Louise Fowler

@seekjustice Hello!! 😀 😀  Why exactly are you triumphant, though?

How are you doing? (Besides feeling triumphant. 😉 )

@rochellaine @catwing

I’M HERE!!! I feel triumphant about that.

@catwing Hey!  What are you researching?

@seekjustice @valtmy @dekreel @catwing Anyone here?

@dekreel

Good night 😀

@seekjustice  Makes sense…

I think I’ll sign off now. Good to talk to you! Maybe I’ll see you tomorrow.

@dekreel

I’m not sure that I can really help on why they were sent there, it’s your story and I think you’ll have to work that out since I haven’t read it. As to magical powers though, there’s heaps of cool magic powers.

Like elemental powers, telekinesis, ice powers, healing powers, mind reading, weather control, teleportation, invisibility, m…[Read more]

@seekjustice  It’s tricky! You’re welcome. Yeah, I know what you mean. I’m glad I could help at least a little. 😀

Hey, can you help me figure something out? I’m going to introduce a couple new characters into my Aetherlight roleplay (which is like the Aetherlight version of the KPA) who are sent to Aethasia by… I dunno… their parents?…[Read more]

@dekreel

You’re not the first person to say that 😀 I definitely know that I have a problem with settings/worldbuilding (its like my writing kryptonite) and I’m planning on doing some serious work on that while my beta readers read it over and maybe give me some suggestions. That’s my plan for this August 🙂 Thank you for pointing it out again…[Read more]

@seekjustice  (Sorry it took so long to respond!!) I think you should describe the setting more. I mean, I get the idea that the story is set in futuristic Australia, but I feel like the descriptions aren’t… authentic enough. I don’t know exactly what you’d need to do to improve on it, but basically just make the setting and world more…[Read more]

@dekreel Apparently my reply didn’t post.

If it’s a longer suggestion, here would be fine! Otherwise, I don’t mind 😀

@seekjustice  I could really feel the emotion in it. You did well.

May I offer a suggestion? If so, should I do it here? In your doc? Somewhere else?

@rochellaine

Bye!

@dekreel Oooh, I’m glad you enjoyed it! That was a lot of fun to write that scene!

@rochellaine  Good night! Hope to see you tomorrow. Earlier in the night would be even better. XD

@seekjustice  I’m enjoying your book so far! I just finished reading over Justice’s riot in front of the town hall. It really made my heart pound.

@dekreel Cool!  I can’t wait to read it!

I will have to wait until tomorrow, though, even if you get it done tonight.  I’m leaving now. 🙁

Talk to you later.

@seekjustce Bye!

@dekreel That’s good news 😀

@rochellaine  I’ve finished beta-reading and now I’m working on the comical poem prompt you gave me. 😉

@seekjustice  I know, you just didn’t know I was here. 😉 Going pretty well!

@rochellaine Yeah they do, but apparently it doesn’t work all that well 😛

@dekreel Sorry, I wasn’t ignoring you 😀 How’s things? I’ve been going through your comments!

@dekreel Hi!!  I’m starting to get sleepy, though.  I’ll be here for a few more minutes.

What are you working on?

@rochellaine  @seekjustice  Heyyyy, I’m still here! 😉