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Koshka replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago

*Incoherent squealing*

Koshka replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago

@ellette-giselle

I really like the imprisoned ones. And the orphaned kiddos. XD

I noticed you don’t seem to keep to specific face structures for characters, especially Amelia’s nose? It made her a little difficult to pick out without looking at subtitles.

As for other scenes I might have liked to see…maybe right before their interrupted…[Read more]

Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago

@keilah-h @linus-smallprint @hybridlore @koshka @elishavet-pidyon

Okay, now I have some for The Veil of Night. So, there are a lot more, but I don’t believe all of these will actually make it into the book. I already scrapped ten of them, and I feel like some more will end up going. (I had 45 for LTBL, but as you can see, only like 16 a…[Read more]

Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago

@hybridlore

YAHOOO!!!!!!

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