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Hope Ann replied to the topic If there's one thing rewriting has taught me… in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 1 month ago
Don’t be afraid to cut and delete and take out scenes completely. *sighs* It’s so hard sometimes. I’ve had to cut scenes I love, and there’s probably more I’ll need to cut. But if it’s not moving along the story in some way, cut it. And there’s no need to picture it as a complete loss, because not only will the story be tighter, but you’re just…[Read more]
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Snapper replied to the topic A Dragon's Snapper in the forum Start HERE 10 years, 1 month ago
My passengers are very curious…
I have been writing for three years, but have only just started to develop style and any sort of skill in the past year. My favorite genre is medieval fiction and/or fantasy (hints the dragon), and just fiction in general. My favorite authors are Tolkien, John Flanagan, C.S. Lewis and whole bunch of random others.…[Read more] -
Hope Ann replied to the topic Prophecy Critique in the forum Poetry Critiques 10 years, 1 month ago
So, @daeus and @anna-bria, this is what I have now. I like most of it, I’m just not sure about the final line in the first and third stanza. The line in the third stanza, by the way, needs to hold the idea that the nation will be destroyed if the victor (from the line before) doesn’t unite the countries.
Ancient sign, bitter fate,
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Hope Ann replied to the topic Have you read…? in the forum Book Discussions 10 years, 1 month ago
*gasp* You’ve got to read Lord of the Rings, @anna-brie! They are so good!
I had Steelheart from the library, but returned it because I didn’t have time to read it. I might pick it back up again sometime. But the next book on my list are the Inkheart trilogy. Joy is reading them and she really likes them.
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Hope Ann replied to the topic A Dragon's Snapper in the forum Start HERE 10 years, 1 month ago
@dragon-snapper Welcome, dragon captain. So, do you tame dragons, hunt them, or…umm, are you a rogue dragon who somehow slipped past the moderators?
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Snapper changed their profile picture 10 years, 1 month ago
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Snapper started the topic A Dragon's Snapper in the forum Start HERE 10 years, 1 month ago
Ladies and Gentlemen, this is your captain speaking. We are currently cruising at an altitude of zero feet at zero miles per hour. Please keep your seatbelts on as we make our ascent, and remain seated at all times. We may be experiencing slight turbulence, but you can trust the captain. I, the captain, am Dragon Snapper.
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Hope Ann started the topic Prophecy Critique in the forum Poetry Critiques 10 years, 1 month ago
I’ve written a prophecy for a book of mine and, since poetry is not my strong point, I decided I’d post it here and see what you guys thought, and if you had any suggestions:
Ancient sign, bitter fate,
Scar and oath and quest;
Revealing name brought to light
Power from destroyer wrest.Ancient weapon, bitter foe,
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Hope Ann replied to the topic Have you read…? in the forum Book Discussions 10 years, 1 month ago
@kate-flournoy I’ve read Lord of the Flies awhile ago, as well as Fahrenheit 451 (I need to read that one again) and The Christmas Carol…several times.
As anyone read any fantasy books by Brandon Sanderson. I’m currently reading Elantris. It’s fascinating so far.
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Hope Ann replied to the topic Have you read…? in the forum Book Discussions 10 years, 1 month ago
No, I don’t remember it, @bluejay. I might have to look that up though.
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Hope Ann replied to the topic Have you read…? in the forum Book Discussions 10 years, 1 month ago
@daeus, sadly, I have not. Though I’ve heard good things about it here…well, mainly from you and @kate-flournoy. I might have to pick it up sometime.
Who here has read Lord of the Rings?
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Hope Ann replied to the topic Have you read…? in the forum Book Discussions 10 years, 1 month ago
@bluejay No, I’ve not ready Mistaken Identity, though it sounds familiar for some reason.
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Hope Ann replied to the topic OYAN considerations in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 1 month ago
@winter-rose I’ve not taken it, though I have a friend who took it and really liked it. I’ve considered it…not because of the learning aspect (not because I think I know everything, but I do think it is more beginner) but because I really want to go to the OYAN conferences. Those sound so cool!
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Hope Ann replied to the topic Men verses Woman in the forum Characters 10 years, 1 month ago
@Daeus Hmm, you might be right though that’s a bit hard to confirm since I don’t know if I’ve ever been offended. Annoyed at siblings, yes, but not offended. Do you mean communicative as in talking about it to the other person or in showing they are offended?
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Hope Ann started the topic Men verses Woman in the forum Characters 10 years, 1 month ago
So, awhile ago scientists made the stunning discovery that men and woman were different. I still don’t know what sort of mental state I’d be in if they hadn’t figured that out for us. But, besides obvious physical differences, the differences between men and woman are fascinating, especially when it comes to writing and one is writing the opposite…[Read more]
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Hope Ann replied to the topic Chatter in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 1 month ago
Hey guys, just thought I’d mention that I’m launching a novella this week!!! It’s a retelling of Rapunzel and comes out the fifth, but the blog tour starts today and there’s also a giveaway if anyone wants to enter or check it out here. 🙂
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Hope Ann replied to the topic Heroes and Villains— and what their relationships has to do with Theme in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 1 month ago
@kate-flournoy Very good points. I’m going to have to keep those in mind, though I don’t think I’ve anything to add right now.
But…oh boy. You’ve given me such a great idea for my own characters. Ethaniel killing the villain’s father…but what if it was less of a battle and more of an ambush. He doesn’t care that the battle should take place…[Read more]
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Hope Ann replied to the topic The sign of the four in the forum Book Discussions 10 years, 2 months ago
@jadamae Yes, and what is really interesting is that cocaine was legal when the books were written. I’m not sure how widely used it was, but Watson protesting about it is probably similar to a character in a modern book protesting about something like smoking. It was something people could and did use at times.
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Hope Ann replied to the topic Help please… *puppy eyes* in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years, 2 months ago
@hannah-c Yes, something like that.
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Hope Ann replied to the topic Element and Weather stones in the forum Fantasy 10 years, 2 months ago
@warrioroftherealm fire equals storms because storms…lightning…fire. And I couldn’t think of any other element which would work better with storms.
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