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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
I would hate to see her become worse. :l
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
Yes, I would think so.
However, they both (hopefully) will improve.
Are you planning on improving Myeongwol??
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
I’m having a little trouble finding where I’m up to. I definitely remember the introduction to “Young Lady Kang”…
Well, I’ve found a bit I don’t remember, so I’m just going to read from there.
Oh, and I’ve just realised that the queen from my story is turning out a lot like Myeongwol and I’m not sure how I feel about that.
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
By the way, how’s that other WIP of yours going? That one with the strange, captivating crown prince in it? I don’t believe I’ve read any of that one.
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
Would you mind sending me another link? I think that was the reason I stopped reading in the first place–because it got lost somewhere in my piles and piles of Google docs.
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
Though definitely intriguing. Why did poor Cele see gongs and get confused?
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
Well, you certainly know how to disturb people.
Goodnight
And yours is just a tad confusing 😛
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
I just finished my fifteen minutes. I got 415.
My last sentence (hence my interest in colts):
Several foals, all varying shades of brown, three black mares and a yearling colt, who looked big enough to be kicked out of the mob any day now.
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
@rochellaine Well, I don’t know if you like fantasy, but her historical fantasy Fawkes is really good. 🙂
Alright, I have to leave now. Enjoy word warring! 🙂
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
Well, I’ve just noticed a lot of use of the word colt. Just then I saw “rounding up mustang mares and colts”, etc. So I was wondering if it had a different meaning.
“Some guns are called colts” was also my immediate thought.
All right, I’m putting on my timer again @Catwing
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
@valtmy Heyo! 😀
@catwing @seekjustice @rochellaine Do you all know that Nadine Brandes is having a giveaway for a signed copy of Fawkes and some other Fawkes-related goodies? 🙂 You can find the link to enter through her latest Youtube video.
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
@rochellaine @seekjustice @catwing
I think I’ll sit out of the wars for the rest of the night. Been pushing myself to crank out the words these past several hours, and I’m feeling not so inspired and motivated now, so I’m gonna leave soon I think. I’ll be on to chat for a bit though. 🙂
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
@seekjustice I think all those terms are a little confusing for some people (including me, tbh 😛 ), and I don’t think all horse books get it right anyway, so maybe that’s why Americans don’t use the terms that often. 🙂
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
Righto. The things I was reading seemed to indicate it meant more generally a horse that hadn’t reached mature age. Here it very specifically means a horse between 1-4. Younger than 1 is a foal, and a female is a filly. I’ve never really seen any Americans use those terms though, which was why I was a little confused.
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
@catwing I think I like the idea of choosing our favorite sentences better 😉
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
We use the word colt for a male horse that hasn’t reached adult age yet.
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
@rochellaine @catwing @jenwriter17
And I’m pretty sure I have no interesting sentences, but this one…
This brumby was one of a highly sought after colouring–not quite pure white, but not cream or golden either.
…is a reference to one of my favourite childhood books, The Silver Brumby.
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
@catwing @rochellaine @seekjustice
oh yeah, my sentence…
I didn’t know if we were doing our favorite sentence or the last sentence we wrote, so i’m just putting here the last sentence I wrote:Â Vega twisted one of her box braids around her finger.Â
I know, gripping isn’t it? 😛
@catwing I like your sentence 🙂
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