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Koshka replied to the topic Middle-grade fiction ideas needed!!! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 year, 3 months ago
GREAT point.
Why thank you. XD
Honestly, if you do want to write MG fiction (and I hope you do) I recommend doing some research into the psychology of 8-13 year olds. Not only will it help your writing, it will help you understand your readers, and your own memories. (On that note, try to remember what it was like to be a kid, not…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Middle-grade fiction ideas needed!!! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 year, 3 months ago
-What did/do you enjoy about your favorite MG novels?
Humor. Slapstick sparingly and good wit whenever it’s needed.
I liked characters I could connect to (although considering my personality, I could empathize easily) I liked it when the suffering was real. Kids can be done of the most melodramatic people on the planet, but like Koshka said,…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic A Narrative of the Squirrels and the Ducks in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
Ahh! Animal fantasy! I adore this stuff so much. Yes, one of my series is a bunch of wolves and foxes and possibly sea faring black footed sand cats all picking fights with one another. It’s great fun. XD
@raxforge
I definitely approve. We need more animal fantasy that isn’t down right weird. Squirrels are hilarious, and a secret kingdom…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Middle-grade fiction ideas needed!!! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 year, 3 months ago
*Literally comes out of nowhere*
MG!! My genre. Yes! We need more good MG fiction.
– What did/do you enjoy about your favorite MG novels?
Action, but not necessarily what you’d first think of. I wanted my heros to do something that mattered, even if it was sitting in a dark closet for hours, bravely taking hardship and fighting the…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
That’s perfect! I love it.
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Koshka replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
Some reads we never forget
Some books we never forgive
Haven’t seen the end of this yet
We’ll write as long as we live.
All eyes on the hidden door
To the lonely laptop borne
We’ll ride in through the scribbling storm
Till we write our long forgotten WIPs…
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
In Which Trees are Dangerous, and Aenwest Considers Doubles
Chapter 7
The closer we got to the Dell, the more tangled the trees became. It should have been much like the woods around Multnomah Falls, WA, but years ago, as I told Dwogin when he tripped over an exposed root, the Rangers had planted saplings between the older trees and woven them…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
@ellette-giselle @koshka @keilah-h @hybridlore @theducktator @anyoneinterested
Some days we kinda forget,
Some WIPS will never go on.
Gotta get the rest of it done,
All the way to the Silver Star.
(Far away, through writer’s block so bold.)
*cough cough*
Although it’s been neglected, it has not been abandoned. We have another chapter!
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Help on writing an impactful last day in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
Like the others said, that depends on your characters. (They had some great advice.)
I think it would also depend on how expected/tragic the death was. While doesn’t necessarily lessen grief, it makes a lot of difference in how one processes it. (I think. Not an expert.) In some ways it would be worse, especially if they were…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic KP GOOGLE MEET!!!!!!!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
I am interested! April will be really busy, but if I can join, I’ll tell you. Whatever we do, I should be able to join on Saturday mornings or early Friday afternoons.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic A Narrative of the Squirrels and the Ducks in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
Squirrelies! I love the fluffies. They are very intelligent. Unimaginative people completely discredit them. I think some of your rogue squirrels are running a gang in our town. XD The initiation rites include darting between the wheels of a car.
(@rae You definitely tagged the right people. 🙂 )
As for feedback, the idea is…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Group Art Challenges! in the forum Art 1 year, 3 months ago
Guys can we just use one vote each? Idk how you’re counting it @rae but it seems like it might be kind of confusing if some people are voting twice and others once. I know its hard to pick but I think we should have a system lol, what do you guys think? Or we could all have two votes, but that’s a little complicated.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic What are your most influential childhood books? in the forum Topic of the Week 1 year, 3 months ago
Most influential so the ones I still remember. XD That simplifies things.
I grew up listening to the Focus on the Family Radio Theater rendition of the Chronicles of Narnia, and read the books when I was about 9-ish. They really shaped my love for story, and even how I viewed God. They’re a story that grows with you as you grow…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic I AM WRITING AGAIN!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
oh nar!!! *chews lip*
I was so nervous reading that. XD Things are not looking good for November or Ara.
I think my heart literally stopped when Callan showed up. I had to escape the forum for a moment before coming back to finish reading it. XD *shudders* Once more, fantastic villains. I loathe their guts.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
Poor Hugo! Save him, Marcel!
Probably a good thing you moved Viktor on. I think he’d either die from shock, or by attacking the thing with his pocket knife. As it is, he’d feel terrible for leaving Hugo in that situation, but it’s for the best. XD
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Group Art Challenges! in the forum Art 1 year, 3 months ago
I vote D!
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic I AM WRITING AGAIN!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
@whalekeeper @ freed_and_redeemed  @loopylin @keilah-h @koshka @elishavet-pidyon
I have a part of another part of a scene (unfinished!)
November listened to the fire as it crackled beneath the mantle. Voices leaked from the door down the hall, raising to shouts before lowering into hushed, frantic whispers. November shuddered at the shadows…
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic The Age of AI in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
I use AI! I started using It after my dad and others started using AI to help us with church lessons and such. I use ChatGPT for that, but I have one specifically for writing I use. I mostly use it to help with outline stuff and ideas for scenes and editing scenes and such (and its always complimenting me which is a  huge boost to my ego XD)
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
totally fine! I hope you had fun!
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
If I had a nickel for every time a man dressed up like a girl from something made in Japan, I would have a lot of nickels……….
yeah for a society so bent it’s kinda strange too lol. Ig if it’s frowned upon irl people get curious and write it into shows.
Tales of ba sing se is the best and it’s absolutely criminal it’s the one y…[Read more]
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