Louise Fowler

@jane-maree PIZZAAA!!! Sweet. Thanks!
@seekjustice You are wise. I should have done the same. *nods sagely*

@jane-maree yay!! welcome!!

@dragon-snapper three names for one character? Well done! I have a lot of little things that don’t fit together or make sense which I’m just smoothing out at the moment, 😀

@Dragon-Snapper @SeekJustice I am hereeee. *settles down with pizza* Critiquing stuff.

@seekjustice Ah…wish I’d done that. XD Some of the silly mistakes–I had three names for one character.

@dragon-snapper I’m currently editing as well. My novel which a few alpha readers are going to go through soon. I’m just fixing up a few things.

@seekjustice I’m editing my novel, Sector One: Insurrection. You?

@dragon-snapper yay!!!! I thought I was going to be writing solo today. 😀 What are you working on?

@seekjustice I’ll join you if you’re on, and to anyone else, I’m editing.

@bethanysinkyroses that would be @sierra-r and I have forgotten Cindy’s as well. 😛

The first thing that strikes me as I read your summary here is that you’ve focused a lot on symbolism.
That’s a good thing. But it can also be a hindrance. In my experience, when I focus too much on the symbolism of a thing, it comes out one-dimensional as only…[Read more]

@dragon-snapper @Emily @catwing @salome01w4g @jane-maree @shannon I’ll be on in half an hour to do some editing. any one to join me?

Brutally honest post

A four. It’s sprawling and epic and boring. It seems like you want to tackle too many things at once. I wouldn’t worry about weirdness. But if you (personally) believe the story is as you described above, then I think it’ll be too big to handle. You can still keep (probably) all those elements, but if you think that’s what…[Read more]

@emily yes I am an actual writer, you think I am just a poser?!?

@gideon-sowdon I should probably first learn how to read English but…

Only if you make it cliche. Cliche means it’s overdone. It’s something the audience has seen before. It’s predictable. So, sure, go ahead and start with a “cliche” premise. But as the story progresses make it unpredictable. Then those surprising moments will be what the audience will remember. Not your “cliche: premise.

@warrioroftherealm no character is ever cliche if they are approached as a person with a logical reason for being who and where they are in life. It sounds like this woman has a very good reason for being ‘strong’.

At the same time, I think ‘strong woman’ is frequently misunderstood or misinterpreted. A strong woman is not a masculine woman. A…[Read more]

@radically-surrendered WOOT YES, I’m Aussie. *waves enthusiastically*

@kballen Hi! Are you joining me? 😀
I’m working on my WIP, on a very slow and very annoying sequence on scenes. It’ll pick up eventually, but these humps are…hard to get over. 😛

@salome01w4g @jessi-rae @epicaddie2 @anyoneelse I’m on.

@radically-surrendered yes, I live in Australia! it’s pretty amazing here, @jane-maree @clairec @perfectfifths are all Aussie too, and there are a few more floating around. I love other countries too, and it’d be fascinating to visit Mexico one day. 😀

@dragon-snapper bye!!!