a Ingrid replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/character-art-exchange-2/page/38/#post-72248 Wed, 09 May 2018 18:44:19 -0400 @notawriter  Randal is from my fantasy WIP.  He’s basically the heartthrob.  XD 🙂

]]> 815213e7db1378eecce094ac87215bbd Ingrid replied to the topic Alpha/Beta Readers for My Dystopian WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/alpha-beta-readers-for-my-dystopian-wip/page/6/#post-72220 Wed, 09 May 2018 14:29:50 -0400 @jenwriter17  I am completely caught up on reading your story and I’ve gotta say….I am totally captivated!  Keep up the awesome work.

(And post the next chapter soon, will ya? 🙂 🙂 🙂 )

]]> 361cb570850fd3b8319053631150d8d1 Ingrid replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/character-art-exchange-2/page/38/#post-72219 Wed, 09 May 2018 13:37:26 -0400 @notawriter  AHHH, he is indeed a cutie!  Thank you so much (and don’t worry about the wait…).  🙂

]]> df0840a60bcf2bc10f32352d775c94de Ingrid replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/character-art-exchange-2/page/38/#post-72165 Tue, 08 May 2018 21:20:49 -0400 @notawriter  No pressure or anything, I just wondered if you were still interested in drawing Randal for me?  🙂

]]> e72eff3a2c8f47841529dc604864c760 Ingrid replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/character-art-exchange-2/page/38/#post-72113 Mon, 07 May 2018 22:05:46 -0400 @alia  I went ahead and did Mitch as well…hope you like him!

]]> 8f0231df417c225fc443c077ee2311f8 Ingrid replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/character-art-exchange-2/page/38/#post-72110 Mon, 07 May 2018 21:46:03 -0400 @alia  I drew Joy for ya.  She’s a cutie.  🙂  🙂

]]> 46d93c1b170726d758f12857633ad891 Ingrid replied to the topic Baby's First Story in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/babys-first-story/page/4/#post-72097 Sun, 06 May 2018 22:04:10 -0400 @daughteroftheking  Hahahaha…this is great!  You were a creative child.  😉

]]> 86d4b6cd0598f2f908ac276b040f1a06 Ingrid replied to the topic I Need Help with My American Character in the forum Characters http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/i-need-help-with-my-american-character/page/2/#post-72096 Sun, 06 May 2018 19:33:17 -0400 @ariel-ashira  LOL

I visited England two summers ago and it was so funny because we met a British family and their youngest child liked imitating American accents!  It’s so weird to think we have accents too!

]]> 3b69750dccc80177f506da77109a9773 Ingrid replied to the topic I Need Help with My American Character in the forum Characters http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/i-need-help-with-my-american-character/page/2/#post-72095 Sun, 06 May 2018 19:32:03 -0400 @seekjustice  I am indeed.  🙂

]]> 811f1fc59e030281f1fe1973cec50657 Ingrid replied to the topic WANTED: Alpha Readers!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/wanted-alpha-readers/page/2/#post-72094 Sun, 06 May 2018 19:31:21 -0400 @daughteroftheking  *many thumbs up*  Thank you!

]]> 17f2a8d6ce042c0936b96d13a2f75bd2 Ingrid replied to the topic I Need Help with My American Character in the forum Characters http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/i-need-help-with-my-american-character/page/2/#post-72059 Sat, 05 May 2018 18:07:48 -0400 @seekjustice  I also live in Ohio, so if you have any questions having to do with the best—er, our state, please tag me!  😉

]]> ed0a861b0c59163e0fb290860bfc5a84 Ingrid replied to the topic WANTED: Alpha Readers!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/wanted-alpha-readers/page/2/#post-72058 Sat, 05 May 2018 17:51:10 -0400 @ariel-ashira  Thank you so much!

]]> 972bd5904566867e83be5bba457de5b0 Ingrid replied to the topic WANTED: Alpha Readers!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/wanted-alpha-readers/page/2/#post-72037 Fri, 04 May 2018 14:19:08 -0400 @kaya-young  I like that part too.  🙂

]]> 11d5d5571b407b43c805f8cc17c97396 Ingrid replied to the topic WANTED: Alpha Readers!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/wanted-alpha-readers/page/2/#post-72033 Fri, 04 May 2018 13:18:22 -0400 @ariella-newheart  Thanks for your comments!  And don’t worry about being late.  🙂 🙂

