@princesswriter
Active 6 years, 6 months ago- Rank: Bumbling Henchman
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Jane Maree replied to the topic Fairytale Expectations in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years ago
@Ethryndal I guess I automatically assume that the guy will get the girl (or the girl will get the guy, whatever) so it would be a sort of unique twist to make it that they didn’t end up together in the end.
Personally I love it when fairy tale retellings are done in completely different genres. Like a steampunk beauty and the beast or a sci fi…[Read more]
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Jane Maree replied to the topic Cover Feedback in the forum Publishing & Platform 7 years ago
@Daeus it’s pretty cool! You could make the shadows a little heavier which would be a very subtle ominous layer, or add a little shading to the white around the whole picture. Not sure though.
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Lightningmouse and Ingrid are now friends 7 years ago
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Lightningmouse replied to the topic Character/Story Theme Songs in the forum Music 7 years ago
@lightniningmouse Oh, that’s a great idea. I don’t have a Spotify account, sadly, but writing them down or something is a good idea…*grabs pen*
Well, if you wanted to have one, you could get the free version XD and there’s a web version so that you wouldn’t have to download the program, but a written list is definitely helpful. I was plann…[Read more]
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Jane Maree replied to the topic So…I need some MORE advice in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years ago
@Dekreel I don’t really have problems in this quarter because I’m very good at just ignoring all my horrible mistakes in a first draft. And I also enjoy rewriting the full novel because it’s fun seeing the massive improvement in it. xD But still, I have friends who struggle with this. Three things you can try:
1: (as Kate said) write in…[Read more]
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Jane Maree replied to the topic NaNoWriMo in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years ago
@Kballen so exciting that you’re doing NaNo!! (I am too.) Like the others have said, having an outline is very helpful, and so is having a group of encouraging buddies who can spur you on in writing. That was one of the things that helped me most. 🙂
K.M. Weiland has a bunch of great advice on NaNo (here’s a link if you want to check it out). -
Jane Maree replied to the topic Character/Fiction inspired Typography/Art in the forum Art 7 years, 1 month ago
@ingridrd Ooh very nice. I love the colour theme you’ve used.
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Jane Maree replied to the topic Favorite Book? in the forum Book Discussions 7 years, 1 month ago
Out of Time trilogy – Nadine Brandes
Songkeeper Chronicles – Gillian Bronte Adams
The Tales of Goldstone Wood – Anne Elisabeth Stengl
The Mission League – Jill Williamson
Ashtown Burials – N.D. Wilson
Storming – K.M. WeilandAnd that’s just scraping the surface of my favourites list. 😛
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Jane Maree replied to the topic Critique this? in the forum Poetry Critiques 7 years, 1 month ago
@Dekreel to tone it down from being so dark, you could change the aspects of fear and horror/dismay that the tree feels, to a sense of confusion and curiosity. That would shift the mood from ‘scary’ to a much lighter feel.
A way to avoid so much of the human terminology you can use similes instead. Saying “I feel a great, pulsing joy in my heart”…[Read more]
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Lightningmouse replied to the topic Character/Story Theme Songs in the forum Music 7 years, 1 month ago
As I develop characters I like to add songs and pieces of music that remind me of them and their arcs to playlists on my Spotify. Occasionally I’ll make a list for a scene or a whole story, but I like to have a whole story complete and in front of me before I dive into a playlist for it.
ALSO, if anybody here has a Spotify account, I made a bunch…[Read more]
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Jane Maree replied to the topic SO…I need some advice in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 7 years, 1 month ago
@Dekreel something to think about is that Catcher in the Rye is about a character going on an adventure, and the reader experiencing his thoughts and emotions along the way.
I could list many many books that have this same vague plot. If I look at my bookshelf, there’s half a dozen that I see immediately which I could say had that idea as…[Read more] -
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Jane Maree and Joy are now friends 7 years, 1 month ago
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Jane Maree replied to the topic Writers' Corner #10 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 1 month ago
@SeekJustice alrightyo then. Farewell until next our paths cross! *salutes*
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Jane Maree replied to the topic Writers' Corner #10 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 1 month ago
@SeekJustice sweet! *waves*
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Jane Maree replied to the topic Writers' Corner #10 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 1 month ago
@SeekJustice @Catwing If either of you are still around–hi. I’m doing some brainstorming.
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Jane Maree replied to the topic Three and Seven ~ Finding Secrets in the forum Novel Critique Requests 7 years, 1 month ago
@Catwing that’s super! Just poke me after NaNo/whenever you need me to go over it and I’ll be happy to. (poke me because otherwise I’m 99% likely to completely forget xD)
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Jane Maree replied to the topic Three and Seven ~ Finding Secrets in the forum Novel Critique Requests 7 years, 1 month ago
@Catwing I would love to help out, (here comes the ‘but’) but I’m about to be participating in NaNoWriMo in November so I won’t have time to do anything during that month (because I also have another manuscript that I still have 100k left to edit/critique). HOWEVER, depending on your deadline and the length of your novel I might be able to fit it…[Read more]
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Jane Maree replied to the topic Writers' Corner #9 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 1 month ago
@Catwing I gotta go now. *vanishes*
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