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@inkling-for-christ  I see. Thanks! Well, I’m in, it sounds amazing!

Wait… @daeus, you have a show-don’t-tell course?! Where do I find it?! 😀

@inkling-for-christ  That’s not a bad idea! Go for it!

Questions: Who would I be nominating? Or would you be nominating me? And we’re nominating people to make stories that show/tell, right?

This sounds cool!

Trachea. That’s what my breath was caught halfway up.

Goodness. XD

@inkling-for-christ Well… ‘the baby squealed’ is telling what happened but it’s not emotional telling, which is what limits the story. Your second example is certainly more descriptive, but sometimes you’re not going to want that much detail or your story will be extremely long.

I would focus on the emotional telling, for example, you…[Read more]

I’m back. Seeing if I can do something with the DWN…

@aislinn-mollisong  @sam-kowal  @dragon-snapper @winter-rose @catwing

@that_writer_girl

He will forgo a lightsaber for the simplicity and tickling powers of a simple broom…

@that_writer_girl_99 They Rey/Kylo conflict and relationship was my favorite part, too. The moment in the throne room… my breath was caught halfway up my

@ethryndal That’s a really intriguing idea, about the Knights of Ren. It seems like either they would have to take over as main villains, or Episode 9 wouldn’t really have one, because Kylo…[Read more]

I think I’m signing off… the color is out *sighhhhh* *scratches table frustratedly*

@aislinn-mollisong  Sure! Good-bye! Say hi to Ariella for me 😉

@aislinn-mollisong  Hooray! I have colors, but they’re a bit faded. I have no plot in the KPA whatsoever yet 😛 But it’s moving forward……..

@aislinn-mollisong  KAPEEFER! Are you still here? I’m writing  🙂

@daeus  Congrats! That’s some great advice 🙂  How are you liking Pinterest so far?

@emily-d I really, really liked A Wrinkle In Time

It was  thoughtful, meaningful, almost spiritual, and it had a lot of intriguing symbolism and thing s like that. Open respect for Christianity, too, although it did mention there being good qualities in other religions.

Plus, Meg and Calvin are really great characters. Meg’s internal conflicts…[Read more]

@emily-d  *pursues* *growls ferociously*  …Just kidding ;P  I see what you’re saying about the weirdness and stuff. Personally, I like it because of the action, and because it was interesting seeing what Meg was learning.

I hear there’s a new movie coming out, so maybe that one will be better. Although, it’s a Disney movie, so… I don’t kn…[Read more]

@inkling-for-christ Yes, that’s exactly it. SHOW the environment, don’t have the narrator TELL the reader what it looks like. Have it be more like you’re looking directly through the narrator into the story, rather than that they’re trying to summarize what they saw for you and tell it back to you

@emily-d I really, really liked A Wrinkle In Time

It was  thoughtful, meaningful, almost spiritual, and it had a lot of intriguing symbolism and thing s like that. Open respect for Christianity, too, although it did mention the good qualities of other religions.

Plus, Meg and Calvin are really great characters. Meg’s internal conflicts are easy…[Read more]

@emily-d  I got through like a third of the book before I… got bored of it. It’s intriguing, and very well-written, but there’s barely any action, just talking. And talking. And talking. Is suppose if I read the rest of it I would change my mind…… But it’s been awhile, and I think I’d have to start over at the very beginning.

So…[Read more]

@emily-d 😀 Yeah, I have read it

I was at first expecting to completely hate it

But, I actually really like it

Elizabeth is a great character, and the plot is interesting, and Jane Austen’s writing is really sophisticated and intelligent

It’s lacking all of its dragons, and 100% percent of its epic battle scenes, but it’s still quite…[Read more]