@perfectfifths
Active 7 years ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Favorites? in the forum Book Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
Hey people. *tips hat grinningly*
There’s this book I just read called Eats, Shoots and Leaves, by Lynn Truss. It’s non-fiction—about punctuation. But it’s not a long or dull read at all, and is funny and very informative/helpful. Especially for people like writers who’d use punctuation more than usual. 😉
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Homework for Video 4: Experiment in Living in the forum Writing Assignments 8 years, 10 months ago
@perfectfifths That sounds great! Having your character wrestle through the conflict between those two EiLs should lead to some good realistic movement for her arc.
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Homework for Video 4: Experiment in Living in the forum Writing Assignments 8 years, 10 months ago
@perfectfifths That looks really good! I really like how you’re giving your characters multiple competing Experiments in Living to make them complex characters (and good work with those side characters! I won’t be addressing them in the lessons till the fourth module, but you have a great start there!). Could you explain #5 some more, though? I’m…[Read more]
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Discussion for Video Four: The Experiment in Living in the forum Discussion Questions 8 years, 10 months ago
Glad to hear that you found this lesson helpful! That’s definitely a relatable struggle with the challenges of writing a character who is quite different from yourself. My best recommendation would be to study how extroverts you know act in real life, and possibly also study how extroverts in books you read act, and use that to…[Read more]
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Snapper replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 10 months ago
@daeus @kate-flournoy @emma-flournoy kina-lamb @lifeofkatie (be sure to read the 1st one first) @jane-maree @ethryndal @aratrea @overcomer @audrey-caylin @jess @graciegirl @adry_grace @anne-swiftblade @christi-eaton @jadamae @jess @northerner @that_writer_girl_99 @perfectfifths @theliterarycrusader @hope @ingridrd @winter-rose @rolena-hatfield @cla…[Read more]
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Leumeister replied to the topic Aquila in the forum Sci-Fi 8 years, 10 months ago
Hello everybody tagged below!
I’ve got a bunch of unfinished drafts of stories (plus the finished draft for the Pilot for Aquila) and I was wondering if any of you would like to alpha-read some of them (and, perhaps, beta-read the finished draft). I need input on what I’m working on because I’ve got some stories I’m stuck on.
So, for those of…[Read more]
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Anne of Lothlorien replied to the topic My Brother Wants Y'all's Opinion in the forum Film 8 years, 10 months ago
@perfectfifths. I do like the Jungle Book, and that is interesting that Baloo actually teaches him the language of animals. I was actually contemplating how they could communicate; if Pearl would learn snake-language. Obviously some level of communication has to happen.
At first when I didn’t know they weren’t talking, I was imagining this little…[Read more]
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Anne of Lothlorien replied to the topic My Brother Wants Y'all's Opinion in the forum Film 8 years, 10 months ago
@perfectfifths Weird question cause I am nosy – Older or younger brother?
@leumeister – No, anacondas do not take care of their young. They leave them to fend for themselves, which is why Pearl takes care of Ana’s. I think.
It’s okay if you’re picking it apart. Mentally I am too, and am just waiting for our first session of story plotting so I…[Read more] -
Leumeister replied to the topic My Brother Wants Y'all's Opinion in the forum Film 8 years, 10 months ago
Okay, fair enough. 😛 You could ask him what he’s using, or if I get into contact with him myself, I could ask. 😛
And, yes, I am @perfectfifths‘ brother. 🙂
Also… I’m not sure how an anaconda takes care of its young… I don’t know. I’m sorry if I’m sounding like I’m picking apart your brother’s story, it’s just I find it…[Read more]
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Leumeister replied to the topic My Brother Wants Y'all's Opinion in the forum Film 8 years, 10 months ago
Okay, fair enough. 😛 You could ask him what he’s using, or if I get into contact with him myself, I could ask. 😛
And, yes, I am @perfectfifths‘ brother. 🙂
Also… I’m not sure how an anaconda takes care of its young… I don’t know. I’m sorry if I’m sounding like I’m picking apart your brother’s story, it’s just I find it…[Read more]
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Anne of Lothlorien replied to the topic My Brother Wants Y'all's Opinion in the forum Film 8 years, 10 months ago
So… the questions.
To be honest with you, this is a pretty new idea, and we haven’t had our first session of brainstorming, so I’m sure there are things that he’s developed about the story that he hasn’t told me yet. So I’ll try to answer the questions without blending what I know with what I think should happen with the movie.@northener @perfe…[Read more]
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Anne of Lothlorien started the topic My Attempt in the forum Poetry 8 years, 10 months ago
So, I read some of the poems y’all suggested. (I loved the Wreck of the Hesperus). And I tried one of my own. It’s a bit silly, and I don’t like the ‘magic’ and ‘tragic’ rhyme at all, but for lack of a better one, I left it. Maybe someone can help me change it? But how do you all like it?
The Faerie Child
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Anne of Lothlorien started the topic My Brother Wants Y'all's Opinion in the forum Film 8 years, 10 months ago
Hey there.
So.
My brother is an animator. A movie maker. And this summer he is venturing out on another project, and he has made me his co-collaborator or something like that. So he asked me to ask y’all about it and if you like it and stuff.
So… here’s the basic plot. I’m still a bit fuzzy on it and it may not be one hundred percent accurate,…[Read more] -
Anne of Lothlorien replied to the topic Just Chatter #2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
@daeus @hope @corissa-maiden-of-praise @dragon-snapper @bluejay @kate-flournoy @emma-flournoy @aratrea @that_writer_girl_99 @ethryndal @perfectfifths.
Right to left is Christi, then Josiah, then I dunno, then Daeus, then Hope, then Rolena, then I dunno. Sorry to the ‘dunno’ people if you see this. Please feel free to make yourself known.
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Snapper replied to the topic Just Chatter #2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
Poor guinea pigs.
Oh, wow! I looked up picture of a butcher bird, and they look really cool! I’ve never seen a bird quite like it.
The craziest bird we’ve had at our house is a pileated woodpecker, that or the yellow-bellied sap-sucker.
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Emily D replied to the topic Just Chatter #2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
@perfectfifths We all have to dance every now and again, right? *winks*
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Homework for Video 3: Discovering & Deepening Theme in the forum Writing Assignments 8 years, 10 months ago
Sorry I’m late on interacting with you all on this! The KP staff had a work retreat this weekend and I fell behind on keeping up with these…
My biggest recommendation would be to consider the different ways Christians might honestly answer that focusing question in the way they live their lives. While most Christians may know…[Read more]
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Emily D replied to the topic Just Chatter #2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
@perfectfifths *pats herself on the back*. I have a bunny! How funny is that????
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Snapper replied to the topic Just Chatter #2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
@perfectfifths Well, I’m not crazy about birds, but I do go birdwatching from time to time. My favorite birds that I’ve seen so far are the Scarlet Tanager, Indigo Bunting and the Bald Eagle. Then I also love the Carolina Wren. 😀
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Snapper replied to the topic Just Chatter #2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
@emily-d I just listened to Fishers of Men! It was a great song. Actually, I think I’ll add it to my running playlist. 😛
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