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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
Just finished reading through all your chapters… man, I dont even know what to say…
Must read moreeeeee. WRITE WRITE WRITE!
Aw girlie thank you so much… <33
Eloy is my favorite… Aubrielle is probably second. And, since he hasn’t done anything yet that I can see, Cassian is also a fav.
AWWWWW
Why Eloy thoughhhh he kinda just drops off the…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
Omc thank you so much girl, that means a lot…you’re gonna make me cryyyy
Ahhh thank youuuu 😭😭💜💜💜💜💜
Your critique was EXACTLY what I was looking for, so thank you!!!
–Characters are very easy to picture, and not very easy to forget. XD So you’re good in that area.
YAYYYY!!! That’s one of the things I was worried about, and I’m s…[Read more]
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HighScribe replied to the topic The potato army WIP. in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
I know, it’s still just a little bit creepy.
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HighScribe replied to the topic The potato army WIP. in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
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HighScribe replied to the topic The potato army WIP. in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
Cool, all your WIPs sound neat! So are TKOK and P.I.C.A.F.E. set on this earth? Â How does that work with the fantasy elements?
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 3 months ago
oop, uhh, I will make a topic for it!!!!!!!!!
Sounds good😂
Nice, because I know other denominations just forgive to one another… 😬 that sounds worse.
And of course, we should reconcile ourselves with our fellow man, especially those we have wronged, but man cannot forgive sin, only God, and by extension those He’s given a…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
aw yesss
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
I feel like I always write the most when I post on KP or when I know people will read it…
It’s so cool to see writers supporting other writers <3
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
Heeyy Sara, I’m about a third through your story right now! What kind of critique do you want? Any specific concerns, stuff like that?
Ummmm
Let me think lol
I think I’m just worried about pacing, flow of the story, and if it’s at all interesting lol
And character development ideas would be helpful too!!
I also just want to know t…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
LILITU’S NICKNAME IS TULIPS???????
Yeah lol
you can thank one of the boys from my school for that one XDXD
The frog wedding is adorable.
I KNOWWWW
YOU KILLED NEVEAH?!?!?!
no comment….
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
 I just finished your prologue. It’s good, but you overuse italics.
NOOOOOO
IT IS IMPOSSIBLE TO USE ITALICS😱😱😱😱
*sobs hysterically*
Oh my goodness, they kissed!!!!
yesssss
*coughs* um yeah…chapter three is kinda dark I guess 😂😂
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Loopy replied to the topic Song Suggestions in the forum Music 1 year, 3 months ago
@koshka I don’t remember the lyrics very well, but I read that the band does a lot of anti-human trafficking charity work
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Loopy replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 3 months ago
Why thank you. Glad to be your local online conundrum ✨
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 3 months ago
*Steals your questions*
Please do, Most Esteemed Feathered One. Your abducktion of my questions is an honor.
I would say you can tell if someone is a true Christian by whether they believe the Bible, and how they treat others.
I think that’s a good answer, though what if someone says they believe the Bible, and treat those around…[Read more]
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 3 months ago
Ah, hello intelligent being! And I would love to tell you all about my fantasy book I am writing!
Great! If you could point me to where you talk about it, that would be awesome:)
I feel I can be that way too…
Luckily we have the Atonement, so that we can progress and become perfected through Christ
Oh, that makes more sense, is i…
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Loopy replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 3 months ago
So like my littlest sister’s nose. XD
No, that’s a boop. Bops are for heads and shoulders. Boops are for noses.
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Loopy replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 3 months ago
Also, doesn’t Hilda have some… *cough cough* uhhh… LGBTQ things in it…. 😳…. or is that just dumb fan stuff?
dumb fan stuff
I just finished the first Alcatraz book and it is one of my new favorite books. It’s hilarious. I listened to the audiobook in my car and there were multiple times when Al would say…[Read more]
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HighScribe posted an update 1 year, 3 months ago
I was waiting at piano lessons (my brother goes before me) the other day and our teacher said something about ‘changing lanes’ and for a moment I wondered if I was in some bizarre dream where my brain was combining driver’s ed and piano lessons.
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Loopy replied to the topic Song Suggestions in the forum Music 1 year, 3 months ago
@raxforge Ooo I love Twenty One Pilots. I will check that out later
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