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@keilah-h

also I’m still laughing about “bRiNg a MeLoN” lollll

It’s my favorite thing ever hahaha

@keilah-h

yessss I get like this too, I decide a scene is cringey, but I like it too much to remove it.

YES YES YES YES YESSSSSS

that’s the most relatable thing I’ve heard XDXD

What are they gonna do to Sef’s little sis?

Well…its kinda a long story and it’s gonna give away a lot (I also need to flesh out the plot wayyy more)

When I have all m…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

However, I have also gotten far enough to determine something else. Due to some things such as the romance, I don’t think am in the target audience for your story. I am no longer going to read this. This does not mean your story is bad, it just means that it’s not for me and I think others will be able to give you better fee…

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@whalekeeper

Miiinnnn, hey girl!! Has life been chill with you?

Hey!!

Most definitely not chill lol. Everything appears to have gone downhill from a outsiders perspective but I feel like it’s the crash before the climb if you know what I mean? Like idk, I feel like I’m finding myself in the midst of all this and that’s something I’ve been missing…[Read more]

@stephie

I HAVE RIZZ

slayyyy

@the_lost-journal

omccc

I like your name!!! It’s so cool!!!

yeah, just like Hybridlore, I didn’t know if it was your real name or not lol…

But it’s so unique and cool!

I’ve been pronouncing it “Kee-fa” *dies laughing*

@ellette-giselle

Whoops, thanks for catching the tag lol. Also thanks!

@raxforge @koshka

Eddie

Ed turned to look up at the person talking to them. She squinted.

Foreign Literature. Wasn’t that where they were headed now?

“Lemme consult my map,” she said. She waved at Ellie, who had turned on her earplugs to make it through the crowded hallway.

“What?” Ellie said, tapping the device in her ear. She turned,…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Thank you!! I might go with Emmerich, it sounds nice.

@keilah-h

I mean I understand they have to have some water in order to live, but didn’t you say somewhere else that Azers don’t like water? Or did I completely misunderstand and that’s just a Ottoline/Naami thing?

So I’m not completely sure about that XDXD

Mainly, they just are very possessive of their lands and don’t want trespassers XD especia…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Girl you should legit be an editor hahahaha you’ve always been sooooo good with critiques!!!

Thank you so muchhhhh

@whalekeeper aww that’s the cutest <3

Is Barnes wearing her mask? I can’t remember what it looks like.

@elishavet-pidyon

You might be an author if you randomly eavesdrop on strangers so you can get story ideas.

I lowkey love eavesdropping and people watching, but it’s hard to make it inconspicuous. 🤣

@grcr

I’m already committed to reading two other people’s WIPs, but I don’t care I’m still subscribing to this topic!!! One day I’ll get around to getting everything read *sigh* 🤣

@freed_and_redeemed

Love the aesthetics!!!

I like the different style you did on these ones!

Ugghhhhhh

there ain’t gonna be no way for me to finish writing my story in time 😭

@savannah_grace2009

AHHH YESSSS MARKY BOYYYY ( @esther-c your nickname stuck lol, no going back now!!! hahaha)

This makes me so happy 🤭🤣

Oh my word, reading through everyone’s comments…. aghhhh!!! I need to seriously start reading it, I’ve just been so busyyy 😭

@freed_and_redeemed

AHHH GIRL I LOVE FANTASY <333333 it’s my favoriteeee I’m so excited!

@the_lost-journal

I skimmed through this, and your WIP’s sound SO COOL!

I love them!