]]> dc6b76819bf70684d1d64a1e5018e016 Ingrid replied to the topic PRAYER REQUESTS #2 in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/prayer-requests-2-2/page/42/#post-71980 Thu, 03 May 2018 16:40:10 -0400 @jenwriter17  Awww…of course!  I know how hard it is to lose a pet.  ❤️

]]> 0f47d8c94725fd93ae50aa249d5e7639 Ingrid replied to the topic WANTED: Alpha Readers!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/wanted-alpha-readers/#post-71974 Thu, 03 May 2018 13:47:24 -0400 @jenwriter17 @kaya-young  Alrighty!  Here you go.  Thanks again!

https://docs.google.com/document/d/11AHdPPXbizqzep23-mmpjsj1HndllfhrEjVt5cOq1Oc/edit#

]]> 9712c6220a12f8892c46af17ab81a9e9 Ingrid replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/character-art-exchange-2/page/37/#post-71972 Thu, 03 May 2018 11:51:57 -0400 @sage-g @notawriter @ariella-newheart @sarah-anson

Could one or two of you possibly draw me a character, please? 🙂

Randal—is 17, has auburn hair, green-yellow eyes, and a soft smile.  He has a long white scar down the side of his neck.  Clothing-wise, anything casual, probably just a T-shirt and jeans.

Hopefully that’s enough info!  😉

]]> 32e147b563d193779c6765b47bd6d211 Ingrid replied to the topic WANTED: Alpha Readers!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/wanted-alpha-readers/#post-71971 Thu, 03 May 2018 11:41:39 -0400 @jenwriter17  @kaya-young  Thank you both so very much for putting time into commenting on this for me!  Would you like me to post the entire book here or…?

]]> 171fbefb195a39bef8bd68e6df62c100 Ingrid replied to the topic WANTED: Alpha Readers!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/wanted-alpha-readers/#post-71938 Wed, 02 May 2018 23:49:33 -0400 @kaya-young  Wow, thank you so much!  I can definitely post the entire book if you want.

Well, I have not completed any other full books, but the sequel to the one you’re reading now is in the works and I also have a Superhero WIP along with some short stories/novelettes.  🙂 🙂

]]> 66a04a60d465de37bdeff6ebe415647f Ingrid replied to the topic WANTED: Alpha Readers!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/wanted-alpha-readers/#post-71931 Wed, 02 May 2018 16:34:22 -0400 @jenwriter17  The whole book is written, I just don’t want to overwhelm anyone with critiquing the entire story…unless you want to.  🙂

]]> 4386e60750907aef10ebe2435ffee9d2 Ingrid replied to the topic WANTED: Alpha Readers!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/wanted-alpha-readers/#post-71928 Wed, 02 May 2018 14:46:33 -0400 To those of you who are interested, here are the next two chapters of the book.  I’m pretty sure the fourth chapter is kinda confusing, so if you’d give me some pointers there I’d appreciate it!

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1-jzVzEBjTyvq5vKUBAGZ-0Lt4-_bWLJw1Uofs_59wmQ/edit

@jenwriter17 @kaya-young

]]> 6816708446fce6b232d120e7a9a4f3b2 Ingrid replied to the topic Baby's First Story in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/babys-first-story/page/4/#post-71926 Wed, 02 May 2018 13:50:50 -0400 Woah, no idea what happened to that first picture.  *scratches head*

]]> 345afb5eb88e4067c961cea2950b48fd Ingrid replied to the topic Baby's First Story in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/babys-first-story/page/3/#post-71925 Wed, 02 May 2018 12:58:55 -0400 And here are the pics…

 

 

 

]]> 669ab5da1b533ed4e9e5f0e35e55efb9 Ingrid replied to the topic Baby's First Story in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/babys-first-story/page/3/#post-71924 Wed, 02 May 2018 12:51:39 -0400 So I found this the other day…

I wrote it when I was seven and the spelling is just horrible.  *facepalm*

I’ll write out the story since it’s hardly legible (and I’ll fix the spelling and grammar mistakes):

Once upon a time there lived a cat.  Now this cat was not an ordinary cat.  The cat has lost a leg.  The cat’s name was Pretty. 

There w…[Read more]

]]> 2bcffa398dc4c4a29d762417a886533a Ingrid replied to the topic Character/Fiction inspired Typography/Art #2 in the forum Art http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/character-fiction-inspired-typography-art-2/page/2/#post-71923 Wed, 02 May 2018 12:31:40 -0400 @catwing  I’m still developing her superpower but she can camouflage herself to blend in with anything.  🙂

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