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@godlyfantasy12

Ah! I love it. Here’s a few questions:

1) what time of year does the book start/span?

2) what type of things does Peter’s father invent?

3) have you made incorrect quotes for these charies yet?

@keilah0h popping on to say IT’S PRONOUNCED KAY-LUH….

*Insert embarrassed emoji….ducks back underground muttering to self. Falls and bangs into ground*

This was the logline I’d wrote for it too!

A Peter Pan retelling in a steampunk YA setting, about a boy who must learn that life is worth living despite the battles.

Of course, as my books always do, there’s a theme that deals with inner/mental struggles and battles. I have my own mental struggles and family members/friends who have the same,…[Read more]

ANYWAY!

Here is was my (I think? XD) Newest Blurb or at least one of the newest blurbs when I left this WIP

When Peter Barrie’s homeland, Everlin is taken over by a ruthless dictator, his life is turned upside down. When his parents are taken captive by the dictator, due to their father being an inventor, Peter and his little sister, Bell, are t…

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@loopylin NOT YOU TOO!!! NO…STOP!!! MY BRAIN CAN’T BRAIN THIS….

@hybridlore @whalekeeper  @loopylin @elishave-pidyon @esther-c @koshka

First…GANG I’M SO SORRY I LEGIT POSTED AND THEN LEFT YALL XD

2. WHALEY WHAT THE….U ARE CONFUSING ME SO BAD XD XD XDDDDD

Foremost, I do have a blurb! Now, just to let yall know, this stuff is old because it’s a WIP I started/worked on years ago, so the Blurb is old, and…[Read more]

Subscribing as well!

@godlyfantasy12

Aha! *subscribing*

A blurb would be good! Then of course a good intro to the Main Characters, because I really liked their aesthetics and want to know what they have to say for themselves.

@rae

*erupts from the shadows*

AH! I love them all!!!

Both of “Barons’s” works are exquisite. I really like the cat eye. Both have have so much character in them.

The kiddo is adorable! His little hands… just so precious.

Dante is incredible. I have only once done a cyclops-like thing, and it was in a “Pembric’s Creaturepedia” style so I…[Read more]

@whalekeeper @loopylin

WHAT HAVE YOU TWO DONE?? XD

That’s just plain brilliance. Disastrous indeed, but brilliant nonetheless.

@whalekeeper  @loopylin

Welp. This has taken a while. I’m gonna do something though…

By the way, what does Brea look like again? She’s sounding a lot like Nadian, who has black curls, a dusky rose-olive complexion, and dark brown eyes. Basically a little girl version of Viktor but with their mother’s facial structure. Alyona favors their…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Okay! I’m currently waiting for a class to start, but I’ll RP afterwards if Whaley hasn’t yet. =)

@ellette-giselle

*Nods*

*Is concerned because that’s exactly what Helmer always says*

*Doesn’t know if Helmer drank much tea, but offers it anyway*

@ellette-giselle

Yay!!

How are you doing today?

@ellette-giselle

Ah, I see. How is this?

“An elf lord who employs orcs.” he straightened to face Travenor. They stared at each other for a long moment while the rest of us stood in suspense. Well, not me. I knew.

“For the love of life!” Travenor spun to kick the body again, eyes flashing steel grey. He stepped across to Onnendel. “It was him.”…

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@liberty

Erm…….he probably thinks that’s great…..

*Whips around towards door and screams*

Ellette, what have you been saying?!

XD

@liberty

Yay!

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*Half-heartedly glares at Ellette*

Hush.

XD

Also….

Why would Onnendel be sending orcs to hunt his own band? And then give himself away by a notable device on his minions’ uniforms?

@ellette-giselle

OOOOOOPS. Sorry for the unclarified pronoun. How is this?

“Him!” Travenor spun to kick the body again, eyes flashing steel grey. He stepped across to Onnendel. “It was Him. Bân-Sercëon.” He spat out the name in a half-voiced growl.

Onnendel did not move. He simply gazed at Travenor with his clouded eyes and a gravity that ache…

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