@perfectfifths
Active 7 years, 5 months ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Story Idea Help!!! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 8 months ago
@warrenluther04 There are a lot of cult followings, actually. People who love Star Trek are called Trekkers or Trekkies, there are a lot of people who dress up like superheroes and go to the Comicons. One of my dad’s friends from college has a group of people who (I don’t know what specifically they’re acting out) dress up in fake battle armor a…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Story Idea Help!!! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 8 months ago
@radically-surrendered Wow! That’s a big idea from just a man playing a cello in the woods. 🙂
Ohhh, I just had a crazy idea. What if this book inspired a whole new universe with what they call a “cult following”. You know, with fans who dress up like the characters. They would take tests to see what kind of instrument they are. They would…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Story Idea Help!!! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 8 months ago
@radically-surrendered Do you play any instruments?
This is what I thought when you said different instruments can be used as different types of weapons:
Harp: A harp ripples and waves, and could be used to draw people closer as a magnet to hear what the Master has to say. (By the way, you might want to call the Master the Maestro?)
Violin:…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Story Idea Help!!! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 8 months ago
@radically-surrendered That is an AMAZING IDEA!!! I would definitely read a book like that. I can’t really think of a better word than “follow” either, because that is actually what musicians do when they play in an orchestra: follow the conductor. Another term used could be “perform”, though.
I don’t like the idea of “magic” because every me…[Read more]
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Joy replied to the topic Story Idea Help!!! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 8 months ago
@radically-surrendered That’s a fascinating idea!! I think you should try it! It sounds like a world where I’d want to live! I love music. But make sure you find a unique and captivating plot or else it will get a little old. It seems like that to me.
I love this! 😀
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Rochellaine replied to the topic What's Wrong with Her? in the forum Plotting 8 years, 8 months ago
Oh, and this was originally just supposed to be a 300-500 word scene based on the picture, but I liked it, and kept writing. So it’s basically a draft, and I might add more onto the beginning or rewrite it or something. 🙂
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Rochellaine started the topic What's Wrong with Her? in the forum Plotting 8 years, 8 months ago
Hi everyone, I have a story I am working on – it’s about 2000 words long, but I have a major problem…
There’s something wrong with the main character which makes people not want to associate with her. I just don’t know what it is! Here is what I have written so far. Does anyone have ideas?
I don’t want it to be something she has done pe…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Optimistic character consistency in the forum Characters 8 years, 8 months ago
@gabbyj In my first novel I had a character who was for the first few chapters really sweet and good-natured, and always thinking of others before herself. Later, as bad things started happening, she started having trouble keeping up her good-naturedness, but she hid it pretty well so that her brother didn’t notice she was much upset. Finally, s…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Comic Poems I Wrote in the forum Poetry 8 years, 8 months ago
@perfectfifths and @kballen Thanks! I think my favorite is actually the giant one because the story is more unusual (can I use that as a synonym for “totally weird”?), but I do like a couple of lines from the dragon poem a lot, such as “I faltered for a moment but/began to argue with the nut,” because it’s so crazy.
@itisastarrynight I’m glad…[Read more]
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Joy replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art 8 years, 8 months ago
@itisastarrynight That’s fine 🙂
Her name is…. I haven’t decided. Let’s call her “Peri.” She has pale blue eyes, very short straight blond hair, and large round glasses. She has a steampunk outfit, but not as frilly as Amelia’s outfit 🙂
And if you want I’ll draw one of your characters in return 😉
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Joy replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art 8 years, 8 months ago
@itisastarrynight Yes, you did a great job! Wow, that’s impressive. I wouldn’t have had the patience to study cloth folds XD
……. Can you draw my character?! XD
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Joy replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art 8 years, 8 months ago
@itisastarrynight I’m sorry, I butted in, but OMW that is AMAZING!!!!
@daughteroftheking You are in for a treat!!
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Jane Maree replied to the topic Guardians of Airos blurb in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 8 months ago
@Jenwriter17 ahhh I completely missed this before, sorry. D:
I really like everyone else’s suggestions for twists. Having the ultimate reveal of her family and mentor and all the secrets in the past being an unexpected shock really heightens things. *nodnod*
As for the blurb, it’s a good base to start off from but it’s long and gives a little…[Read more]
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Joy replied to the topic Hi in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 8 months ago
@medomfo Greetings and welcome to the bestest place in cyberspace!!
We’re glad you’re here! What county do you live in?
What are your favorite books and TV shows?
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Centurian's Wife in the forum Book Discussions 8 years, 8 months ago
@skredder I love Janette Oke! I don’t like T. Davis Bunn as much, but the summary of that book sounds interesting, so I will definitely look it up.
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Created in His Image in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 8 years, 8 months ago
@itisastarrynight I know in fantasy literature it is common to have creatures which are half human, half animal, but I think about where that mythology started. The origin of those stories (and I believe most myths to be based in truth) was from old heathen mythology. The idea that there is a half human, half animal seems to indicate that the c…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic A Belated Hello! in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 8 months ago
@jenwriter17 🙂 My dad says I’m an introvert because I won’t go up to people and introduce myself. I wait for them to come to me. But I’ve been singing in front of people since I was very little. My mom ran a dance school for a few years before I was born, and my older brother is a wonderful concert pianist, so I’ve had “Performing is wo…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Guardians of Airos blurb in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 8 months ago
@jenwriter17 The only thing I noticed at my first reading was that you speak of her “Mentor” as though he were hers alone. That is a common cliche and a little expected, but doesn’t seem very realistic to me. Does the mentor also mentor several other teens? That would be more like a real-life mentor. The only reason I can conceive that a men…[Read more]
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Snapper's profile was updated 8 years, 8 months ago
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Snapper posted an update 8 years, 8 months ago
Hee hee. I has 100 friends. I WIN!
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*immediately withdraws her friendship* NOW YOU DON’T. 😀
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(I love our use of smiley faces… Like, we could be saying the meanest, most insulting things, but if we put a smiley face at the end, it’s all good. XD)
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*gasp* NOOO!!!!
XD Yes. Smiley face means all good things.
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And every time I see your new profile pic, I get confused. 😂
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Who is that weird dragon acting as Dragon Snapper?
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Exactly. It’s terrifying.
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Well, I’ll probably end up changing it back soon. I love my old Dragon Snapper picture more than any other profile photo I’ve been able to come up with.
Wait. It’s terrifying? Hee hee. I WIN!
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@dragon-snapper That new profile pic is so un-intimidating that Stan is laughing at you
I mean, HE could beat that… monkey-dragon thingy.
😀 😀 (smiley faces at the end so that it’s all good)-
What monkey-dragon?
😉
*melts all the chairs in the world* *particularly Stan’s chair*
😀 (smiling faces so it’s all good) XD
@sam-kowal-
*sniff*
The monkey-dragon that was so damaging to your image you had to dismiss it from your service*glare*
That wasn’t even Stan’s leather couch! That was our landlord’s! Oh well, Stan had already shredded it anyway
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Heyyyy…. What happened to your 100 friends? O-O
Yeah, that monkey dragon… Um, what on Taranar WAS that?! Why!
Yes, I love your ol’ dragon pic, too! 😉-
@dekreel You have to actually click on my friends thing to see them all. For some reason, it’s a few friends off on that little circle thing.
That was…my attempt at a more -professional profile pic. It seems to have failed. XD At least I know your all’s opinions on it. HAHAHAHA! Both you and @sam-kowal and @ethryndal.
Monkey-Dragon
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