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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
I like the poem too. It’s one of my favourites to recite and when we visited Barcoo I couldn’t stop myself, because everytime I hear the word Barcoo it gets stuck in my head. It’s “A Bush Christening” by Banjo Paterson, if you’re interested.
Okay dokey
Good night!
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
@seekjustice I see. 🙂 I love making up names!
Oh, wow. I love the rhythm of that poem!
Don’t worry. I’ve been going on tangents all night! 😛
Oh, that is strange. You need to try it out!! 😉 You should watch the pilot episode first, if possible, just to get the background, but then whatever order of episodes you want.
I’m leaving now. Goodnight!
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
Righto. Mooniji and Narara are the only ones I took straight from Australian towns, the rest are all some sort of mixing up.
Kalamooney was a mixture of Kala–which is a fairly common Aboriginal prefix and Mooney Mooney, which is an actual town, believe it or not.
Traumlant is actually the only one which isn’t Australian Aboriginal…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
@seekjustice Okay, I’m in an analyzation mood, so here’s my take on those names:
Moonaru and Mooniji have too much “moon” in them, and they make me think of moony romance or loony weirdness. (Yeah, sorry, couldn’t come up with a better phrase than “loony weirdness” which is sad, seeing as I’m a writer, but that’s life.)
Narara is too much of a…[Read more]
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
It’s basically about the princess/queen of said kingdom who is accused of being disconnected from her people, who are starving while she gambles away the kingdom’s money etc. So she orders a girl from the country to come and live with her and teach her about the ways of the people…
I’ve come up with a few different ideas,…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Cliches in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
@alia Haha, your idea reminds me of the Studio C episode where the Narrator has a fight with the protagonist. 😛 Have you seen that?
Let’s see… (I’ll copy @seekjustice‘s style of listing 😉 )
Villain Cliches:
- Male villain has a mustache
- Female villain is either the most beautiful woman in the world, or extremely ugly
- Villain’s voice…
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
@alia Yep!
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
Maybe cliché isn’t the right word, maybe archetype describes it better. Usually in terms of your characters, they fit quite neatly into the prearranged boxes, if you know what I mean? Maybe I just get confused because your stories are humorous and have clichés, so I tend to blend the two separate concepts together.
I quite enjoyed y…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
@alia 😀 😀 😀 😀
Sometimes, I suppose, I’m just in a rambling mood. And no matter what I write at those times, it always seems to turn out a ramble. But, at least it has amused you. 😉
How close or far from your character was the analyzation, really? I mean, if you already picked a name, you must have picked a character, right?
So, is th…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
@seekjustice @alia Forgive me, both of you. I believe I’m in a rambling mood tonight. I just totally rambled on for hours in my posts to both of you. 😛
I hope you don’t get too confused or bogged down in my mental spiderwebs. 😉
(How would you get “bogged down” in “spiderwebs?” I’ve always known I was horrible at symbolism, but this is really bad.)
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
@alia I often go into a book with one opinion of a name and come out with another opinion. If I originally hated a name, and the books hero had the name, I usually like the name afterwards, or the other way around. 😛
So basically, whatever you use it for, I think the name will mold itself to your character, in your readers’ eyes.
However, you…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
@seekjustice Oh, yes. I love cliches!!! But while I enjoy cliches being made fun of, I actually like real cliches used seriously. I guess…hm, what sort of cliches did I use in my short stories? 😛 I didn’t do it on purpose. I don’t mind if I did, I just never thought of it before. Are stupid doctors cliche? Valtmy seemed to think they…[Read more]
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
I thought you were a fan of clichés? (definitely most of your short stories have struck me as humorous cliché sort of stories) Maybe that’s just me. I definitely thought you liked anything cliché though.
That’s up to you. You just gave me a name with no context and I said the first thing that came into my head, but if the ch…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
@alia I’m not sure how clean they are…the one I read was fine, but that was just one that my mum suggested to me because it was based on The Phantom of the Opera, so you’d have to check that out more thoroughly.
Ceer brings to mind a “strong female character” sort of person. No nonsense, brisk, strong, but not necessarily heartless. Probably a…[Read more]
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
I’m not sure the names of his books, but he wrote a lot, I’ve only read one but he also tends to use clichés in humorous ways. My mum likes his books.
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
@alia That would actually be really funny! It reminds me of a book I once read where all the characters in the novel are actually just actors and everytime someone opens the book they have to play the novel out all over again, which of course, they hate.
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Cliches in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
All right…the clichés:
Villain clichés:
- villain always, always wears black. Maybe red, if they’re feeling adventurous.
- They tend to be rather tall and thin and have long fingers
- and hands which they rub together when they feel evil
- and a cackling laugh
- also must have a henchman who’s short
- fat
- stupid
- and refers to the v…
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
It could be interesting, clichés are fun to play with! @rochellaine likes doing clichés and making them humorous, so she might have some tips for you! My course of action tends to be killing them…violently. But they are a lot of fun to play with. Have you ever read anything by Terry Pratchett?
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
@alia Fun is the word to describe it…*rolls eyes and faints dramatically*
Awesome! Ah, I love clichés too. I use way too many of them.
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