@princesachronicle22
Active 6 months ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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TheShadow replied to the topic Any tips for writing serious characters? in the forum Characters 2 years, 5 months ago
@rae I like what you said about having certain habits.
@whalekeeper Interesting perspective, I hadn’t thought of it like that. I agree with both perspectives though, but for this character there is mostly a reason for why he’s serious.
@linus-smallprint The character’s name is Eldred, and he and his brother Percival are knights. He’s serious and…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic I've started my draft, would you guys keep reading this story? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 5 months ago
XD thank you! I’ve been trying really hard to make the dialogue realistic so I’m glad to hear you say that!
Thank you! XD
Thanks! <3<3
Not being active isn’t something to apologize for girl!! I don’t want you to be a internet addict lol
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
oh I forgot he also has pointy ears. This would be so much easier with pictures.
Liko
“Yep. All mine.” Liko grinned. He was propping himself up with one arm and using two others to undo the tape. With the spare, he tried to wipe some mud off his cheek, but only ended up smearing it.
“I’m talan. I’m assuming you’re human, right? Sorr…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Oh that also reminds me, Ed needs a date.
I honestly forgot about her lol
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TheShadow replied to the topic Any tips for writing serious characters? in the forum Characters 2 years, 5 months ago
This really helps, thank you!
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic Any tips for writing serious characters? in the forum Characters 2 years, 5 months ago
Simply think about why the character is the way they are. Are they a pessimist, simply lack humor, quick to anger, or perhaps they are solemn and ponderous? In what way are they serious, and what lead them to be that way. Are there insecurities that are being masked by a flat face? How does this character interact with others, and how…[Read more]
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TheShadow started the topic Any tips for writing serious characters? in the forum Characters 2 years, 5 months ago
@highscribeofaetherium @rae @thearcaneaxiom @theducktator @esther-c @trailblazer @linus-smallprint @whalekeeper @keilah-h @loopylin @theloonyone @grcr @anyone
I have a character who’s mostly serious, but I don’t want him to come off as boring and like a cardboard cutout. Does anyone have tips for how to write a serious character without making…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 5 months ago
Shoot I didn’t realize it made two of them…sorry!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 5 months ago
haha yeahhhh and thanks!!!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 5 months ago
haha yeahhhh
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 5 months ago
@freed_and_redeeemed @esther-c @grcr
First chapter of my new version!!!!! WITH the twist!!!
And yes, Jraldath and Selena used to be Paynes….hehehe
It was a dark night-clouds moving from the west blotted out any light from the twin moons, and tendrils of fog curled around the two lone figures drifting through the streets of Lir.
Selena held…
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
And I mean that seriously, by the way. That exact scenario happened to me twice.
I can believe it
Liko
“Well, that’s definitely a, uh, creative approach.” Liko squinted at the mess of duck tape. “Do you mind if I…?”
After a bit of shuffling, the man gave him enough room to reach the pipe. Liko then carefully began pee…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 5 months ago
Well that’s good I guess lol
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Loopy replied to the topic Summer Bible Reading in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 years, 5 months ago
@theducktator oh same page summer, right? I’ve known about it, but I should probably actually do it this year 😅 Thanks for the link!
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Ok I’m thinking there’s two entrances to the crawl space and they meet in the middle. Had to ask my construction worker brother to make sure that was actually a thing lol
Liko
After finishing his lunch break, Liko finally forced himself to do the one job he’d been procrastinating. Plumbing.
He army crawled his way through the tunne…[Read more]
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HighScribe replied to the topic Summer Bible Reading in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 years, 5 months ago
Cool, I’ll have to take a look at it.
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TheShadow replied to the topic Summer Bible Reading in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 years, 5 months ago
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