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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
Drat it, my reply didn’t post.
Basically, what I was saying was this:
I was going to add a section in the bits where Chessy chats to Justice’s grandfather with him mentioning his other no good grandson, and then I realised that that wouldn’t work because Zac isn’t his grandson. There are a few differences between Kendall and Zac,…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
@seekjustice Quillon would not cope? 😀 😀 I would think it would be Justice, since he’s more peevish when things go wrong. I’d picture Quillon as the guy who pretends everything’s fine. But I guess you’re right, different things affect different people different ways. (Goodness! Three uses of the word “different” one after another. The…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
@seekjustice Ohh, it’s going so slowly! 🙁 I think perhaps soon, but I’m not sure yet.
Well, I was thinking it would be cool if sometime in Stars Justice got really frustrated with Kendall and told him something like “You’re just as bad as my cousin!” 😀 Or if he accidentally made the connection in the sequel and realizes that Zac might tur…[Read more]
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
*tucks information away for a time that shall come* I’ve never tortured my characters by food deprivation. Could be interesting. Quillon would not cope.
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
Oh well, you’re better safe than sorry on the internet. 😀
Cool! When are you going to put up your next part?
My sister commented that Justice having to deal with Zac was like dealing with Kendall all over again, but no, you haven’t mentioned it. What do you think about their connection?
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
@seekjustice Hahaha! 😀 Poor Uncle Bill.
And now I’m wondering why I decided to delete that. Maybe it’s normal after all? 😛 Well…not normal. But yes, I do forget to eat a meal once in a while. And when I’m sick I really don’t feel like eating at all.
I think another problem might be that like Chara, I’m really little, so if I do lose…[Read more]
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
I meant a sign like this one:

My brother saw it and goes “Hey, there’s Uncle Bill!”
Yeah, I’ve done similar things before, like I was once sick for a weeks and ate barely anything and lost a whole lot of weight, and I’ve had trouble since then if I don’t eat regularly I get unwell and usually very dizzy.
The IV would definitely…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
He’s even got his picture on a post out in Kangaroo Valley
I’m sorry, but I’m not sure what you mean? 🙂 Are you talking about my character collage post?
Okay that’s perfect. 😀 *adds to future editing notes*
Yeah, she slept for about thirteen or fourteen hours besides the couple of hours at the hospital while she was unc…[Read more]
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
Uncle Bill is famous yes 😀 He’s even got his picture on a post out in Kangaroo Valley 🙂
Okay, so what I was thinking (as I was trying not to fall off a cliff) was that irrationality is a symptom of heat exhaustion/stroke, so maybe Uncle Bill tells her to walk back to the road and try to flag down a car, so she does, but when she…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
@jess-penrose Oh, that happens to me far too often. 🙁 Glad you’re back! And very glad you aren’t planning on letting Connor “drop dead.” That would be awful. I have enough to deal with trying to keep emotionally stable when reading SeekJustice’s book and I really don’t need to hear of any more characters dying. 😀 😀
@seekjustice Haha…[Read more]
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
Yes, I did 😀 It was very nice!
(Also, congratulations to Uncle Bill! Um…you want to hear a funny story about Uncle Bill? We went hiking on Wednesday, along an escarpment with no fence, but I was explaining to my sister about your story and the problem I was trying to work out about why Chara would walk along the road–which I…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
@seekjustice Hello again! Did you have fun?
I thought you had only one sibling? 😉 Or did you only tell me about one?
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
Hey, I’m back here now!
Thanks, it went really well and all the old people really loved it 😀 I do Scottish Highland dancing (Sword dancing, you know 🙂 ) I love writing at the library. It’s so quiet with no siblings 😀
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
@jess-penrose Oh, poor, poor Connor! 🙁 My MC just had a panic attack and passed out. Now she’s better, thankfully.
Here’s a clip from a while back right before she passes out:
As she looked out at the road all she could think of was Hot. It was so hot. Suddenly her mind flashed as though she was back on the road, stumbling, gasping, hop…
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
@jess-penrose Oh, whoops! haha. 😀
Well, I’m having the opposite problem that you have! 🙂 I’m a very slow writer, possibly because I took off two years in which I did basically no writing and only started up again a few months ago, so it’s taking me a while to get back in the swing. So I set a low goal for Camp NaNo, but I’m still behind a l…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
@jess-penrose Hello! How’s your book coming?
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
@seekjustice I’m back now. You’re probably not done yet, but I’m tagging you anyway in case. 😉
@jess-penrose Are you writing now?
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Conference Season Starting…Kapeefer Meetups in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
Oh, I forgot to tag people! 🙂
Let’s see… @jenwriter17 @catwing @dragon-snapper @skredder @alia @ariel-ashira @dekreel (I’m tagging people even if they’re on hiatus because the conferences are in real life, not on KP. 😉
If anyone can tag more people please do so! Thanks.
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
@seekjustice Actually, that’s fine, since I’ve got to help my family get ready and pack for a conference we have a ministry booth at tomorrow, so I’ll be back later too.
Have fun, and see you soon!
Oh good. 😉
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
I missed you and all our crazy conversations and debates too. 🙂
Unfortunately I’m just about to go to town to do a dance performance at the nursing home, but I should get some writing time at the library so I’ll tag you when I’m back and we might be able to have a word war 😉
I think you mentioned me several times, so rest assured 🙂
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