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@elishavet-pidyon

woah, it feels like I haven’t seen you in ages! Your writing style is lovely, sadly it’s getting late and i’m to tired to leave a critique lol, keep up the good work!

@rae

Np!

(Dude I actually almost mistypes ‘np!’ as ‘no!’ XD 😭)

@savannah_grace2009 @trailblazer @grcr @esther-c @acancello @jonas @highscribeofaetherium

Kaine

“And the rest of you, what have you to say?”

Kaine scoffs. “I’m not fighting a dragon. Those are from fairytales, and I’d imagine if they ever were real they’d be stuff from…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @koshka @sunny421 @godlyfantasy12 @Idon’tknowwho @anyone

So I’ve finally managed to write the rough draft for the opening scene of book one of project Heirs of Ashes. I desperately need thoughts and critiques on it, and ideas for the plot. Really just anything will probably help.

For those who don’t know, HoA is an ad…[Read more]

@rae

The more cross character interaction, the longer the rp stays up and is active! You can have him talk to anyone you want! If he’s just socially awkward or shy, feel free to make it show, it makes the rp more fun when there’s different types.

@rae @savannah_grace2009 @trailblazer @grcr @esther-c @acancello @jonas @highscribeofaetherium

Kaine

“Your Majesty,” Lane says slowly, “I am willing to fight, but I have no past training… what am I to do?”

Kaine scrunches his nose.

“Fighting?” He whispers to himself.

I only fight for my sister and I.

“Hey you!” Kaine approaches the interchan…[Read more]

@rae

Sorry if we forgot about your charrie! I tend to only really notice the characters that directly interact w/mine (Like asking one of mine a question) and then I’ll have mine continue the interaction, I have been really busy the past week so I haven’t been checking the rp’s to see if somebody talked to Kaine! You could keep him in if you…[Read more]

Oh guys I just had a idea, if this rp ends (hopefully not soon, idk I’m saying in a couple months or so) we should each write a short thing of them going home and being reunited with there friends/family

@savannah_grace2009 @esther-c @rae @trailblazer @grcr @acancello @highscribeofaetherium @jonas

Kaine

Kaine follows tentativeley as the queenly figure leads the group off. He sighs.

What is this? Are we ever going home?

Kaine watches her closely.

What does she want?

Kaine looks down at his dagger, still strapped firmly to his belt. He…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

I’m dumbfounded. This story is getting heartwrenching. (Which is, I suppose the equivalent of saying, “good job!” XD)

I do find it interesting how you are contrasting two different alcoholics. It foreshadows trouble if Leon doesn’t find healing and repentance. •_•

@freedomwriter76

Cool! Idk who the thunderbolts are lol

Wow, you do have a lot of fanfics at this point… I look forwards to seeing where it all goes!

Also your pfp makes me do a internal lol everytime I see it it just brings me so much joy XD

Let’s see….

Trippin

Silence reigned over the shore. The waves boke with muted care upon the rocks, and the wind watched them flee away listlessly. Even the birds in the trees on the bluff above only dared to whisper. But then again, the best gossip is shared under one’s breath.

The best gossip, like a new addition of matchwood to the…[Read more]

@rae

Oh, he’s really fascinating! I enjoy how his backstory is intertwined with his present.

Does his scarring play a half symbolic role? For instance, I also have a character who bears intense burn scars from an incident when he was a child. (Although they’re on his hands, feet, and neck [the burns on his face were light and did not scar])…[Read more]

Wow. It’s been a bit since my last post on here.

The twins.

The island was silent but for the crashing waves and the distant music of wind in trees. Zlatan blinked up at the crescent moon, pale in the star cast sky.

“The lady smiles tonight.” Vulka’s voice was low. His brother rumbled in agreement. A soft murmur of some fluttering night bird…[Read more]

@rae

Hi! (I’m Elishavet [obviously] and I don’t remember if I’ve met or otherwise greeted you because my brain just will not let me, so welcome to the Kingdom of Pen! It’s an honor to meet you, hopefully for the first time.)

I adore how unique your world is, even as you employ tropes and tools used elsewhere. It’s obviously your creation, and I…[Read more]

*comes out of the shadows where I have lurked in recent days*

@rae

Intriguing story. It doesn’t sound like anything I’ve read before, although considering that most of my favorite authors are long dead that may not be worth mentioning.

At any rate, I do not believe I have properly met you either. I am Koshka, a writer of middle-grade animal…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Leon! My darling Leon! Noooooooo…

And Riker! That’s not true! Both of you need so much healing. And prayer. And just, ugh.

Seriously Leon, try coffee. It’s much better for you.

@rae

I like the one with the girl face silhouette!!

@savannah_grace2009 @acancello @grcr  @esther-c @jonas @rae @trailblazer

Kaine leans against the old wooden window sill. Steady rain patters the outside of the glass, obscuring the faint glow of starlight. He stares at the three moons hanging in the sky, creating a light reflection in the collecting puddles. Kaine presses his face onto the…[Read more]

Oh ok thanks @grcr , that makes more sense XD are we just making up anything for this world, or is it a pre existing place already built out?