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@seekjustice @rochellaine @catwing @dragon-snapper @dekreel @valtmy @alia @ariel-ashira (have you returned yet?)

I am doing blogging stuff and writing. Anyone wanna join me?

@rochellaine

I’ll probably gasp and faint 😛

Good night!

@rochellaine

Yes, it was from a few weeks ago. I was just catching up on their blog because I hadn’t looked at it in ages.

You’re on a slippery slope, my friend, one day you will kill a character if you keep going this way.

@rochellaine

I was wondering what had happened to you!

It’s going well, thanks, I’ve almost got my stuff together to send out. Also, I’m in a good mood because I just found an article on Story Embers detailing three reasons why you should kill a main character 😛

@rochellaine

I’m sorry *hugs*. *dusts off hands* at least I have a reputation now!

@catwing Goodbye!

@rochellaine

Ah you couldn’t bear Jonas’ death for a second time?

@rochellaine Blogging at the moment and putting together the email for all my beta readers which I’ll be sending out today.

@catwing Oh, I just read a good article on that the other day. http://www.abbiee.com/2018/07/which-social-media-should-you-use/

@rochellaine I feel triumphant because…I can. Also, I don’t feel like doing anything but I’ve got to work anyway, so that’s worth feeling triumphant about. I’m doing okay, but I’m still not great, a bit sick still.

@rochellaine @catwing

I’M HERE!!! I feel triumphant about that.

@dekreel

Good night 😀

@seekjustice  Makes sense…

I think I’ll sign off now. Good to talk to you! Maybe I’ll see you tomorrow.

@dekreel

I’m not sure that I can really help on why they were sent there, it’s your story and I think you’ll have to work that out since I haven’t read it. As to magical powers though, there’s heaps of cool magic powers.

Like elemental powers, telekinesis, ice powers, healing powers, mind reading, weather control, teleportation, invisibility, m…[Read more]

@seekjustice  It’s tricky! You’re welcome. Yeah, I know what you mean. I’m glad I could help at least a little. 😀

Hey, can you help me figure something out? I’m going to introduce a couple new characters into my Aetherlight roleplay (which is like the Aetherlight version of the KPA) who are sent to Aethasia by… I dunno… their parents?…[Read more]

@dekreel

You’re not the first person to say that 😀 I definitely know that I have a problem with settings/worldbuilding (its like my writing kryptonite) and I’m planning on doing some serious work on that while my beta readers read it over and maybe give me some suggestions. That’s my plan for this August 🙂 Thank you for pointing it out again…[Read more]

@seekjustice  (Sorry it took so long to respond!!) I think you should describe the setting more. I mean, I get the idea that the story is set in futuristic Australia, but I feel like the descriptions aren’t… authentic enough. I don’t know exactly what you’d need to do to improve on it, but basically just make the setting and world more…[Read more]

@dekreel Apparently my reply didn’t post.

If it’s a longer suggestion, here would be fine! Otherwise, I don’t mind 😀

@seekjustice  I could really feel the emotion in it. You did well.

May I offer a suggestion? If so, should I do it here? In your doc? Somewhere else?

@rochellaine

Bye!

@dekreel Oooh, I’m glad you enjoyed it! That was a lot of fun to write that scene!

@rochellaine  Good night! Hope to see you tomorrow. Earlier in the night would be even better. XD

@seekjustice  I’m enjoying your book so far! I just finished reading over Justice’s riot in front of the town hall. It really made my heart pound.

@dekreel That’s good news 😀