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@elishavet-pidyon I think I’m gonna have Jocelyn and Nyx run into Ocran and then maybe they be like OKIE BAI if they realize he’s bad or something lol

Jocelyn & Nyx

“Hey, check it out! Light that isn’t from candles!” Lyn pointed to one of the windows beside her.

The duo had been climbing a spiral staircase for a while before ever reaching…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Exactly!!! XD

Plus, having Viktor right here, kinda represents how the kingdom of Eirtan is continuing right under his very nose. Bwahahaha!

@elishavet-pidyon cuz we can always defeat him and yeet him out of the castle XD

maybe he doesn’t own it, but he found it and was like “OH HEY FREE STRONGHOLD!! YA KNOW XD

@elishavet-pidyon

OOH I LOVE THIS IDEA where it’s actually like “his” castle kind, but like he’s using it as a stronghold and he hasn’t just “appeared there” so ye…that’s awesome cuz we kinda needed someone for the brothers to fight ROFL

@godlyfantasy12 @koshka @everyone-else

Crazy idea: what if the castle belongs to Ocran!?

@godlyfantasy12

Ocran

Ocran strode down the length of the corridor, halting before a narrow door.

Walking helped take his mind off the rumors.

Oh, the foolish people! Did they think he didn’t hear their murmurings? Their whispered hopes?

He spat.

They aught to know better, the Eagle had fallen, the Hawk was crippled. The ashes of the heirs…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon poor Viktor XD

@koshka

ALRIGHTY SO LETS GET THIS SHOW ON THE ROAD!!!

….SOMEHOW 🤣

Arabella & November

They’d been walking for a while, opening different doors only to reveal more hallways, or various rooms that didn’t seem to get them any closer to their destination: outside. November hoped the brothers weren’t getting…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Or nicer. He’s less two-faced, and only encourages people to betray and warp each other after his great success in the first because the latter failed for him.

If that made sense.

It is interesting though, Zlatan’s story is set up a little different as although there is a ‘villian’ who initiates most of his problems, Zlatan is his own antagonist.

His name btw, means ‘Golden one’.

@koshka yea I’ve got trauma….XD

@elishavet-pidyon

BONIFER SQUOON SHRIEK…..*throws stuff against the wall and throws tantrum!!!*

I. LOATHE. HIM.

I how can he be LESS NICE?!?! Bonfire squoon is a sick monster….

ahem….anyway….those books crushed my soul, ignore my rant.

@godlyfantasy12

Aw, poor girl. That does sound like a good plot point.

Do I do that? Nah, only have major ‘what is truth?’ and ‘what have I done?’ issues planned for my MCs, so nothing overly tramatic. XD

@godlyfantasy12

Wow…she definitely sounds interesting. Let’s give it a try, shall we?

Although, my “villain” is around 30 years of age, and a bit of the Bonifer Squoonish type, just less nice. He’s the military governor of the Dorwain province of Eirtan.

Just that last sentence makes me want to call the eagles.

*Realizes that only makes…[Read more]

@koshka yea, As of rn, in book one I’m thinking when that happens it leads into Ara’s dark moment. She already struggles with insecurity but when November gets hurt and she feels it’s because of her, and then it’s opens her up to all these feelings of hate and anger it kinda brings her to her low point.

@godlyfantasy12

I noticed those color combinations had some sort of effect on her. The puzzle pieces are clicking.

@koshka yay for skirts!!!

@godlyfantasy12

And cheers for skirt-girls!(being one myself) I’m relishing that.

@koshka also Corvina means Raven-haired, that’s why her name is corvina (: kinda random fact but yea lol

@koshka YES that was the black hair thing! I’m glad u picked up on that!!

so Corvina’s the one who scratched November, in her Raven form. And it was actually supposed to be Ara but November pushed her away. And November and Corvina was greatly affected by it due to a spoiler later in the books…..so the blood red cape, and his hair, and he wa…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

She’s great!

Oohh, so that’s why Ara was so flumuxed by Zlatan’s black hair. Hmmm, many those two should meet. Zlatan with charcoal black hair, golden eyes, and a mildly-pessimistic-yet-somehow-idealistic nature, and your dear antagonist Corvina whith her whole set of problems. Especially if Elishavet’s villian gets in too.

This…[Read more]