@queen_of_alvastia
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic DRAFTING FORUM!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
@koshka awwww 😢 for the dad leaving!! Also little Zlati even tho he’s seven still BABY TO ME!! AND AHH RASCALLY VULK YESSSS!!!
@queen_of_alvastia @freedomwriter76 NOOOO LYN!! NYX!!! GRIMM!!! I NEED THEM!! XD AND NOVEEEEMBERRRRR
also A’Grend is Ara and November’s home. It’s a type and shadow of Eden. (I got the name by mixing the word Garden…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic DRAFTING FORUM!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12 @queen_of_alvastia
Y’all, I finally got the first scene for Heart of Gold writen!!! I’m totally thrilled…
Sgriss, sgriss, shgrit. The blade slid back against the whetstone, its blue-black blade coated in the fine grit.
Zlatan watched his father’s brow smooth and contract with his work. The o…
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic DRAFTING FORUM!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @queen_of_alvastia
Everyone is now extremely tense. I fold my hands once more and sigh.
Well…we have now made it near the end of our story…well…backstory anyway.
And now…we can return to Cirque’s history. Where everything fell apart…
Once upon a night…there were two brothers.
They led their newl…[Read more]
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Anatra replied to the topic Howdy! 🙂 in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 2 months ago
@queen_of_alvastia @freedomwriter76
Oh, for sure XD
“No great mind has ever existed without a touch of madness”
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic DRAFTING FORUM!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
PART 2 of LYN’s PART!
@freedomwriter76 @queen_of_alvastia @koshka @elishavet-pidyon Ik I’m splitting it into a lot of parts but bear with me. Gotta keep the suspense and intrigue up and I told ya, her stories kinda intense. Specially cuz she doesn’t find out bout it….until Um…stuff happens 😂
SPOILER ALERT FOR BOOK 2. This is actual…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic DRAFTING FORUM!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @elishavet-pidyob @queen_of_alvastia
You have made it this far!! But be warned…there is more treachery to come!!
But now, I must tell you…things will get a bit bumpy…
I’m afraid I MUST interrupt this history lesson…and before I can tell you what takes place next, I must jump into the future, to Lyn and what takes pla…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic DRAFTING FORUM!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
Thanks, and that’s okay. At least one can be perfectly graceful in imagination.. 😉 XD
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic DRAFTING FORUM!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @queen_of_alvastia
MWAHAHAHA XD
Once upon a night, two brothers lived in harmony.
The eldest; kind, with a sense of humor, and fond of all that lived, and the youngest, a ball of life, making the world his stage; wanting for attention.
Until attention was all he wanted.
Early in his life,…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic DRAFTING FORUM!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
@queen_of_alvastia @freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @koshka
You enter, finding yourselves in dark, velvet room. I sit before you in a dark chair, hands folded, smirking.Ahh…so you wish to hear the story of Lyn?
The story of Cirque?
well then, come on in.
But be warned!! This story is a bit…mad indeed.
But if you’re sure….then all I can say…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic DRAFTING FORUM!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic DRAFTING FORUM!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka YALL ITS ALL WONDERFUL!!! POOR BUCKY!!! AND MIKKEL!! SOB!!! 😭
@elishavet-pidyon love it!!! And thank u!! Glad y’all like it!!
ALSO I WOULD LUV TO SHARE LYN’s BACKSTORY WITH YALL!! But it’s a bit complicated (A LOT COMPLICATED!!) sooo do y’all want me to?
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Microphage6032 replied to the topic Howdy! 🙂 in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 2 months ago
@queen_of_alvastia 🙂
Yeah I can say many words and speak full sentences in Japanese
though sometimes I have to review to remember certain words, grammar, or sentence formation.Here are some examples:
Onnanoko-wa tabeteimasu. – The girl is eating.
Kore-wa aki-no ki desu. – This is a tree in the fall.
Kyoo-wa suiyoobi desu. – Today is…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic DRAFTING FORUM!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12 @queen_of_alvastia
Here’s right part of Mikkel’s all-is-lost beat, right before dark-night-of-the-soul.
Fog swirled around him, penetrated by the dull sharpness of pain.
He tried to push it away, but it only gripped him tighter, searing his bones. Mikkel groaned.
Voices echoed through the…
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic SNEAK PEAK!?!?!? in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
You….you don’t know batman….?
then….that means you don’t know JOKER….OR HARLEY….SCREECH
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic DRAFTING FORUM!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @queen_of_alvastia AH! Thank y’all!
so I’m glad u brought the brother thing up because…he is actually not….but I am sooo glad he SEEMS like he is!!!
so in this same scene I’m hoping to establish that he Isn’t Ara’s brother so there’s no confusion, but that he’s like her brother.
so it’s gonna come out maybe in thi…[Read more]
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Microphage6032 replied to the topic Howdy! 🙂 in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 2 months ago
 @queen_of_alvastia Hello!
1. Um… I don’t read a whole lot of story books (what I DO read a lot is educational books… for fun…), but I guess I would talk to @freedomwriter76 since she’s writing a book (she’s not an author yet but she will be). But when I was younger, one of my favorite authors was Rachel Renée Russell.
2. This q…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 2 years, 2 months ago
Thank you! I’m so glad.
She and Picket meet in Ember Rising.
We were totally doing the same until we met Wheazy. Just so you know.😉 But Weezie and him are so sweet and fun together, and later on in the series, he really comes to depend on her, and her on him.And yes, she’s a lot of trouble. XD
Yes! Helmer’s awesome.
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Koshka replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 2 years, 2 months ago
YES, she is! And also yes, you first meet her in Ember Rising.
I still haven’t read all of Ember Falls. You know, that one part. *Sob*I have a friend who was still Pemma, but she’s not so sure now. *Shrug* They all develope a bit in the last couple books. (Reason I’m one of those rare people who prefer Green Embers to all…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 2 years, 2 months ago
AHHHH! THOSE ARE AWESOME!
Wheazy is hilarious! She’s Helmer’s niece. She’s a slave in First Warre (and is still soooo like her uncle). When they first meet she thinks he’s a trespasser and tries to shoot Pick.
I used to be totally Picket&Emma, but by the end of the books those two are like, brother and…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic DRAFTING FORUM!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @queen_of_alvastia @anyone-who-cares lol
HELLO EVERYONE!! I AM GOING TO ATTEMPT (emphasis on attempt XD) to write tonight….HEH.
ALSO! (don’t hold me to this as I may forget) But I might start putting whose POV the scene is from in Bold kinda like we do in the RPs, so yall know.
I write in 3rd person, but it is still…[Read more]
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