@perfectfifths
Active 7 years ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Snapper started the topic Favoritism in the forum Characters 9 years ago
*holds up Monopoly card* It says, ‘collect two cents from each of the players.’
So, I’ve had this little problem for maybe a year now. It worked okay for first person, but now that its third person, its gets trickier. The little problem in question, perhaps not as little as that, is favoritism.
Generally speaking, I have two main characters. The…[Read more] -
Snapper started the topic Favoritism in the forum Characters 9 years ago
*holds up Monopoly card* It says, ‘collect two cents from each of the players.’
So, I’ve had this little problem for maybe a year now. It worked okay for first person, but now that its third person, its gets trickier. The little problem in question, perhaps not as little as that, it favoritism.
Generally speaking, I have two main characters. The…[Read more] -
ClaireC replied to the topic Finished! in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
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@Abigail-Blomberg
@bluejay
@daeus
@Northerner
@Emma-L
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@Ethryndal
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ClaireC replied to the topic Quote That in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
@perfectfifths, your name is Louise! I am still talking to the same ‘@perfectfifths‘, right?
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ClaireC replied to the topic Quote That in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
@ethryndal, @perfectfifths, Yes! I know, pretty obvious. Good movie, huh?! 🙂
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Tips for Writing Short Stories in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
@PerfectFifths At your service. 🙂 *bows*
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
@audrey-caylin @daeus @kate-flournoy @jane-maree @that_writer_girl_99 @ethryndal @graciegirl @winter-rose @perfectfifths I’ll be planning and maybe doing some writing.
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Snapper replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
@perfectfifths I just can’t resist, though. So many ideas and they’re all so funny.
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Snapper replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
@perfectfifths Well, I’m not sure just yet, but I know that if I am making more than just one sequel, then I’ll be able to at least mention people. But Kate, Emma, Daeus, Snapper and Josiah are the MCs. 😉
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Snapper replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
And everyone, my brain is bursting with ideas, so I might end up making a sequel for the sequel and a sequel for that sequel. 😛 What do you think of that?
@emma-flournoy Concerning above paragraph, thank for that dare you gave me. 😉
*so much fun!*@daeus @kate-flournoy @christi-eaton @graciegirl @ethryndal @northerner @ingridrd @jadamae @adry_…[Read more]
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Snapper replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
@daeus Aha. Would like some more ice cream long with the sequel? 😛
@christi-eaton Hahaha! Yeah…I’m not even sure why I asked that question. 😛 Shall I say its unanimous?Okay, as there will be an angry mob chasing me if I do not write a sequel, as it would seem, I clearly need to write one. I already have some ideas, but if any of you have…[Read more]
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Snapper replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
@northerner I actually haven’t read The Thirteen Clocks, though it sounds neat! I’ll have to check it out. And yeah, I figured it wouldn’t be as awesome in any other publishing situations, but I’ve had so much fun seeing your all’s reactions. I love to make people laugh.
@emma-flournoy 😀 Glad you likey. When I wrote it, I knew that I had to…[Read more] -
Snapper replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
@northerner I actually haven’t read The Thirteen Clocks, though it sounds neat! I’ll have to check it out. And yeah, I figured it wouldn’t be as awesome in any other publishing situations, but I’ve had so much fun seeing your all’s reactions. I love to make people laugh.
@emma-flournoy 😀 Glad you likey. When I wrote it, I knew that I had to…[Read more] -
Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Tips for Writing Short Stories in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 1 month ago
@PerfectFifths Indeed they are. I liked the first trilogy a good deal, and the second one was good at times but I found it pretty boring. 😛 But I hope you like ’em!
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Tips for Writing Short Stories in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 1 month ago
@PerfectFifths Wow. So cool to know a famous author.
But it’s gonna be really nice—I’ll know quite a few famous authors once all you guys get published. 😮I’ve read Hostage Lands, and his 6 Scottish/Scottish-American ones.
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Snapper replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 1 month ago
Wow. Everyone…I don’t know what to say…Just…just…here *hands out ice cream* Thank you!!!!
@graciegirl Yay! I’m so glad you liked it! *salutes you back* What was your favorite line?
@daeus It is the bestistest place on the internet, after all! 😀 And I love that line too. I tried to incorporate your ice cream and scones and raspberries.…[Read more] -
Daeus replied to the topic Reader Behavior Survey in the forum Publishing & Platform 9 years, 1 month ago
Hey, friends, see if you can help me brainstorm for a bit.
So far, about fifty people have taken the reader behavior survey. That’s pretty awesome. Fifty people can show us some neat things about reader behavior, but we’re going to need a lot more need more if we’re hoping for reliable and detailed data.
So maybe my outlook was too limited.…[Read more]
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Tips for Writing Short Stories in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 1 month ago
@PerfectFifths Nice! Is Douglas Bond Australian? I’ve read some of his books.
@Ethryndal @Kate-Flournoy entered that contest too, and went through the same thing (obviously). It was n.e.r.v.e. w.r.a.c.k.i.n.g. I don’t think it was an error, either; not to be badmouthing them of course, but there were updates on their Facebook page or something…[Read more]
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Ethryndal replied to the topic Tips for Writing Short Stories in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 1 month ago
@Perfectfifths Zikers! (as @graciegirl would put it 😛 ) Now this thing is deleting parts of my posts! I’ve been having a lot of trouble with the site lately; sometimes certain peoples tags won’t come through, and today, the spot that lets you log in disappeared for four hours and I was locked out of my account. Apparently, it doesn’t like…[Read more]
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Ethryndal replied to the topic Tips for Writing Short Stories in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 1 month ago
@perfectfifths Nice! Sooo… It’s either an entry fee and a free book, or a free entry and a twenty dollar book. Either way the glass is half full, I guess. 🙂
On another, more random, note, it’s nice that it’s such a professional thing. I entered a short story contest last year done by Patrick Henry College (You actually might not know who they…[Read more]
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