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valtmy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 9 months ago
OK I’ve put in my suggestions in the doc.
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Joy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 9 months ago
@valtmy @catwing @rochellaine @seekjustice @whoever
Oy! I’m beta-reading again!
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valtmy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 9 months ago
I didn’t say you didn’t give enough info. I understood the “going to be late” thing was something that the reader doesn’t need to know now. It’s just jarring that this guy doesn’t know who Bathshua is but this other guy with him somehow does so I think an explanation is needed for that.
Sure I’ll be happy to take a look at your…[Read more]
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valtmy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 9 months ago
Hey. Just trying to get the motivation to start 😛
I’ve replied to your replies to my comments in your doc. Are there any other questions you want to ask me?
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valtmy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 9 months ago
@rochellaine @catwing @dekreel
I’m here now.
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Joy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 9 months ago
@seekjustice In that case I should read that part soon. XD
I actually finished a long time ago, and I’ve been passing the time binge-reading all the comments for the KPA.
I didn’t put periods after some of my sentences and it DRIVES… ME… CRAZY!!!!!
Anyway, I think I’ll sign off now. Good to see you!
Byeeee, @rochellaine! you’ve probably…[Read more]
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Joy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 9 months ago
@seekjustice I mean, if your sister didn’t know I’m not a fox, then that’s fine. XD Just be sure she doesn’t KEEP calling me a fox. 😉
I’m sorry, am I supposed to know who he is? It’s hard to keep track of characters…
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Joy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 9 months ago
@rochellaine Yeah, that one. XD
I just got to the part where Sapphire is trying to take Kai to the hospital with the help of Rain and another boy.
Ahhhh, the life of a writer…
Yeah, definitely.
Sooooo…. *tries to think of something to say*
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Joy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 9 months ago
@rochellaine Ooooh, poison ivy. What’s that like? I’ve never had it before.
I’m beta-reading Chelsea’s book. What are you up to?
Oh yeah, you said a long time ago that you would give an explanation or something considering your MBTI. If you don’t want to do that with one hand, that’s fine. 🙂
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Joy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 9 months ago
@catwing Fair enough. Umm… No suggestions off the top of my head. 🙂
I don’t have a blog. I DESPERATELY want one though.
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Joy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 9 months ago
@valtmy That’s all right. Good night!
@rochellaine Hello! Yeah, yeah, I miss you, too. 😉
How are you doing? Sorry I disappeared last time. I sorta drifted off.
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valtmy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 9 months ago
Hey. Not sure when you’ll be back but I’ll put my answer to your first question here before I go:
1. You found out Yishay very quickly. Would it be more interesting if it were not so obvious, or is it fine as it is? If I had him just go to his house and wait for Bathshua would that make it harder to figure out? But that seems quite…[Read more]
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valtmy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 9 months ago
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Joy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 9 months ago
@catwing I know… I need to stop by more often.
I’m beta-reading SeekJustice’s book. How ’bout you?
You ever going to update your blog? I enjoy reading it! 😀
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Joy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 9 months ago
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valtmy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 9 months ago
It’s not that I do not like fantasy (though I admit to never taking a fancy to high fantasy and magic that do not have adequate explanations and justifications) but I found it hard to write. For my pitiful attempt a fantasy, I established a magic system and I even had a plot that would make use and exemplify the themes of the system very…[Read more]
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valtmy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 9 months ago
Oh a science fiction-fantasy? Wow I don’t think I heard of anything like that. I tried writing a fantasy myself once and it… didn’t go so well. The idea’s tucked into the backroom of my mind for now. 😛
Yep I can relate with not knowing how my story is supposed to go. I know the beginning and the end but I just want God to tell me…[Read more]
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valtmy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 9 months ago
Hi. Oh and I don’t think I ever asked you this but what is your WIP about? 😛
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valtmy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 9 months ago
I’ll be here for a bit then I’ll need to go off for bible study.
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valtmy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 9 months ago
You can send me an invite.
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